Um'r beet jaaye sahar ke aane me.....( ISHK)

by ishk ek ibadat on July 10, 2010, 07:15:26 AM
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Lo aa gaye saqi tere maikhaane me
Daal de jee bhar ke aaj paimaane me

Bana leti ho tum apna diwaana
Charcha hai aaj saare Zamaane me

Suna hai vo ilm hai tujhme e saqi
Jo kaam aaye use bhulaane me

Raat bhar madhoshi bani rahe, aur
Um'r beet jaaye sahar ke aane me

Dil ki besaakhta khushi ko to dekho, jaise
Nachta hai moR badal ko rijhaane me

Mil gayee 'ishk' ko aaj vo hasin daulat
Dhoondta firta tha jise saare Zamaane me
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2010, 07:37:37 AM »
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Lo aa gaye saqi tere maikhaane me
Daal de jee bhar ke aaj paimaane me

Bana leti ho tum apna diwaana
Charcha hai aaj saare Zamaane me

Suna hai vo ilm hai tujhme e saqi
Jo kaam aaye use bhulaane me

Raat bhar madhoshi bani rahe, aur
Um'r beet jaaye sahar ke aane me

Dil ki besaakhta khushi ko to dekho, jaise
Nachta hai moR badal ko rijhaane me

Mil gayee 'ishk' ko aaj vo hasin daulat
Dhoondta firta tha jise saare Zamaane me


Apka Apna
Ishk


Ishk Sahab ......Aadaab ! bahut umda khayal pesh kiye hai aapne...sabhi ashaar dilkash lage mujhe....adaayegi purasar rahi....dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen...bazm ki shaan badhaate rahen...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 06:23:21 PM »
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wahhh ji wahhh kya kwhna aapki shaayri ka.....
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2010, 05:06:03 PM »
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Bana leti ho tum apna diwaana
Charcha hai aaj saare Zamaane me

Suna hai vo ilm hai tujhme e saqi
Jo kaam aaye use bhulaane me

Raat bhar madhoshi bani rahe, aur
Um'r beet jaaye sahar ke aane me


Bahut Umdaa Khayal Pesh Kiye hai aapne.....Iskq Sahab ! bahut khoob !
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