ub bhi muhabbat meree baqee hai

by anjaan dharkan on January 14, 2009, 04:49:12 PM
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ub bhi kahaan chalay? ub bhi tho raat puree baaqee hai,
fiza mein tufaan, aankon mein barsaat bhi baqee hai.

khushk hojai jub dareeya ye, tho hum khudse tumko riha kardaengay,
ub bhi beto tho sahee, ub bhi tho baat humaree baaqee hai.

aakhree sanson pe dil utka huwa hai, haath thaam lo mera,
kahaan chaldeeyay aansoon bahtay bahtay tum? unnhe roko, ub bhi tho aakhree aahatt meree baaqee hai!

Haan, such hai k mar rahaa hoon main, haan such hai, k darr rahaa hoon main,
tho tehro na, mera hossla badranay k leeyaen, iss modr pe saath na chohdro mera, main nahee, tho ub bhi tho umar bhar k leeyaen, muhabbat meree baqee hai!
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2009, 08:27:52 PM »
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koi comment do plz! pehlee baar muhje upna lihka kuch pasand aaya hai, aur issee pe koi comment nahi dey raha?
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2009, 08:36:24 PM »
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ub bhi kahaan chalay? ub bhi tho raat puree baaqee hai,
fiza mein tufaan, aankon mein barsaat bhi baqee hai.

khushk hojai jub dareeya ye, tho hum khudse tumko riha kardaengay,
ub bhi beto tho sahee, ub bhi tho baat humaree baaqee hai.

aakhree sanson pe dil utka huwa hai, haath thaam lo mera,
kahaan chaldeeyay aansoon bahtay bahtay tum? unnhe roko, ub bhi tho aakhree aahatt meree baaqee hai!

Haan, such hai k mar rahaa hoon main, haan such hai, k darr rahaa hoon main,
tho tehro na, mera hossla badranay k leeyaen, iss modr pe saath na chohdro mera, main nahee, tho ub bhi tho umar bhar k leeyaen, muhabbat meree baqee hai!


wah ANJAAN, bahut gehri poem aap ney likh di hai ...

KU ITNEY DARD SINEY MEH LIYE BAITHEY HO
KYA BAAT HAI , KU ITNEY DARD MEH BAITHEY HO


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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2009, 08:42:26 PM »
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Wow! Nice one Anjaan
Kuch achachi daud lagaaye ho
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2009, 08:44:38 PM »
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Wow! Nice one Anjaan
Kuch achachi daud lagaaye ho

srry, samhaj nahee aaya, but thx! zara explain...?
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 10:03:38 PM »
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srry, samhaj nahee aaya, but thx! zara explain...?
Mera matlab tha ki aap bade rahtaar se aage badh rahe hai
aur achchi tarah se badh rahe hain
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2009, 11:42:55 PM »
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Mera matlab tha ki aap bade rahtaar se aage badh rahe hai
aur achchi tarah se badh rahe hain
o... thank you so much! means alot jub koi yun comment deyta hai tho!
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2009, 11:43:42 PM »
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wah ANJAAN, bahut gehri poem aap ney likh di hai ...

KU ITNEY DARD SINEY MEH LIYE BAITHEY HO
KYA BAAT HAI , KU ITNEY DARD MEH BAITHEY HO


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thank you jasbir... (no comment) Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2009, 01:59:23 AM »
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bahut khoob Anjani dear  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2009, 06:27:02 AM »
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kya baat hai ...anjaan-dharkanji.....

kahan chal diye,ab toh raat baqee hai,
dil ka tufaan uthna baqee hai.
kal ka kya barosa,kal hum na ho,ya tum na ho,ya yeh mausam na ho,
lagi hai jo dil mein aag ,us aag mein jalnaa baqee hai.
gar mein thak gaya,toh riha kardenge tumhe,
warnaa irada toh, puree raat ka katna baqee hai.
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2009, 09:04:07 AM »
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thank you jasbir... (no comment) Usual Smile

why no comment anjaan

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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2009, 09:05:20 AM »
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kya baat hai ...anjaan-dharkanji.....

kahan chal diye,ab toh raat baqee hai,
dil ka tufaan uthna baqee hai.
kal ka kya barosa,kal hum na ho,ya tum na ho,ya yeh mausam na ho,
lagi hai jo dil mein aag ,us aag mein jalnaa baqee hai.
gar mein thak gaya,toh riha kardenge tumhe,
warnaa irada toh, puree raat ka katna baqee hai.

wah cara, kya baat hai

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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 09:07:25 AM »
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Nice.......
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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2009, 09:26:58 AM »
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ub bhi kahaan chalay? ub bhi tho raat puree baaqee hai,
fiza mein tufaan, aankon mein barsaat bhi baqee hai.

khushk hojai jub dareeya ye, tho hum khudse tumko riha kardaengay,
ub bhi beto tho sahee, ub bhi tho baat humaree baaqee hai.

aakhree sanson pe dil utka huwa hai, haath thaam lo mera,
kahaan chaldeeyay aansoon bahtay bahtay tum? unnhe roko, ub bhi tho aakhree aahatt meree baaqee hai!

Haan, such hai k mar rahaa hoon main, haan such hai, k darr rahaa hoon main,
tho tehro na, mera hossla badranay k leeyaen, iss modr pe saath na chohdro mera, main nahee, tho ub bhi tho umar bhar k leeyaen, muhabbat meree baqee hai!


Bahoth Badiya Janab Mashallah Acha Likha Hai Apne !!

Sangbari Dil khool ke ki hai zamane ne hum per !!
Ab sirf tera  pather uthana Baqi hai !!
azma ke mere hausloon ko har gayi duniya !!
ab sirf tere imtehan se jit jana  Baqi hai !!

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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2009, 09:45:35 AM »
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very nice post indeed Anjaan Applause Applause
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