ukta gaya hai dil.:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

mudassirali

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zindigi key har bojh sey ukta gaya hai dil
jeevan key pech o kham sey ukta gaya hai dil

khushiyan bohot hain door muhsey in ka main kya kahon
gham mein bhari har shaam sey ukta gaya hai dil

na subh ko koi naghma hai na shaam ko hai saaz
har been ki berukhi sey ukta gaya hai dil

har phool kaat ta hai khushbo bhi deti hai dukh
har phool har kali sey ukta gaya hai dil

palkein hain bhaari bhaari sota nahin hoon phir bhi
har naakaam khwab sey ukta gaya hai dil

maut tu mujhko dedey ae khuda aisa kar
ghabra gaya hai tooba ukta gaya hai dil.

mudassir (tooba)


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mudassirali

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ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2005, 02:15:30 PM »

hi! lagta hai kisi ko yeh ghazal pasand nahin aayi, agar nahin bhi aayi to pls kami to bataiyeh


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fauzia khan

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ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2005, 06:57:30 AM »

good work mudassir, nice ghazal, kafi dard bhari ghazal likhi hai kyon. .


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Devdas_online

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Re: ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2005, 07:19:06 AM »

Quote from: "mudassirali"

taali do haathon se bajti hai, sukh aur dukh dono ek saath chalte hain,
fark itna hai, dono mein se kisi ek ki raftaar kabhi kabhi tez ho jati hai

Aisa nahin hai ki aap ka likha kisi ko pasand nahin hai, isliye koi reply nahin de raha...baat yeh hai ki aajkal sabhi shayar funny section aur chitchat mein jada jaate hain...aur kisi ko doosra section dekhne ka time nahin hai...woh apna hunar galat jagah par istemaal karte hain...main apni bhi baat kar raha hoon, isliye abhi funny section mein jana kam kiya hai


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waheed_rose2004

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Re: ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2005, 07:21:35 AM »

Quote from: "mudassirali"

bahot khoob mudassar bhai..........superbssssssssssssss,,,,,,,,,,,,,,lekin aap bahot kam aate ho aisa kyon Huh?


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bond

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ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2005, 09:34:15 AM »

bahut achhe mudasaar bhai............................................. ..


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mudassirali

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ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2005, 06:36:21 AM »

aap sub ka shukriya , lekin main chahta hoon ki aap tareef karney key saath saath merey ashaar mein jo bhi ghalti ho aap bataein takey mein aur achcha likh sakoon.


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waheed_rose2004

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ukta gaya hai dil.

«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2005, 09:35:38 AM »

ur alwayas.......welcome mudassar bhai................


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