ULJHAN

by Jiya on April 30, 2007, 03:04:34 PM
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Jinhe dhund-te hain sapno mein,
Wo haqeeqat mein nahin hai,
Jo haqeeqat mein hai saamne,
Wo hamaare sapno mein nahin hai.

Jo dil mein hai hamaare,
Wo hamaare kareeb nahin hai,
Aur jo kareeb hai hamaare,
Wo hamaare dil mein nahin hai.

Jinse pyaar karte hain hum,
Wo humaare baare mein sochte nahin hain,
Jo sochte hain humaare baare mein,
Unse pyaar hum karte nahin hai.

Hum jinka intzaar karte hain,
Wo kabhi aate nahin hain,
Aur jo aa jaate hain saamne,
Unka intzaar hum karte nahin hai.

.-.-.-.-...-.-.-..--..-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-..-.-.  jiya  .-.-
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2007, 05:43:26 PM »
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Nice work..
8/10 !!
Simple and expressive !
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2007, 04:39:26 AM »
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Excellent....Jiya...!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2007, 03:59:03 PM »
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Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Excellent....Jiya...!!
thanke Gaurav ji and ricky ji. thanx a lot.
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2007, 04:15:40 PM »
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Jiya

Very well expressed !

Keep it up =D>
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2007, 04:11:29 PM »
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BAHOOT KHOOB JIYA!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2007, 07:17:19 PM »
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That was Simply Beautiful Jiya... Usual Smile
Good going... Keep it Up...
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2007, 05:35:33 PM »
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thanx a lot,,,,, that u all like my poem.thanks Rajbir ji, Shikha ji and Pooja diiiiiii
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