Uski Duaao.n Main Hoon......!!

by Talat on July 12, 2009, 12:44:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 03, 2009, 01:04:49 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 12, 2009, 04:46:32 AM
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Dost!!! Kuch Lafz Hi Nahi Mere Paas Jo Iss Nazm Ki Tareef mein Kuch Keh Sake....

Bahut Hi Pyaare Aur Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hai Yeh..

Aakhri As'haar Ne To Chehre Par Ek Muskaan Si Laa Di.. Usual Smile

Toooo Goood Talat Dost!!! Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Khwaish Dost..aap ko pasand aaya...bohot achcha laga...Thanks for always reading  icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: August 03, 2009, 02:17:17 PM »
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its beautiful talat..bohot hi pyara likha hai!
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«Reply #17 on: August 05, 2009, 12:40:06 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 12, 2009, 05:32:06 AM
kya baat hai  celmira ji.....

jab se paaya hai usko,hosh kahan hai mujhko.
ab toh kudrat ke rang bhi, fike nazar aate hai mujhko.

unki nigaaoun se hatt ti kahan hai meri nazar,
hogai hun  duniya se,main bekhabar.

ab na zameen chahiye,na aasman chahiye mujhko,
bas WOH, sirf WOH, WOH hi WOH chahiye mujhko.

Thanks a lot Cara

Very nice from you as well...Bohot Khoob
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«Reply #18 on: August 11, 2009, 02:22:52 PM »
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Aree Waah Talat Ji.... bahut khoob ... kaafi arse baad ishq ki galiyooN mein aana hua to aap ki yeh gazal nazar hui .... kamal ka likha hai .....  daad qabuul kareN.


Arz Kiya Hai


Hawaa'yooN Mein Aaj Kal Unke Paigaam Aate HaiN
Do Lafz Muhoobat Se Bhare, Mere Naam Aate HaiN

Bhikari JulfieN, Gehri AnkheiN, Surak Honth
Yeh Hahthkande Sabhi Muhhobat Ke Kaam Aate HaiN

Has Ke Seh Lete HaiN Hum Zamane Ki TalkhiyaN
Unki JulfooN Mein Jab Kar Ke Qayaam Aate HaiN

"HumTum" Dil_lagi Asiaa Januun Ban Gyii
Har Ik Shai Mein Woh Ban Kar Benaam Aate HaiN!


HumTum
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«Reply #19 on: August 11, 2009, 04:07:53 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya mehfil saji hai.. bahoot khoob Celmira!!
Cara ji, Mann ji and Humtum ji bahoot acha likha hai app sabhi ne... Good work all  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: August 13, 2009, 05:46:26 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 12:44:43 AM
Shayad iss ghazal ke kuch asha'ar maine kisi purane thread main likhe the.

Kuch tabdiliyon ke saath, kuch naye asha'ar ke saath phir se post kar rahi hoon,
Umeed hai pasand aaygi ye peshkash.

Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 12:44:43 AM
Shayad iss ghazal ke kuch asha'ar maine kisi purane thread main likhe the.

Kuch tabdiliyon ke saath, kuch naye asha'ar ke saath phir se post kar rahi hoon,
Umeed hai pasand aaygi ye peshkash.


bahut khoob talat jee bahut he badhiyaa...
alfaaz nahi hai tareef karne
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«Reply #21 on: August 13, 2009, 06:00:50 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 12, 2009, 05:32:06 AM
kya baat hai  celmira ji.....

jab se paaya hai usko,hosh kahan hai mujhko.
ab toh kudrat ke rang bhi, fike nazar aate hai mujhko.

unki nigaaoun se hatt ti kahan hai meri nazar,
hogai hun  duniya se,main bekhabar.

ab na zameen chahiye,na aasman chahiye mujhko,
bas WOH, sirf WOH, WOH hi WOH chahiye mujhko.

Thanks a lot Cara Ji....and a nice one from you too....
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«Reply #22 on: August 13, 2009, 06:07:55 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on July 12, 2009, 06:47:04 AM
Mashallah, Bohat Achcha Kalaam Hai,.
Great Job Talat Ji,.

Thanks so much Azeem
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«Reply #23 on: August 15, 2009, 07:23:04 AM »
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Celmira jee:

Asalaam-o-Alaikum!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki Ghazal naZar nawaaz hu'ii. ka'ii baar paRhaa ees Khoobsoorat se aSh'aar ko maine .. aik dil-pazeer Ghazal aapne bazm meiN peSh kii haii!... dil pe gehraa asar ga'ii aapki yeh Ghazal.. waise tou sabhee Sher bahot hi Khuub raheN.. mujhe Ghazal kaa matlaa aur maqtaa donoN bahot hi pasaNd aayeN!.. dil se DheroN saarii daad ees nafees Ghazal ke liye! yuuNhi bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiYe!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #24 on: August 16, 2009, 04:13:36 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 12, 2009, 07:38:38 AM
talat kya baat hai bhut hi khoob tareef ke liyn alfaaz dhoondne padte hain aapke liyn jisse bhi kaho paish hone ke liyn keh daita hai ki aap pehle istemaal kar chuke ho hame, mashallah bhut khoob likhti ho Allah paak aapke is hunar ko aur nikhaare aameen

LOL Aslam Ji....aap to sharmsaar kar rahe hain.....ye aapki zarra-nawazi hai jo aapko humara likha is qadar pasand aata hai.....aap khud ek behtareen shayar hain aur aapki hausla-afzai bohot maa'ene rakhti hai......Thanks so much for your beautiful words for me Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: August 16, 2009, 04:17:47 PM »
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bahut khoob Talt ji
pphir se kehna padega
Alfaz e bayaan to koi aap se sikhe
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«Reply #26 on: August 18, 2009, 05:27:22 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 08:31:02 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne dear Talat and Caraji aapne b accha saat diya hai  Thumbs UP

Thanks Roja dear
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«Reply #27 on: August 20, 2009, 08:37:38 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 12, 2009, 08:51:25 AM
Wah Wah Talat Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaas Bikhere Hain aapne Yahan.. Lajawab Alfaazon Ke sath Behad Mohabbat Bhari Peshkash Hai yeh aapmi.. Khaas kar Aakhri Jumla dil tak Utar gaya.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


Khud Ko Deewaana, Aur Tujhe Apsara Qaraar Kar Doonga,
Basa Ke Seene Me, dil Ke Har Kone Ko Aashiaan Kar Doonga.....

Nikhaarunga Husn Tera, Kuch Aise Chaandni Raat Me Dilbar,
Har Ek Haseen Nazaare Ko, Main Tera Gulaam Kar Doonga...!!



**~** Mann **~**

Bohot bohot shukriya Mann Ji.......aur aapne bhi behad achcha likha hai...Bohot Khoob  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #28 on: August 20, 2009, 01:56:42 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 13, 2009, 12:38:24 PM
waah behad hi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat ji
saare sher bahot achhe lage,bahot khumaari hai ghazal me
matla,maqta ke saath teesra sher bahot hi acha laga

 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

khumaari se badhkar kahan kuch hai
khumaari ki nisbat se niha sabkuch hai

mohabbat ki hamesha se hi ye ek ada si hai
khumaari begair mohabbat kahan kuch hai




Thanks so much Kaash Ji for always reading and appreciating my  work....aur aapne bhi bohot khoob likha hai...Very nice.
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«Reply #29 on: August 23, 2009, 08:36:41 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji & Talat Ji.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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