....~~Uska Jism~~....

by HumTum on April 16, 2005, 06:57:11 PM
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Dheerey Se Sarakti Hai Raat Us Ke Aanchal Ki Tarah
Us Ka Chehra Nazar Ata Hai jheel mein kanwal Ki Tarah

Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Roz Kehti Hai Seeney Pe Sir Rakh Ke Raat Bhar Sula'oun Gi
Sar-e-Shaam Hi Mujhey Aaj Phir Sula Gayi Wo Kal Ki Tarah

Us Ka Sharmaana Bhi Mujhey Maat De Jaataa Hai
Us Ki To Har Adaa Hai Kisi Khamosh Qatil Ki Tarah

Merey Hi Dil Ka MakeeN Nikla Wo Shakhs Aur Mein
Shehar Bhar Mein Dhoodnta Raha Usey Kisi Pagal Ki Tarah

Madhosh Sa Ho Jata Hun Jab Barish Ki Boondein
ChheRti Hain Koi Naghma Us Ki Chhanakti Payal Ki Tarah

Mera Sukhan Us Ki Zaat Ka Mehwar Na Ho Tab Bhi
Wo NaazneeN Wo Dil NasheeN Hoga Mehakti Ghazal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah


HumTum
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2005, 07:01:04 PM »
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"Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah "

kya baat hai!!!!!!!! yuh to puri poem bohot hi achi hai lekin yeh lines mujeh sabse achi lagi!!!!! well done ji!!

 :D
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2005, 07:03:14 PM »
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"Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah "

kya baat hai!!!!!!!! yuh to puri poem bohot hi achi hai lekin yeh lines mujeh sabse achi lagi!!!!! well done ji!!

 :D


Thank u ji
lekin koi baat nhi hai !!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2005, 08:42:33 AM »
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lovely poem humtum ,bahut hi achha likha hai tumne!!!  Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2005, 08:47:16 AM »
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lovely poem humtum ,bahut hi achha likha hai tumne!!!  Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile


Shukriya Vitasta ji .. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2005, 10:39:40 AM »
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wow... hindi gai tel pene..!!!
...
the touch of your skin
blosomed love from within
breath taking sensation
pearls of emotions
lips so tender
kisses my pain away
you make me wholesome
i love you more each day
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2005, 10:42:25 AM »
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Thik hai hindi gyi teel lene ...

Beauty and love are all my dream;
They change not with the changing day;
Love stays forever like a stream
That flows but never flows away;

And beauty is the bright sun-bow
That blossoms on the spray that showers
Where the loud water falls below,
Making a wind among the flowers.
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~Saloni~
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2005, 10:49:30 AM »
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Dheerey Se Sarakti Hai Raat Us Ke Aanchal Ki Tarah
Us Ka Chehra Nazar Ata Hai jheel mein kanwal Ki Tarah

Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Roz Kehti Hai Seeney Pe Sir Rakh Ke Raat Bhar Sula'oun Gi
Sar-e-Shaam Hi Mujhey Aaj Phir Sula Gayi Wo Kal Ki Tarah

Us Ka Sharmaana Bhi Mujhey Maat De Jaataa Hai
Us Ki To Har Adaa Hai Kisi Khamosh Qatil Ki Tarah

Merey Hi Dil Ka MakeeN Nikla Wo Shakhs Aur Mein
Shehar Bhar Mein Dhoodnta Raha Usey Kisi Pagal Ki Tarah

Madhosh Sa Ho Jata Hun Jab Barish Ki Boondein
ChheRti Hain Koi Naghma Us Ki Chhanakti Payal Ki Tarah

Mera Sukhan Us Ki Zaat Ka Mehwar Na Ho Tab Bhi
Wo NaazneeN Wo Dil NasheeN Hoga Mehakti Ghazal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah


HumTum

bahut khoob likha hai ye par kya aapne likha hai .................
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2005, 10:55:10 AM »
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Dheerey Se Sarakti Hai Raat Us Ke Aanchal Ki Tarah
Us Ka Chehra Nazar Ata Hai jheel mein kanwal Ki Tarah

Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Roz Kehti Hai Seeney Pe Sir Rakh Ke Raat Bhar Sula'oun Gi
Sar-e-Shaam Hi Mujhey Aaj Phir Sula Gayi Wo Kal Ki Tarah

Us Ka Sharmaana Bhi Mujhey Maat De Jaataa Hai
Us Ki To Har Adaa Hai Kisi Khamosh Qatil Ki Tarah

Merey Hi Dil Ka MakeeN Nikla Wo Shakhs Aur Mein
Shehar Bhar Mein Dhoodnta Raha Usey Kisi Pagal Ki Tarah

Madhosh Sa Ho Jata Hun Jab Barish Ki Boondein
ChheRti Hain Koi Naghma Us Ki Chhanakti Payal Ki Tarah

Mera Sukhan Us Ki Zaat Ka Mehwar Na Ho Tab Bhi
Wo NaazneeN Wo Dil NasheeN Hoga Mehakti Ghazal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah


HumTum

bahut khoob likha hai ye par kya aapne likha hai .................



BTW Aap ko kya lagta hai  ?
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2005, 11:05:39 AM »
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Dheerey Se Sarakti Hai Raat Us Ke Aanchal Ki Tarah
Us Ka Chehra Nazar Ata Hai jheel mein kanwal Ki Tarah

Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Roz Kehti Hai Seeney Pe Sir Rakh Ke Raat Bhar Sula'oun Gi
Sar-e-Shaam Hi Mujhey Aaj Phir Sula Gayi Wo Kal Ki Tarah

Us Ka Sharmaana Bhi Mujhey Maat De Jaataa Hai
Us Ki To Har Adaa Hai Kisi Khamosh Qatil Ki Tarah

Merey Hi Dil Ka MakeeN Nikla Wo Shakhs Aur Mein
Shehar Bhar Mein Dhoodnta Raha Usey Kisi Pagal Ki Tarah

Madhosh Sa Ho Jata Hun Jab Barish Ki Boondein
ChheRti Hain Koi Naghma Us Ki Chhanakti Payal Ki Tarah

Mera Sukhan Us Ki Zaat Ka Mehwar Na Ho Tab Bhi
Wo NaazneeN Wo Dil NasheeN Hoga Mehakti Ghazal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah


HumTum

bahut khoob likha hai ye par kya aapne likha hai .................



BTW Aap ko kya lagta hai  ?


mujay lagta hai ki aapne kahin se churaya hai           lol

wahi se mein post karti hu ek
ham saath chalney per bhi ek saath nahi the
ham dono wohi the mager jazbaat nahi the

daman mein meray dukh ke siwa kuch nahi dala
phir bhi yahi kehtay hai ke gunahgar nahi the

jis ishq ne mujh ko meri maa se alag rakhha
ham aisee mohabbat ke talabgaar nahi the

her rishtey ko tora hai faqt teray liye lekin
ham khushio ke haqdar aab bhi nahi the

sahil per kharee hoo per kinara nahi milta
ham aisey samnader ke aadee to nahi the

berso hoe jana ne khud ko nahi dekha
jab dekha to perkha, ham aisey to nahi the

(NM)

aur humtum ji   jo apni nahi hoti na shayeri uske niche likhte hain jaise maine likha   sorry btw
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2005, 11:07:44 AM »
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Quote from: "~Saloni~"
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Dheerey Se Sarakti Hai Raat Us Ke Aanchal Ki Tarah
Us Ka Chehra Nazar Ata Hai jheel mein kanwal Ki Tarah

Baad Muddat Us Ko Dekhaa To Jism o JaaN Ko Yun Lagaa
Piyaasi ZameeN Pe Jesey Koi Baras Gaya Badal Ki Tarah

Roz Kehti Hai Seeney Pe Sir Rakh Ke Raat Bhar Sula'oun Gi
Sar-e-Shaam Hi Mujhey Aaj Phir Sula Gayi Wo Kal Ki Tarah

