uska razdaar

by rita mal on July 02, 2013, 02:10:37 PM
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wo apne dil se bhi apna haal-e-dil bayaan nahi karta
aur Hum khamkhah khud ko uska razdaar samajhte rahe

jis aas pe jeete the kabhi, wo aas dil me hi mar gayi
jis pyaas se marte the, us pyaas se khud hi ladte rahe

bahut lamba faasla aa gaya tha darmayaan hum dono ke
kaun uthayega pahla kadam, is baat pe hi jagadte rahe

daayra humne bana dala tha, daayaron ke beech rah ke
un daayaron ko todne ka jhootha ek  dum bharte rahe

na fursaten wahan thin, na faraagaten humare paas
fir bhi dono khud ki masrufiyaton se mukarte rahe....
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2013, 03:52:23 PM »
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jis aas pe jeete the kabhi, wo aas dil me hi mar gayi
jis pyaas se marte the, us pyaas se khud hi ladte rahe

bahut lamba faasla aa gaya tha darmayaan hum dono ke
kaun uthayega pahla kadam, is baat pe hi jagadte rahe

Waah wah...
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2013, 04:25:01 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2013, 04:52:12 PM »
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Rita Jee Aadaab.. !

Bahut khoob jee, kafi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne bade hi dilfareb khayaal rahe..

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2013, 01:00:50 PM »
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bahut achchi kalaam ritaji. sabhi ashaar bahut khoob hai. hazaron dili daad..
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2013, 01:03:11 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2013, 09:10:32 PM »
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