-----/// Unhe dekhiye ///----- Hriday

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kabhi to  unki aankhon kaa  kaajal dekhiye
kabhi  to  unke zulfon kaa  baadal dekhiye

kaisaa   suroor   hai   unke   moujudgi  kaa
yahaan  har  koi  ho rahaa  paagal dekhiye

madhosh  hone  ke  liye  aur kyaa chaahiye
unkaa   saraktaa   huwaa  aanchal  dekhiye

unki sharm -o- hayaa, adaa   ki  shokhiyaan
apni  aankhon  se  kar   rahi   qatal dekhiye

hum  to  kabhi  likhne  ko   likh hi naa sake
bas naam  se hi unke banaa ghazal dekhiye

husn   naam  hai   kiskaa, aur ishq kisse ho
khwaab to dekhe  kai, par  ab asal dekhiye


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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2013, 01:35:04 PM »
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Uffffffff itni romantic poem hriday ji...kya baat hai dil khush ho gaya is padhkar..tareef se bhari is peshkash ki aur kya tareef karoon.. behad umda aur dhamakedaar peshkash.. dil se daaaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega....
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kabhi to  unki aankhon kaa  kaajal dekhiye
kabhi  to  unke zulfon kaa  baadal dekhiye

kaisaa   suroor   hai   unke   moujudgi  kaa
yahaan  har  koi  ho rahaa  paagal dekhiye

madhosh  hone  ke  liye  aur kyaa chaahiye
unkaa   saraktaa   huwaa  aanchal  dekhiye

unki sharm -o- hayaa, adaa   ki  shokhiyaan
apni  aankhon  se  kar   rahi   qatl dekhiye

hum  to  kabhi  likhne  ko   likh hi naa sake
bas naam  se hi unke banaa ghazal dekhiye

husn   naam  hai   kiskaa, aur ishq kisse ho
khwaab to dekhe  kai, par  ab asal dekhiye


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good,sir but the qafia qatl is dissimilar from others as mentioned
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Bahut Khoob Hridayji.
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Uffffffff itni romantic poem hriday ji...kya baat hai dil khush ho gaya is padhkar..tareef se bhari is peshkash ki aur kya tareef karoon.. behad umda aur dhamakedaar peshkash.. dil se daaaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega....
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good,sir but the qafia qatl is dissimilar from others as mentioned
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