unki hasraat mein

by aiina on September 25, 2010, 06:37:58 PM
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Unki hasraat mein e-nazuk dil'
Tu kyoun khud se youn bezaar hota hai,
 Aur jab woh  bewafa nahi milta,
toh kyoun zaar-zaar rota hai,
agar sunni  hi hoti unhe teri dhadkan,
toh woh pehle hi sun laate'
youn khmoosh reh-reh kar,
'Aiina'-e-dil tujhe'
youn tootne nahin deete...
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2010, 06:43:00 PM »
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Meri Aankhein Kharab Hai
Yaan Ki Aap Likhna Bhool Gaye Hain...!
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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2010, 06:52:37 PM »
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Unki hasraat mein aye naazuk dil'
 Tu kyoun khud se beezaar hota hai,
aur phir jaab woh bewafa nahin milta ,
toh kyoun zaar-zaar roota hai,
agar suuni hi hoti unhe ,
tere dil ki dhadkan,
toh woh pehle hi sun laate,
youn khmosh reh-reh kar,
'Aiina'-e dil tujhe youn ,
tootne nahin deete...
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2010, 07:07:24 PM »
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Ji Siway A Ke Aur Kuch Nahi Dikh Raha...
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2010, 07:08:26 PM »
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Bohat Badiya Ji Abki Baar Dikh Gaya.....hmmh

Shad o Aabad Rahe...

Yaash...
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2010, 07:13:47 PM »
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sorry.. aab doobara dekhye is baar theek kar diya hai.!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2010, 07:15:34 PM »
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thanks for your patience..
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2010, 07:16:25 PM »
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Ji Bohat Achcha Hai
Hum Pahle Hi Dkh Chuken.

Khair...

Khush Rahen.

Yaash...
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«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2010, 11:04:42 PM »
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Wow Aaina ji kafi dino baad aapke poem padne ko milli.bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work.excellent.hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2010, 02:22:09 AM »
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lots of thanks maduweshji..meri is rachna ko parhne aur sarhaanee ki liyea
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2010, 09:25:26 AM »
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Nice try Aiina.....keep writing.... Applause

Unki hasraat mein aye naazuk dil'
 Tu kyoun khud se beezaar hota hai,
aur phir jaab woh bewafa nahin milta ,
toh kyoun zaar-zaar roota hai,
agar suuni hi hoti unhe ,
tere dil ki dhadkan,
toh woh pehle hi sun laate,
youn khmosh reh-reh kar,
'Aiina'-e dil tujhe youn ,
tootne nahin deete...
'aiina707'

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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2010, 04:18:38 AM »
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thank all of you notworthy notworthy
ji aarj kiya hai ..
aap ke share se aage chale jaate hai hum,
koi ho na ho,
aapko apne saath paate hai hum...
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