Uljhan

by Sonu on January 21, 2006, 04:06:57 AM
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #60 on: January 25, 2006, 11:54:13 AM »
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kya baat hai tushar,, very nice!!!

Lab Pe Hi Rukti Hai Baat Aate Aate
Neend To Nahi Aati Sapnay Bohat Hain Aate

Hum To Hain Phase Ik Haseen Uljhaan Mein
Kaash Woh Aakar Iseh Suljhaate:::::::::::


labo  se   baya kare to kare kaise.........

naazro ko bachai tumse kaise..........

tum kerti ho her batt me hi hamari ha.............

ye zalim hai badi duniya kerti hai ishq per sitan......

tujhe a pagli samjhau kaise..........
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #61 on: January 25, 2006, 12:51:18 PM »
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wonderful gaurav...

ahja meyrey pass her uljhan teyri suljha do mey
khusiow ka sharbat ajj tujhey peela do
apni memta ki chav mey tujhey sola do
mat ho udas to
ajj meyra dil kahey key tari her dukh takleef metaa do...

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Uljhan mere dil ki aaj suljha de tu,
Jaam khushion ka aaj pila de tu,
Kaafi dino soya bhi nahi,
Apne gesuon ki chaon me aaj sula de tu,
bahut thaka hua hoon is judai k safar se,
Apni bahon me leke mujhe yeh thakaaan mita de tu..........



veri nice reply sonu.......its really too gud....... :oops:
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anjani_si
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«Reply #62 on: January 25, 2006, 09:36:19 PM »
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thanks anjani kudiya tusi vi punjabi  Usual Smile  tuhada naav ki hai ager koi etraj na huvey tan dasogey...

koi asi kosish kerney haan

jey gal porani hovey tey yaadgar ben jandi hai
jey pyar teyra neva huvey tan jindgani ben jandi hai
jey teyra payar sacha huvey tan kesey-kahani ben jandi hai
jey pyar vech dukha khada huvey tan bevafaee di keetab chap jandi hai...

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sonu,burnin vry nice!!!!!
gal pohrani hove te yaad ghar ban chandi
pyar tera nawa hove te tu zindagi ban chandi


can any one continue....im out of words rite now!!!


sonuji bohat he vadeya likha..........

bawafai da dagh lagh jaye te
zindagi barbaad ho jandi hai
tera jaiya nalayak ho ve te
mohabbat ho jandi hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #63 on: January 26, 2006, 03:41:04 AM »
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dosto bahut bahut shukiryaa es thread ko agey badaney ka... sabi dosto ney bahut hee acha likhiyaa hai... tushar ji... gaurav... jeet ji... anjani ji... ro Humhaarey translator ji ka to jevab he nahi Rajbir ka... sabney bahut he acha likha hai....
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Sonu
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«Reply #64 on: January 26, 2006, 03:45:59 AM »
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Jeet ji bahut vadiyaa jevab hai tuhada...

sanu peta hai mantriyaan nal hai tuhadi yari
bhaj key jandey ho jeney bhi rishvat vastey avaj hai mari

hick dey jor tey ladni apni duniyaa sari
jey phadey jow rishvat leyndey taan saboot no goli marni

pavey koi mer javey
tusi taan apni mantri di seat he hai sambhalni...

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Sonu"
hanji sunow jeet ji..

janandhar waleyan nu shuk sardari da,
ek suni bullet tey bukhar ishq di bemari da
ahow bayee gala nal kethey kam sari da
peta tan legda hai jado kudi da peow thaneydar nikelda
oh taan phri banda garo kadey he marda  :lol:  :lol:



mantriyan naal lagi sadi pakki yaari,
pehlan 307* lagi hun 302* di vaari,

hick de zor te ladni aapan eh dunia sari,
 J KITE karna hove kharka darka  bus 1 awaz mari.


_____________________________
*Indian Panel Code of punishments  
 :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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Sonu
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«Reply #65 on: January 26, 2006, 03:56:37 AM »
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Jeet ji oh taan thik hia per Rajbir noo taan puchulo....
 
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Jeet ji ney bilkol sahi keya Rajbir fees di tusi phiker na kro ek shair translate kro tey dujha phir wait ker raeha huvey tuhadi deek vech...  :lol: :lol: jeet ji di thra asi vi rashn pani dey nal apni dosti free vech deynagey...


Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
rajbir bhaji puchan di load ni,, jehra msg mera punjabi ch dikda kar deyo translate


fees tenu assi apni dosti de dewange,,chahe translate karo chahe na!!!



theek hai ji, jiwe kawoge kar lange
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Sonu
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«Reply #66 on: January 26, 2006, 03:59:02 AM »
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ahow Jeet ji mil gaya jevab tey beda vadiya deeta tusi jevab... man gaye tuhanu


Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
jawab mil gaya pher :twisted:  :twisted:


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Rajbir jevab deytaa hai hoon veykho reply ke anda hai  :lol:

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Ha ha ha... :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

Too sexy bro ! Mazaa aa gaya.

chak de phatte, tang de killi... :D

Sonu jawaab deyo hun please

Rajbir
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«Reply #67 on: January 26, 2006, 04:01:30 AM »
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tuhsar ji and jeet ji bahut khoob... wonderful likha hai donu ney...

