unki dhadkan me hi....

by @kaash on February 21, 2009, 12:44:44 PM
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unki dhadkan me hi jaise mera khuda rahta hai
mere mehbub tere hone se dil koi dua karta hai


ek mahshar hai vo,noor'e'jannat hai vo
ye shokhiyan ye ada ki dil machla karta hai


rahta hain kahan kahan vo,hume malum hi nahi
unhi se tasaavur me madhoshi ka sama rahta hai


ek unke hone se hum har gham se ubar jaate hain
nahi jaante hum vo hume kitni duaen deta hai


kabhi kabhi jab nasha unke ishq ka had se badhta
nazron se unka chehra humse nahi utar pata hai


ehsaas'e'ishq ko ye kaisa ishq khuda tu bata de
kyun saason se kisi aur ki saanson ka guma rahta hai


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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2009, 12:56:58 PM »
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Nice one Akaash Ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2009, 01:26:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2010, 01:42:03 AM »
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Wow Kaash ji,very romantic and mindblowing creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2010, 04:21:58 AM »
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gud 1janab

Unki dhakan mein wo shor abhi bhi ata hai.
Jaise na tootne wala apna koi nata hai.
Unki dhadkan ki awaz thodi mand hai,
Shayed mere liye sawal kai band hai.
Pata nhi kis sooch se unki dhadkan darti hai,
Isiliye wo humse ijhaar nhi kerti hai.
Us dhadkan mein pyaar ki itni bhakti hai,
Jo humko din raat bechain ker k rakhti hai.
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2010, 09:09:02 AM »
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Wow Bhondu ji,bahut achi lagi aapke lines mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2010, 07:52:57 AM »
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madhuwesh ji mesh dost pooja ji ne kaha tha yaha shayri ka jawab sirf shayri se hota hai.

Unki dhadkan se nasha chata hai,
Unki chahat mein maza aata hai.
Ishq ke unmad se dhadakti dhadkane,
Unki dhadkan mein bhondu khud ko hamesha pata hai.
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2010, 11:21:11 AM »
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Bahut Khoob!!!!!!!!!!

Unki dhadkano mein hi uljhi rahe meri dhadkan,
Mein jo suljhaaon to hoti hai ajab si tadpan,
Yeh milli dhadkane mitati hai sabb sunapan,
Inka saaz bajta rahe to lage apnapan…..


Gesu’s koshish!!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2010, 02:56:25 PM »
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bahoot khoob Kaash ji...

Good work Bondu ji and gesu ji
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