US sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!

by abdbundeli on August 20, 2010, 04:35:47 AM
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«Reply #30 on: August 20, 2010, 06:00:07 PM »
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Zindagee dar-b-dar na ho, iseeliye mein ney,
US sey nazdeekiyaan rakkheen hain jaagtey-sotey!
Naaz-o-andaaz kaa rakhaa hai khyaal har lamahey,
Taaki WOH yun hi rahey roo-b-roo meyrey hotey!!

Abd Bundeli Jee Aadaab.......

Behad gehre ashaar hai janab dil se daad ....
janab aap itne bade shayar hai... aur aapke aise ek do sher se kalaam khatam...

Humara dil nahi bharne wala hai itne se...
Aapka mayaar to hum pahele kalaam se hi samjh gaye the..
Haq se kah rahe hai aapko...
Puri kalaam pesh kijiye... Usual Smile

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«Reply #31 on: August 21, 2010, 04:51:00 AM »
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Abd Bundeli Jee Aadaab.......

Behad gehre ashaar hai janab dil se daad ....
janab aap itne bade shayar hai... aur aapke aise ek do sher se kalaam khatam...

Humara dil nahi bharne wala hai itne se...
Aapka mayaar to hum pahele kalaam se hi samjh gaye the..
Haq se kah rahe hai aapko...
Puri kalaam pesh kijiye... Usual Smile



Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji!

Meyree shayari 'chutkoun' mein wikharee huyee hai, dheerey-dheerey hee saamney laa paa rahaa huun! Pooree 'gazal' bhee zald hee aapkee haaziree mein pahunch jaayegee! Aapkey 'apneypan' ney khush kar diyaa hai meyrey dil-o-dimaag ko!
Khush rahiye!

                             - abd bundeli
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'Hamko mouqaa hi kahaan thaa, ki, baith kar rotey!' title sey pooree gazal post kar dee hai, janab!
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