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kya baat hai tushar,, very nice!!!

Lab Pe Hi Rukti Hai Baat Aate Aate
Neend To Nahi Aati Sapnay Bohat Hain Aate

Hum To Hain Phase Ik Haseen Uljhaan Mein
Kaash Woh Aakar Iseh Suljhaate:::::::::::


labo  se   baya kare to kare kaise.........

naazro ko bachai tumse kaise..........

tum kerti ho her batt me hi hamari ha.............

ye zalim hai badi duniya kerti hai ishq per sitan......

tujhe a pagli samjhau kaise..........
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Sonu
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«Reply #68 on: January 26, 2006, 04:02:58 AM »
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thanks gaurav... bahut bahut shukriyaa...

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Quote from: "Sonu"
wonderful gaurav...

ahja meyrey pass her uljhan teyri suljha do mey
khusiow ka sharbat ajj tujhey peela do
apni memta ki chav mey tujhey sola do
mat ho udas to
ajj meyra dil kahey key tari her dukh takleef metaa do...

Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Uljhan mere dil ki aaj suljha de tu,
Jaam khushion ka aaj pila de tu,
Kaafi dino soya bhi nahi,
Apne gesuon ki chaon me aaj sula de tu,
bahut thaka hua hoon is judai k safar se,
Apni bahon me leke mujhe yeh thakaaan mita de tu..........



veri nice reply sonu.......its really too gud....... :oops:
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Sonu
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«Reply #69 on: January 26, 2006, 04:05:02 AM »
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thanks anjani ji... mey tuhadey to nav puchya si sheyd tusi desna nahi cahudey ho koi gal nahi.... bahut he vadiya likhiyaa hai tusi...


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Quote from: "Sonu"
thanks anjani kudiya tusi vi punjabi  Usual Smile  tuhada naav ki hai ager koi etraj na huvey tan dasogey...

koi asi kosish kerney haan

jey gal porani hovey tey yaadgar ben jandi hai
jey pyar teyra neva huvey tan jindgani ben jandi hai
jey teyra payar sacha huvey tan kesey-kahani ben jandi hai
jey pyar vech dukha khada huvey tan bevafaee di keetab chap jandi hai...

Quote from: "anjani_si"
sonu,burnin vry nice!!!!!
gal pohrani hove te yaad ghar ban chandi
pyar tera nawa hove te tu zindagi ban chandi


can any one continue....im out of words rite now!!!


sonuji bohat he vadeya likha..........

bawafai da dagh lagh jaye te
zindagi barbaad ho jandi hai
tera jaiya nalayak ho ve te
mohabbat ho jandi hai
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #70 on: January 26, 2006, 06:28:32 AM »
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Jeet ji bahut vadiyaa jevab hai tuhada...

sanu peta hai mantriyaan nal hai tuhadi yari
bhaj key jandey ho jeney bhi rishvat vastey avaj hai mari

hick dey jor tey ladni apni duniyaa sari
jey phadey jow rishvat leyndey taan saboot no goli marni

pavey koi mer javey
tusi taan apni mantri di seat he hai sambhalni...


sukhriya janab,tareef karn da
ek hor request haigi aa hun naam piche 'JI' launi band kar deyo,, bhut hogaye formal,,rite!!!!
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #71 on: January 26, 2006, 04:40:30 PM »
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uljhano ka silsila hai na jane kab rukega kahi.....

bikhar jayena shayad uljhano me ulajhker.....

aa sanam baho me le lo aab tum hi ......
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #72 on: January 26, 2006, 05:43:38 PM »
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wonderful tushar bhai!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #73 on: January 27, 2006, 03:18:26 AM »
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ok boss jeda khugey kerleyney hai... formality kerna hoon bend kerdeyney haan... tey tuhano request kerni di lod nahi hai.. dostu no request nahi keti jandi hai kheya janda hia...


Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Sonu"
Jeet ji bahut vadiyaa jevab hai tuhada...

sanu peta hai mantriyaan nal hai tuhadi yari
bhaj key jandey ho jeney bhi rishvat vastey avaj hai mari

hick dey jor tey ladni apni duniyaa sari
jey phadey jow rishvat leyndey taan saboot no goli marni

pavey koi mer javey
tusi taan apni mantri di seat he hai sambhalni...


sukhriya janab,tareef karn da
ek hor request haigi aa hun naam piche 'JI' launi band kar deyo,, bhut hogaye formal,,rite!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #74 on: January 27, 2006, 08:52:22 AM »
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ethe tan sara punjab ikatha hoiya .....very gud..tuhadi sariyan di shayari padh ke tan dil garden garden ho giya....bahut vadhiya likhiya sabne...

je koi uljhan hai tan ohnu suljha lao
koi russ giya hai tan mana lao
kyonki sache pyar labhda hai rabb di mehar naal
na jaan deo usnu iss tarah...
je koi vi pesh nahi chaldi tan ja ke gal naal la lao
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