Uljhan

by Sonu on January 21, 2006, 04:06:57 AM
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #120 on: January 29, 2006, 10:52:08 AM »
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Sadiqa

aap ne bahut sahi likha !

Jeet aap to aajkal full form mein ho...  :D

Rajbir

han ajj full form mein hoon..maan bhut udhas hai...

Akhan vich aa ke ruk jande ne hanju,
         palkan tak aa ke suk jande ne hanju...
         dil karda a ehna nu wha dia,
         per dostan nu hasdeyan vekh muk jande ne hanju.
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #121 on: January 29, 2006, 05:04:10 PM »
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ajj maan bhut udhas hai dosta!
jeen di na koi ass hai dosta!

pata ni kad sajna nu milange
akhiyan nu ajj lagi pyass hai dosta!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #122 on: January 29, 2006, 05:06:17 PM »
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likhan waleya tu ho ke dayal likh de
mere karma ch mere yaar da deedar  likh de

ek na likh mere pyaar da vichora
hor bhawein dukh tu hazaar likh de

( i am sad!!!)
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Rajbir
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«Reply #123 on: January 29, 2006, 05:28:59 PM »
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Jeet

Cheer up !

Rajbir
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Pooja
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«Reply #124 on: January 29, 2006, 07:38:18 PM »
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sahi keha bhaji,,


Friendship is like standing on wet cement,
longer you stay, harder is to leave and
if you try to go you can't go without leaving your footprints behind...


Wah kaya baat kahin hai apne jeet ji!@!!! bahoot hi sunder.
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #125 on: January 30, 2006, 04:17:59 AM »
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thanks pooja ji,,
aur big brother thnks 4 concern

Life counts by the roads we travel,Some are smooth,Some are rough,Some I would rather forget,But there is one road ,we wont forget where we met & became friends......!!!!
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«Reply #126 on: January 30, 2006, 01:16:06 PM »
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Sadiqa

aap ne bahut sahi likha !

Jeet aap to aajkal full form mein ho...  :D

Rajbir


THNKX RAJIB !
N VERY  GOOD BURNING DESIRES !


zindagi dard se nibah mein hai
koi musafir udass rah mein hai
jee uthay tujh pey marmitay jo log
maujaza kaisa teri chaah mein hai
doobi kashti bhi kinaray aagayi
aisa toofaan meri nigaah mein hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #127 on: January 31, 2006, 03:37:50 AM »
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bahut khoob dostu tusi luka ney taa vaa vaa mehphil lay ehuye hai uljhan tey...

wonderful jeet... pooja ji... sadiq ji...

kee huya kanu dil jaley beythey hoo?
kani darda di mehphil laey beythey hoo...

 unke jaaney ke baad unki
khwaabon main dekhni surat padi
dil main jo kabr, unn baaton ko
karne ki yaad jarurat padi
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #128 on: February 01, 2006, 10:12:16 AM »
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kee huya kanu dil jaley beythey hoo?
kani darda di mehphil laey beythey hoo...



"God is playing  chess with me.He had made a move & then sit back to see hw I am going to  react "

Teri mehfil 'ch' aa ke vekhage,
Haal dil da suna ke vekhage,
Ki pata ke taras aa jave,
Tenu ek baar pher maana ke vekhage...

very nice written SONU
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«Reply #129 on: February 01, 2006, 11:00:03 AM »
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aansoooan k rung ubhray aur hunsi achee lagee
mil gayey jub tum to apni zindagee achee lagee

aaj pahli baar us ne gungunaya mere seher
aaj pehli baar apni shairi achee lagee

aisa lagta hay phir apni uljhanain berh jaein gi
aaj humko phir kisi ki saadgi achee lagee

apni aankhoan main khud apnay ghum ki qeemat berh gaee
aaj humko uski aankhoan ki namee achee lagi
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«Reply #130 on: February 01, 2006, 03:17:06 PM »
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tussi sade dil vich aave hi sama gaye ho......

uljhana sade kaleje vich pa gaye ho.....

hun te dil kerda hai teri aankha de vich doob jawa....

kadi baitha kalla kithe samander de kol tere naam di utthe ardass lagawa.........
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Sonu
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«Reply #131 on: February 02, 2006, 05:18:50 AM »
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why what happen jeet.. why he is playing chess with u... if u want just let me know i will slove the chess problem the no body can move the king of jalandeer... don't worry i know u can pass his test and u will make that move then he will also think why hee choose u to give u hard time... wish u good luck jeet...

bahut suna likhia hai jeet...

teyrey dar toon jado uth key jana paugaa,
sano apna janaza apey he chukna paugaa,
bhavey meyrey gum na hoon una tey zahir,
jado angey oh sano muskurana paugaa...



Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Sonu"


kee huya kanu dil jaley beythey hoo?
kani darda di mehphil laey beythey hoo...



"God is playing  chess with me.He had made a move & then sit back to see hw I am going to  react "

Teri mehfil 'ch' aa ke vekhage,
Haal dil da suna ke vekhage,
Ki pata ke taras aa jave,
Tenu ek baar pher maana ke vekhage...

very nice written SONU


thanks jeet
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Sonu
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«Reply #132 on: February 02, 2006, 05:43:58 AM »
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fawad ji... wonderful...


tushar ji bahut he suna likhya heyga hai...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #133 on: February 02, 2006, 06:36:29 AM »
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uhde dar th uth ke aagaya main
apne hathi apna faisla kar lita

mukh sajna ne bhawein modeya maithon
par yaadan vich uhna main qaid kar lita

kade aan ge uh mere dar uthe
is aas te maut nu main rok lita

tu ki jaane oh bedarde!
assi rabb vech ke yaar lita.

(inspired from u (sonu),describing me!!) i had just written it after reading ur post,
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #134 on: February 02, 2006, 06:58:37 AM »
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udta jaye tera lal dupatta kadi lehranda hai bharkha de vich vi........

hun te intzaar hai us millan di ghadi da..jad.....

mil jara man vi mera man vi..............
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