Us Ka Sharmaana Bhi Mujhey Maat De Jaataa Hai
Us Ki To Har Adaa Hai Kisi Khamosh Qatil Ki Tarah

Merey Hi Dil Ka MakeeN Nikla Wo Shakhs Aur Mein
Shehar Bhar Mein Dhoodnta Raha Usey Kisi Pagal Ki Tarah

Madhosh Sa Ho Jata Hun Jab Barish Ki Boondein
ChheRti Hain Koi Naghma Us Ki Chhanakti Payal Ki Tarah

Mera Sukhan Us Ki Zaat Ka Mehwar Na Ho Tab Bhi
Wo NaazneeN Wo Dil NasheeN Hoga Mehakti Ghazal Ki Tarah

Nahee Tha KhaarzaroN Pe Tanha Be Sabab Safar "HumTum"
YaqeeN Tha Mil Jaye Ga Raah Mein Wo Manzil Ki Tarah


HumTum

bahut khoob likha hai ye par kya aapne likha hai .................



BTW Aap ko kya lagta hai  ?


mujay lagta hai ki aapne kahin se churaya hai           lol

wahi se mein post karti hu ek
ham saath chalney per bhi ek saath nahi the
ham dono wohi the mager jazbaat nahi the

daman mein meray dukh ke siwa kuch nahi dala
phir bhi yahi kehtay hai ke gunahgar nahi the

jis ishq ne mujh ko meri maa se alag rakhha
ham aisee mohabbat ke talabgaar nahi the

her rishtey ko tora hai faqt teray liye lekin
ham khushio ke haqdar aab bhi nahi the

sahil per kharee hoo per kinara nahi milta
ham aisey samnader ke aadee to nahi the

berso hoe jana ne khud ko nahi dekha
jab dekha to perkha, ham aisey to nahi the

(NM)

aur humtum ji   jo apni nahi hoti na shayeri uske niche likhte hain jaise maine likha   sorry btw


if you say it's not mine then write the name of shahar on my post ..... BTW
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2005, 11:57:52 AM »
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jaroor jaroor Mr. HUMTUM    iss gazal ko likha hai   "Muhammad Noman Qureshi" ji ne
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2005, 01:22:09 PM »
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jaroor jaroor Mr. HUMTUM    iss gazal ko likha hai   "Muhammad Noman Qureshi" ji ne


well done..... u r the best ....   Puzzled ! give me break willya ? oke  now tell who wrote this one ....

zindagi jeekar dekho to haseen lagti hai,
marke kisipar dekho zindagi kya cheez hai.

yoon to dua maangte the aksar khudah se,
ishq me doobkar dekho bandagi kya cheez hai.

dil seene me uchhalkar deta hai yoon dastak,
yeh haal humara hai kyon? Vo maujoodagi kya cheez hai?

kuch lamho ka nashaa hota hai sharaab me,
kisi nazarme utar kar dekho bekhoodi kya cheez hai.

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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2005, 07:14:32 PM »
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................hum tum.............................................. ...............................
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2005, 07:18:04 PM »
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jaroor jaroor Mr. HUMTUM    iss gazal ko likha hai   "Muhammad Noman Qureshi" ji ne


well done..... you r the best ....   Puzzled ! give me break willya ? oke  now tell who wrote this one ....

zindagi jeekar dekho to haseen lagti hai,
marke kisipar dekho zindagi kya cheez hai.

yoon to dua maangte the aksar khudah se,
ishq me doobkar dekho bandagi kya cheez hai.

dil seene me uchhalkar deta hai yoon dastak,
yeh haal humara hai kyon? Vo maujoodagi kya cheez hai?

kuch lamho ka nashaa hota hai sharaab me,
kisi nazarme utar kar dekho bekhoodi kya cheez hai.

 :arrow:


bahut acche hum tum j9i.............................................. ................................................. ................................. tongue3
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