Uljhan

by Sonu on January 21, 2006, 04:06:57 AM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #195 on: March 02, 2006, 04:32:12 PM »
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Thanxxxxxxxx  Benam..........lollzzzzzzzz  nice  Sonu  mom.:lol:
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«Reply #196 on: March 02, 2006, 04:55:38 PM »
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Good one Waheed ji, Pooja ji and Jeet Bro!

Jeet ur other 2 are really good!


thanks Bro,, agar aap mere shair ka anti-answer na dete toh shayad main woh likh hi na pata,, I also like those lines n i m still wondering how come i write those,
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«Reply #197 on: March 03, 2006, 09:43:50 AM »
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nice all of u...........
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«Reply #198 on: March 03, 2006, 09:49:15 AM »
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Kishton mein waar karne se kya milta hai tumhe,
Ikk baar khanjarr yoon chala do ke hamein chain mile,
Yhe rooh ab jism mein tadpaa karti hai,
Maut ko gale se laga lein to zara chain mile,
Is Janam mein hamein tum samajh na sake,
Marr jaayenge to shayad kuch qadr ka pata to chale,
Ghutan si mehsoos ho rahi hai saansein chalne se,
Akhri waar kuch aisa kar do tumhe meri kasam,
Na yeh saansein chale na ghutney ka silsila ab chale........

gesu's dard!!!!!!
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«Reply #199 on: March 04, 2006, 07:49:01 PM »
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Khaffa maut ho,Zindagi Rooth Jaye,
Kisi par kabhie waqt,Aaisa na aye,

Woh apni Khata pe,Kyun na Tilmalaye,
Kabhie meri akhon mein,Aanson na aaye,

Mohabbat nahi yeh toh,Dillagi hai,
Bhulne se agar,Koi bhool jaye,

Gujaare jo hamne,Tere sath rehkar,
Museebat mein woh ,Din bahut kam aaye,

Agar main diya hoon,Jalaye woh mujko,
Agar phool hoon,Toh gaalle se lagaye,

Kissi ka jahan  aag mein,Jal raha hai,
Aur koi chain se baith kar,Geet gaye...



Badde dino baad, appse mulakat hui hai,, aaj toh Hum appke  Fan ho gaye Gesu jiii!!!

bahut bardiya likha hai aapne!!
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«Reply #200 on: March 05, 2006, 12:28:25 AM »
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--- Pata nahi aaj kisi ki yaad bahot sata rahi hai ----

sine main jal rahi hai aag koi,
aaj bhi tanha hai raat aur nahi koi,
teri yadon ke sahare hai umra guzari,
aaj bhi dil main nahi samaya aur koi!

--- BENAM---
kar li thi humaney bhi mahobat na soche na samajhe,
sath nibha rahe hai aaj bhi wohi chand lamhe!

Chand lamhe ---> few moments

(9 years have passed we have been apart,
and it still seems like yesterday,
Be happy my love wherever you are,
The only thing my heart will always pray!)
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«Reply #201 on: March 05, 2006, 05:56:50 AM »
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paglo key lord..  etna mat pheyku mujhey sab peta tumahrye barey mey... mey lapet lapet ker thak gaye hu ab samjhey naa...

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Hum aaj bhi wahi hain,
Chahe badal gaya Zamaana hai
Dil me wahi Ehsaas
Hothoon Pe wahi taarana hai!!

Quote from: "Sonu"
nice ranjitey...
woh kal kuch aur thaa
yeh aaj ka zamaana hai
woh hansstey huye nagmey
yeh gammon ka taraana hai


Sonu ,apka ka kya kehna, har bar tareef nahi ho pati,, words kam pad jaate hain
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«Reply #202 on: March 05, 2006, 06:01:15 AM »
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thanks pooja ji...

wonderful pooja ji...

kal ju bet chuka ab vo ek khani hia...
vo dil mey dabi batey phir sey yad aney lagi hia..
unki yaadey khoon key ahsoon rulaney lagi hia
unki bevafee per gum nahi humko
per unki vafa per bhi yakin nahi hia...

Quote from: "Pooja"
wah kay abaat hai Sonu and Jeet bahoot khoob!!!

kal ki baaty ajj purani lagati hai
wo dabi baty, unhe be-mani lagati hai
hum baithy hai ajj bhi unke intzaar mai
aor, unko ajj bhi wafa, payaar ek kahani lagati hai!!!!
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«Reply #203 on: March 05, 2006, 06:04:18 AM »
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thanks babo... thanks benam ji... gesu ji...

wonderful babo.... benam ji.. ranjit.... gesu ji... sabbney bahut he acha likha hai ....

woh khush huye itney ki
shukriyaa adaa kar diya
jakhm de kar mere dil ko, apni
hansee se soadaa kar diya
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«Reply #204 on: March 06, 2006, 06:14:15 AM »
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kyalikha hai sabne bahtu khoob!!!!! and thanks burning desires ji
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«Reply #205 on: March 06, 2006, 06:15:05 AM »
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thanks sonu ji and all
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«Reply #206 on: March 06, 2006, 06:24:51 AM »
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u r welcome gesu ji... app bahut acha likhti hia... keep it up the good work...

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thanks sonu ji and all
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«Reply #207 on: March 06, 2006, 06:31:55 AM »
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thanks for appreciation...and the same goes for u too!!
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«Reply #208 on: March 06, 2006, 07:05:14 AM »
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u r welcome gesu ji... and thanks...

Is mehfil mein, dil hi dil mein aap se jaaneman  Kuch bhi na kaha,
kuch keh bhi gaye - 2  
Kuch kehte kehte reh bhi gaye - 2  Is mehfil mein,


Kuch bhi na kaha, kuch keh bhi gaye  Kuch kehte kehte reh bhi gaye  (Kitni haseen yeh raat hai  Is raat mein kya baat hai, baheke hum) - 2    --

 Kis ka hai kya nishaana  Kisne yahan yeh jaana yaar sanam    

 Saamne aake, nazrein milaake aap se jaaneman - 2  
Kuch bhi na kaha, kuch keh bhi gaye - 2

 Kuch kehte kehte reh bhi gaye - 2  
(Bhole hai hum, naadaan hai  Sab jaanke anjaan hai hum bekhabar) - 2  

 Khaamosh hai zubaan par  Aankhen to bolti hai dekh idhar  

 Kuch sharmaake, kuch ghabraake aap se jaaneman - 2  
Kuch bhi na kaha, kuch keh bhi gaye - 2  
Kuch kehte kehte reh bhi gaye - 2  Is mehfil mein,

dil hi dil mein aap se jaaneman - 2  
 Kuch bhi na kaha, kuch keh bhi gaye - 2  
Kuch kehte kehte reh bhi gaye - 2
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«Reply #209 on: March 06, 2006, 09:58:26 AM »
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very  nice  Benam........  Sonu mom...........:lol:

Milta Tha Mujh Sey Woh Kabhi Pal Palkey Farq Sey
Phir Rafta Rafta Farq Yeh Saloon Men Aa Gaya
Phi Yoon Hoa Keh Aankh Ey Ansoo Nikal Parhe
Chehra Kabhi Jo Us Ka Khayaloon Men Aa Gaya.nm
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