~Tumse Muhabbat Toh Nahin (Shikha)~

by Shikha12 on November 17, 2008, 12:18:04 PM
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«Reply #90 on: January 02, 2009, 02:12:54 PM »
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Mahiya ji!
Kash mein saamney hota, to deykhtaa, kitnaa
Bahr gahraa hai tasawwur kaa, us kee aankhoun mein,
Jis key dil mein hai rawaan dard-o-ishq kaa dariyaa,
Jo naheen qaid raheygaa, 'abd', salaakhoun mein!


Shukraguzaar hoon!     
                              - abd bundeli


It really brought a smile, It really felt so good... Usual Smile
Shukriya Abd Ji... For your very kind gesture..
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«Reply #91 on: January 02, 2009, 02:14:46 PM »
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Mahiya Ji...   Really Very Beautiful Nazam  Applause Applause

Thanks so much Deepati Ji..   notworthy
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«Reply #92 on: January 02, 2009, 02:18:47 PM »
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Ek Nazm Share Karna Chuhnga aap sab se,

Teri khushi se agar Gham mein bhi Khushi na hui
Woh Zindagi to Mohabbat ki Zindagi Na hui

Saba yeh unse hamara payaam keh dena
Gaye ho jabse,yahan subeh-shaam hi na hui...

Khyaal-e-yaar Salamat Tujhe Khuda Rakhe
Tere Baighair kisi Ghar mein Roshni Na Hui...
    -Jigar muaradabadi-


Very Nice Sharing... Bahut hi pyaari nazm hai.. Usual Smile
Thanks a lot for bringing this lovely piece of work... Khwaish Ji..

wah wah, kya baat kahi hai abd ji aapne... Applause Applause

Kuch Suurile geet hum aaj gungunaane lage,
Woh Jo Yuh Muskuraane lage...

Unke Chehre par Khili Hui muskaan ko dekh kar,
Hum Bhi yuh Muskuraate reh gaye,
Ab Hosh Aane mein "KHWAISH"
Humein Shayad, Zamaane Lage...

Ab Haal Yeh hai ki Jashn-e-mehfilo mein bhi,
Tujh bin, Tanha Sa Reh Jaata Hoon,
Ab Dost Bhi Mujhe Tera Deewana Kehkar Sataane Lage...

Jahan Par Bhi Yeh Nazar Jaaye,
Waha Par Tu Hi Tu Nazar aaye,
Jab Kehta hoon yeh Baat apne Mehbboob se,
Woh Kehte Hai,"Ab Phir Tum Baate Banane Lage"

Ab Kya Kahoon, Mohabbat Mein,
Kya Haal-e-dil Hai Apna "Khwaish"
Humein To Ab Din Mein Bhi Taare Nazar aane Lage....


I am Speechless..ek ek lafz iss Kavita ka kuch keh raha tha..
Mahiya, This is one of the best poems i have read in khumar-e-ishq..par maafi is baat ke liye chahunga ki bahut der baad iss kavita par nazar gayi..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Mahiya.. Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause


And You Left Me Speechless..
Bahut bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Khwaish Ji..  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #93 on: January 02, 2009, 02:20:11 PM »
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khwaish ji!
Un kee khushee mein, meyraa gam bhi muskuraa uthhaa!
Aankhoun mein chamak deykh, huyee dil mein roshnee!!
Woh khush raheyn, to, gam mujhey sataayegaa naheen;
Taahashra, kaash, yaar kee khushee rahey banee!
                              - abd bundeli



Waah... Kya baat hai... Abd Ji..
Ek baar phir.. Bahut Khoobsurat..  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #94 on: January 02, 2009, 02:22:49 PM »
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Ye Hadein Na Tod Dena, Mere Dayre Mein Rehna,
Mujhe Apne Dil Mein Rakhna, Mere Haafze Mein Rehna,

Mera Bojh Khud Uthana, Mera Qarb Aap Sehna,
Mere ZakhM Baant Lena, Mere Rat-Jage Mein Rehna,

Mera Huqb Khood Sunna, Meri Mohr Khood Lagana,
Mere Mashware Mein Hona, Mere Faisle Mein Rehna,

Kabhi Manzilon Ki Soorat Meri Dastaras Se Bahar,
Kabhi Sang-E-Mel Ban Kar Mere Raste Mein Rehna,

Mere Haath Ki Lakeerein, Tera NaaM Banke ChaMke,
Meri Khwahishon Ki Khushbu, Mere Za'iche Mein Rehna...

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Wow... Just Perfect..  Applause  Applause
Bahut hi khoobsurat nazam le kar aaye hai aap Azeem...
Thanks a lot for sharing this with us... Usual Smile
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«Reply #95 on: January 02, 2009, 05:36:28 PM »
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«Reply #96 on: January 03, 2009, 04:26:46 AM »
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Waah... Kya baat hai... Abd Ji..
Ek baar phir.. Bahut Khoobsurat..  Applause  Applause
Thanks a lot, Mahiya ji!
              - abd bunceli
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«Reply #97 on: January 03, 2009, 04:30:06 AM »
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It really brought a smile, It really felt so good... Usual Smile
Shukriya Abd Ji... For your very kind gesture..
Mahiya ji! It was a pleasure! You're welcome!
                          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #98 on: January 07, 2009, 01:10:35 PM »
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Shukriya Mahiya Didi,.
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«Reply #99 on: October 06, 2011, 04:21:29 AM »
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EXCELLENT SHAYRI SHIKHA
KAASH MAI BHI IS TARAH LIKH PAATA YA KOI MUJHE ITNI MOHABBAT KARTA KE WO MERE LIYE ITNI ACHI GHAZAL LIKHTA AAPKI LONG GHAZAL DIL SE HOTI HUI PEHLE DIMMAG TAK PAHUNCHI AUR PHIR SEENE SE PAAR NIKAL GAYI.HO SAKE TO MERI MEHBOOBA KE LIYE KUCH LIKH DI JIYE WO MERI MOHABBAT PE AITBAAR NAHI KARTI HAI,MERE ANDAR ITNI SALAIYAT NAHI KE AAP JAISI GHAZAL LIKH SAKOO,,,,,

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