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«Reply #15 on: January 22, 2006, 05:03:29 AM » |
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burninng ji shukriya :lol: hahaahaa dardey dil free mey milta hai messenger mey bhi jeysey jutey or chapel miltey hia ishqu ko free mey jaa bacha duya hai humri key uskey bhap ko nahi peta lageyga keo vo already bhar ghumney gaya hia... to veyarth he chinta ker rha hai... burning ager esa case hu bhi gya to to plz wheel chair per byth ker sahyri mat kerna nahi to uska bap sari shair tumhri phad key heva mey uda deya kreyga :lol: :lol: bhut badiaya sonu ji!!!
kya baaat hai,
abb toh messenger se msg kiya karenge
free mein dard-e-dil beyaan kiya karenge
bas dua karna uske bhaap ko na pata chale
warna hum wheel chair pe baith kar shayari kiya karenge |
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«Reply #16 on: January 22, 2006, 05:11:45 AM » |
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kya baat Burning Desires and Sonu........bahut khoob......sahi jugalbandi hai............  |
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Sonu
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«Reply #17 on: January 22, 2006, 05:16:10 AM » |
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thanks gaurav ji... app bhi kuch suney key mehphil mey kahli hath he ahye hai
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«Reply #18 on: January 22, 2006, 05:19:06 AM » |
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Lab pe hi rukti hai baat aate aate
Neend to nahin aati sapney bohut hain aate
Ham to hain phase ik haseen uljhan mein
Kaash woh aakar ise suljhate Nice one sonu |
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #19 on: January 22, 2006, 05:55:18 AM » |
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burning ager esa case hu bhi gya to to plz wheel chair per byth ker sahyri mat kerna nahi to uska bap sari shair tumhri phad key heva mey uda deya kreyga :lol: :lol:
agar hamri shayri hawa main udh jayegi jo baat ab tak is dil mein hai woh har kissi ke labon pe aa jayegi hum toh chae(tea) peyenge wheel chair par baith kar aur us ganje(uska bhaap) ki neend ud jayigi  :lol: :lol: |
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«Reply #20 on: January 22, 2006, 09:23:44 AM » |
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aur ek baat:
je dinda na rabb sanu akhiyan
assi kidan tera deedar karde
je tu mileya tan akhan mileyan
das kidan na tenu pyar karde
(hope u understand punjabi)
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«Reply #21 on: January 22, 2006, 10:00:38 AM » |
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Lab pe hi rukti hai baat aate aate
Neend to nahin aati sapney bohut hain aate
Ham to hain phase ik haseen uljhan mein
Kaash woh aakar ise suljhate Mom too good yaar Lab ko yu na siyo, kehne do Kuchh to hum jaan hi jaayenge Gar uljhano ko suljha nahi paayenge To saath teri uljhane le jaayenge  |
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Rajbir
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«Reply #22 on: January 22, 2006, 12:06:26 PM » |
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Sonu, Saba and Jeet...Good going !
Jeet aap ka punjabi shair bahut achcha hai.
I am translating it in hindi for others... :D
Jeet ya Sonu, aap ise aur behtar kar sakte hain...
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(Jeet's creation)
gar khuda na deta humein yeh aankhen
to kaise hum aap ke deedar karte
Mile tum to mili yeh aankhen
bolo kaise na tumse pyar karte
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«Reply #23 on: January 22, 2006, 12:18:43 PM » |
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thnks bro!!!
first i thought i post this down in hindi
but this sher is so close to my heart,so i just maintained its originality
basically i write in punjabi but people here are from different cultures, so for their understanding i write in hindi.
if u look for first few of my posts u will find them in punjabi
anyways,, thnks for translating!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #24 on: January 22, 2006, 01:55:50 PM » |
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You are welcome Jeet !
I know that you write in punjabi and i have read all your posts from the beginning... :D
I agree with you that there are so many people from various cultural backgrounds here on yoindia.
