~Tumse Muhabbat Toh Nahin (Shikha)~

by Shikha12 on November 17, 2008, 12:18:04 PM
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«Reply #60 on: December 23, 2008, 01:19:28 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 03:48:27 AM



Mahiya ji kya khoobsurat kavita likhi hein aapne,vaakai dil baag-baag ho gaya.aapki rachnao men aksar quality apne charam pur dekhi jaa sakti hein,aur isliye aapko kum pudh paane ka kabhi afsoos nahi zaahir kar sakte. Jaanta hu,kavita agar kalaatmak bhee chaahiye hume to sabr rakhna hi padega! Main kabhi bhee aapse adhik ya bahut adhik likhne ke liye nahi kahunga pur haan jub likho to aisa...ki ek ek pankti boley...aur kavita ki sugandh si tarh failey.Bahut khoob likha hein Mahiya ji.kaabil-e-taareef!

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 04:18:52 AM
Mahiya ji-yeh accha tanj thaa...khud pur hansi aa gayi mujhko bhee!
-itni modesty bhee theek nahi,itna khoobsurat likne ke baad to itraana chahiye mehfil mein,aapka haq hein!

Prateek Ji, Kisi ko hawa mein udnaa ho, toh aapse comment ki guzarish karni chahiye..  icon_geek
Waise tareef kuch jyaada hi ho gayi, lekin chalo, kabhi kabhi mili tareef kise achhi nahin lagti... Usual Smile
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #61 on: December 23, 2008, 01:23:09 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 23, 2008, 01:15:22 PM
Waah Waah... bahut khoob Azeem.. Applause

Shukriya Shikha Ji,.
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«Reply #62 on: December 23, 2008, 01:24:14 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 19, 2008, 03:36:25 PM
Dosto!
Gahraaiyoun mein doob key darya-e-dard kee,
Paatee hai sukoon-e-jigar jo, shaayarah hai woh!
Haan, Mahiya to Mahiya hai, maahi-e-beytaab,
Lutf-e-sukhan ki maahir-e-fan shaayarah hai woh!
                            - abd bundeli


Abd Ji.. Hamaare shabdkosh mein toh itne shabd bhi nahin ki aapki tareef kar sakein...

Aap ka har ek comment kisi anmol heere sa keemti lagta hai..
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne, yakeen nahin hota itna khoobsurat koi ham adna-jano ke liye bhi likh sakta hai..  drunken_smilie

Bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriya Abd Ji..
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«Reply #63 on: December 23, 2008, 02:48:24 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 23, 2008, 01:24:14 PM
Abd Ji.. Hamaare shabdkosh mein toh itne shabd bhi nahin ki aapki tareef kar sakein...
Aap ka har ek comment kisi anmol heere sa keemti lagta hai..
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne, yakeen nahin hota itna khoobsurat koi ham adna-jano ke liye bhi likh sakta hai..  drunken_smilie
Bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriya Abd Ji..
Mahiya ji!
Kash mein saamney hota, to deykhtaa, kitnaa
Bahr gahraa hai tasawwur kaa, us kee aankhoun mein,
Jis key dil mein hai rawaan dard-o-ishq kaa dariyaa,
Jo naheen qaid raheygaa, 'abd', salaakhoun mein!
            Shukraguzaar hoon!     
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«Reply #64 on: December 23, 2008, 02:51:43 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 23, 2008, 01:16:19 PM
Good Reply Jasbir Ji..  Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley


Thanks Mahiya


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«Reply #65 on: December 24, 2008, 04:27:25 PM »
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NIce One Abd Bhai,.
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«Reply #66 on: December 25, 2008, 02:42:27 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 17, 2008, 12:18:04 PM
Please Bear With My Bad Habit Of Writing Long Poems..





Mahiya Ji...   Really Very Beautiful Nazam  Applause Applause
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«Reply #67 on: December 25, 2008, 04:46:04 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 17, 2008, 12:18:04 PM
Please Bear With My Bad Habit Of Writing Long Poems..





