Unki Manjil ban jau....... ...Saavan

by Saavan on November 11, 2012, 06:07:42 AM
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Jindagi ke samunder me unka sahil ban jau,
Ye khwab hai mera ki unke kabil ban jau..

Wo chahte kya hai ye to malum nahi sahib
Per Tamanna meri ye hai ki unki Manjil ban jau.
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«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2012, 06:15:38 AM »
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Bahot khoob tamanna hai Saavan ji. Achha likha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2012, 06:19:52 AM »
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saavan ji acha likhte hain aap keep writing
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2012, 09:31:22 AM »
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bahut khoob
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Bohat Khub!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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