Aap ne bahut achcha kiya ke sab ko dhyan mein rakhte hue hindi mein likhna shuru kiya.
Yeh shair itna badhiya tha ki mujhe laga ki sabko iska matlab pata chalna chahiye... :D
Rajbir
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Sonu
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«Reply #25 on: January 23, 2006, 02:42:49 AM » |
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burniing ji very goodd :lol: :lol: cheyeh(tea) jayda mat peya kro key rang kala hu jayga ladki ka baap rang deykh ker tumhey ghar sey bhaga deyga tum wheel chair per byeth ker ladki ka hath mangey jaugey to ladki ka baap dhakey mr ker bhaga deyga tum ager aram sey beyth ker cahyeh(tea) to ladki ka baap dakha mar key sari cahey(tea) tum per gira deyga... :lol: :lol:
burning ager esa case hu bhi gya to to plz wheel chair per byth ker sahyri mat kerna nahi to uska bap sari shair tumhri phad key heva mey uda deya kreyga :lol: :lol:
agar hamri shayri hawa main udh jayegi jo baat ab tak is dil mein hai woh har kissi ke labon pe aa jayegi hum toh chae(tea) peyenge wheel chair par baith kar aur us ganje(uska bhaap) ki neend ud jayigi :lol: :lol: |
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«Reply #26 on: January 23, 2006, 02:48:14 AM » |
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very good burniing ji... punjabiyaan no puchtey ho key punjabi andhi hia... dildara no puchdey hoo key punjabi samjh aundi hai... too ahkhiyaan char ki ketyaan sada hush udha deeta to milyaan to ehdha legaya key rab ney sanu khusiyaan deetiyaan na hunda jey sada milaap jindgi vech kee peta to khethey they mey kithey hundi aur ek baat:
je dinda na rabb sanu akhiyan
assi kidan tera deedar karde
je tu mileya tan akhan mileyan
das kidan na tenu pyar karde
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«Reply #27 on: January 23, 2006, 02:51:21 AM » |
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thanks rajbir ji... apney translate kerkey bahut acha keya or bilkol sahi keya... ager humney koi shiar punjabi mey likha to app usey hindi mey translat ker deya kerna thik hai :lol: taki sabko peta leg jaye.., it was very nice rajbir ji... Sonu, Saba and Jeet...Good going !
Jeet aap ka punjabi shair bahut achcha hai.
I am translating it in hindi for others... :D
Jeet ya Sonu, aap ise aur behtar kar sakte hain...
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(Jeet's creation)
gar khuda na deta humein yeh aankhen
to kaise hum aap ke deedar karte
Mile tum to mili yeh aankhen
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«Reply #28 on: January 23, 2006, 02:58:03 AM » |
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gudiyaan thanks... nice saba very nice mat ulajh to es uljham mey key sulajh nahi payga mat khul lab ko key dhindura peet jayga ager duniya jaan gaye teyrye gum to to badnaam hu jayga Lab pe hi rukti hai baat aate aate
Neend to nahin aati sapney bohut hain aate
Ham to hain phase ik haseen uljhan mein
Kaash woh aakar ise suljhate Mom too good yaar Lab ko yu na siyo, kehne do Kuchh to hum jaan hi jaayenge Gar uljhano ko suljha nahi paayenge To saath teri uljhane le jaayenge |
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«Reply #29 on: January 23, 2006, 06:21:21 AM » |
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Lab pe hi rukti hai baat aate aate
Neend to nahin aati sapney bohut hain aate
Ham to hain phase ik haseen uljhan mein
Kaash woh aakar ise suljhate Mom too good yaar Lab ko yu na siyo, kehne do Kuchh to hum jaan hi jaayenge Gar uljhano ko suljha nahi paayenge To saath teri uljhane le jaayenge wah wah Sonu.......... Saba,........ burning_desire..... excellent work all friends........ :lol: |
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