Unki adat thi tadpne ki

by Asif samani jaunpuri on August 08, 2012, 07:32:39 AM
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Unki adat thi hame tadpane ki

raaz e ishq dil me chupane ki

sabhi se nazre milati  thì

ek hami ko dekh nazre churati thi

jab kabhi bhi wo aachanak se takrati   thi

bas uff allah kahke gujar jati thi

 
ek roz hamne bhi hath pakad kar kah diya  unse  


hath nahi chodenge tab tak appka

 jab tak nazre milakar na bol do hamse

ham bhi pyar karte hai aapse

..~m.a~..
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2012, 08:23:15 AM »
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Wah wah... Bhut khobsurat peshkas hai apki.
Aisa lag raha hai unki adat nahi aadaye thi tadpane ki.... Keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2012, 08:53:28 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2012, 10:26:18 AM »
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Quote from: Asif samani jaunpuri on August 08, 2012, 07:32:39 AM
Unki adat thi hame tadpane ki

raaz e ishq dil me chupane ki

sabhi se nazre milati  thì

ek hami ko dekh nazre churati thi

jab kabhi bhi wo aachanak se takrati   thi

bas uff allah kahke gujar jati thi

 
ek roz hamne bhi hath pakad kar kah diya  unse 


hath nahi chodenge tab tak appka

 jab tak nazre milakar na bol do hamse

ham bhi pyar karte hai aapse

..~m.a~..


veriiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice --aaj aap ne aisa likha hai bhai. jaisa main bahut nahin to kuch aap se tawaqqo kar raha tha.
ispe 1 rau to zaroor doon ga. mujhe bahut pasand aayaa.
aur haan aise hi likha karein.
doago.!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2012, 11:07:35 AM »
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Ho sakta hai tauheed bhai unki adat hi ho sukria for comment
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2012, 11:09:16 AM »
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Khamosh bahut bahut sukria appki dua chahiye
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2012, 11:09:52 AM »
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Thanx nand bhai
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2012, 02:42:04 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Asif ji... bahutb bahut khoob likha hai aapne... humein bahut pasand aayaa...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2012, 04:18:08 PM »
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Bahut bahut sukria hriday g
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2012, 03:25:26 PM »
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nice
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