Uski Duaao.n Main Hoon......!!

by Talat on July 12, 2009, 12:44:43 AM
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Shayad iss ghazal ke kuch asha'ar maine kisi purane thread main likhe the.

Kuch tabdiliyon ke saath, kuch naye asha'ar ke saath phir se post kar rahi hoon,
Umeed hai pasand aaygi ye peshkash.
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2009, 02:27:20 AM »
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Wow Celmira ji,bahut hi khoobsurat gazal hai,mindblwing,
 icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:wonderful creation.excellent
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2009, 03:15:48 AM »
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bahut khoob talat ,pure metre mein hai ye ghazal,bahut achche.
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2009, 03:24:07 AM »
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Nice  one Celmira Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2009, 04:46:32 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Dost!!! Kuch Lafz Hi Nahi Mere Paas Jo Iss Ghazal Ki Tareef mein Kuch Keh Sake....

Bahut Hi Pyaare Aur Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hai Yeh..

Aakhri As'haar Ne To Chehre Par Ek Muskaan Si Laa Di.. Usual Smile

Toooo Goood Talat Dost!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2009, 05:32:06 AM »
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kya baat hai  celmira ji.....

jab se paaya hai usko,hosh kahan hai mujhko.
ab toh kudrat ke rang bhi, fike nazar aate hai mujhko.

unki nigaaoun se hatt ti kahan hai meri nazar,
hogai hun  duniya se,main bekhabar.

ab na zameen chahiye,na aasman chahiye mujhko,
bas WOH, sirf WOH, WOH hi WOH chahiye mujhko.
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2009, 06:47:04 AM »
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Mashallah, Bohat Achcha Kalaam Hai,.
Great Job Talat Ji,.
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2009, 07:38:38 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 12:44:43 AM
Shayad iss ghazal ke kuch asha'ar maine kisi purane thread main likhe the.

Kuch tabdiliyon ke saath, kuch naye asha'ar ke saath phir se post kar rahi hoon,
Umeed hai pasand aaygi ye peshkash.


talat kya baat hai bhut hi khoob tareef ke liyn alfaaz dhoondne padte hain aapke liyn jisse bhi kaho paish hone ke liyn keh daita hai ki aap pehle istemaal kar chuke ho hame, mashallah bhut khoob likhti ho Allah paak aapke is hunar ko aur nikhaare aameen
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2009, 08:31:02 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne dear Talat and Caraji aapne b accha saat diya hai  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2009, 08:51:25 AM »
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Wah Wah Talat Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaas Bikhere Hain aapne Yahan.. Lajawab Alfaazon Ke sath Behad Mohabbat Bhari Peshkash Hai yeh aapmi.. Khaas kar Aakhri Jumla dil tak Utar gaya.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


Khud Ko Deewaana, Aur Tujhe Apsara Qaraar Kar Doonga,
Basa Ke Seene Me, dil Ke Har Kone Ko Aashiaan Kar Doonga.....

Nikhaarunga Husn Tera, Kuch Aise Chaandni Raat Me Dilbar,
Har Ek Haseen Nazaare Ko, Main Tera Gulaam Kar Doonga...!!



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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2009, 03:00:13 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 12, 2009, 02:27:20 AM
Wow Celmira ji,bahut hi khoobsurat gazal hai,mindblwing,
 icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:wonderful creation.excellent

Thanks so much Madhu dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2009, 06:14:05 PM »
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Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on July 12, 2009, 03:15:48 AM
bahut khoob talat ,pure metre mein hai ye ghazal,bahut achche.

Tah-e-dil se shukriya aap Saaz Ji, bohot khushi hui aap ka comment yahan dekh kar...Bohot shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2009, 04:21:11 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat Likha hai Talat..

Beautifull as ever... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 13, 2009, 06:40:22 PM »
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bohot khoob celmira ji... Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2009, 10:00:50 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 12, 2009, 03:24:07 AM
Nice  one Celmira Ji

Thank You Rajesh Ji
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