I am Speechless..ek ek lafz iss Kavita ka kuch keh raha tha..
Mahiya, This is one of the best poems i have read in khumar-e-ishq..par maafi is baat ke liye chahunga ki bahut der baad iss kavita par nazar gayi..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Mahiya.. Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause
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«Reply #68 on: December 25, 2008, 04:56:53 AM »
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Ek Nazm Share Karna Chuhnga aap sab se,

Teri khushi se agar Gham mein bhi Khushi na hui
Woh Zindagi to Mohabbat ki Zindagi Na hui

Saba yeh unse hamara payaam keh dena
Gaye ho jabse,yahan subeh-shaam hi na hui...

Khyaal-e-yaar Salamat Tujhe Khuda Rakhe
Tere Baighair kisi Ghar mein Roshni Na Hui...
    -Jigar muaradabadi-
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«Reply #69 on: December 25, 2008, 05:24:39 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 24, 2008, 04:27:25 PM
NIce One Abd Bhai,.
Thanks for your kind comments, Jaanasheen ji!
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«Reply #70 on: December 25, 2008, 05:38:21 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 25, 2008, 04:56:53 AM
Ek Nazm Share Karna Chuhnga aap sab se,

Teri khushi se agar Gham mein bhi Khushi na hui
Woh Zindagi to Mohabbat ki Zindagi Na hui

Saba yeh unse hamara payaam keh dena
Gaye ho jabse,yahan subeh-shaam hi na hui...

Khyaal-e-yaar Salamat Tujhe Khuda Rakhe
Tere Baighair kisi Ghar mein Roshni Na Hui...
    -Jigar muaradabadi-
khwaish ji!
Un kee khushee mein, meyraa gam bhi muskuraa uthhaa!
Aankhoun mein chamak deykh, huyee dil mein roshnee!!
Woh khush raheyn, to, gam mujhey sataayegaa naheen;
Taahashra, kaash, yaar kee khushee rahey banee!
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«Reply #71 on: December 25, 2008, 02:14:10 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 18, 2008, 06:31:29 AM

SHUKRIYA AZEEM & VERY NICE REPLY,

WELLDONE MAHIYA JI, LIKE ALWAYS THIS
THREAD IS ALSO SUPERB!!!!

KEEP GOING DEAR...

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TUMSE MOHABBAT TO NAHI HAAN MAGAR KHAWAABO
KI GALI HOTI HAI ROSHAN TUJHSE HI...

TUMSE MOHABBAT TO NAHI HAAN MAGAR DHADKANO
ME KHANAK HOTI HAI TERE EHSASO KI HI...

TUMSE MOHABBAT TO NAHI HAAN MAGAR PAAYAL
CHANAK JAATI HAI SUNKE TERI AAHAT HI...

TUMSE MOHABBAT TO NAHI HAAN MAGAR AANKHON
ME ANJAANI SI NAMMI HAI TERI HI...

TUMSE MOHABBAT TO NAHI HAAN MAGAR TUJHE SOCHTE
SOCHTE HO JAATI HAI MOHABBAT KHUD SE HI...

"TUMSE MOHABBAT NA DENE KA GILA TO NAHI,
KISMAT ME NAHI THA JO WO HAME MILA NAHI"



Bahut Khoob shally..bahut acha likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #72 on: December 25, 2008, 02:18:02 PM »
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sab ne yahan bahut khoob likha hai,
Azeem Bro, bekararji, muskaan,jasbirji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #73 on: December 25, 2008, 02:18:46 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 25, 2008, 04:56:53 AM
Ek Nazm Share Karna Chuhnga aap sab se,

Teri khushi se agar Gham mein bhi Khushi na hui
Woh Zindagi to Mohabbat ki Zindagi Na hui

Saba yeh unse hamara payaam keh dena
Gaye ho jabse,yahan subeh-shaam hi na hui...

Khyaal-e-yaar Salamat Tujhe Khuda Rakhe
Tere Baighair kisi Ghar mein Roshni Na Hui...
    -Jigar muaradabadi-

a very good sharing khwaish ji
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«Reply #74 on: December 25, 2008, 02:20:13 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 19, 2008, 03:36:25 PM
Dosto!
Gahraaiyoun mein doob key darya-e-dard kee,
Paatee hai sukoon-e-jigar jo, shaayarah hai woh!
Haan, Mahiya to Mahiya hai, maahi-e-beytaab,
Lutf-e-sukhan ki maahir-e-fan shaayarah hai woh!
                            - abd bundeli





Kya baat hai abdji!! bahut khoob...
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