Uski nazron se barsati chahat.....soudagar

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Mehboob par mar mitne ki wajah likh raha hoon
madhosh kar dene wali uski ada likh raha hoon

uski nazron se barsate chahat ke jaam kaa
apni aakhon mein chadhta nasha likh raha hoon

mujhe mohabbat mein bna liya usne apna khuda
mujhe tut kar chahne ki uski wafa likh raha hoon

prem ki dor mein is qadar bandh gaye hum dono
umr bhar rk duje ko chahne ki rja likh raha hoon

uski mohabbat mein is qadar doob gaya hoon "soudagar"
ek pal ki duri ko sadiyon ki saza likh raha hoon
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 08:51:15 AM »
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bahut khoob betaa keep it up
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bahut khoob soudagar ji Applause :clap:clap: ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 10:05:37 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji...!!!
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BAhut Khub Karan Ji
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Bohat Khub!!!! Very Romantic!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 11:09:24 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 30, 2012, 08:04:34 AM
Mehboob par mar mitne ki wajah likh raha hoon
madhosh kar dene wali uski ada likh raha hoon

uski nazron se barsate chahat ke jaam kaa
apni aakhon mein chadhta nasha likh raha hoon

mujhe mohabbat mein bna liya usne apna khuda
mujhe tut kar chahne ki uski wafa likh raha hoon

prem ki dor mein is qadar bandh gaye hum dono
umr bhar ek duje ko chahne ki raza likh raha hoon

uski mohabbat mein is qadar doob gaya hoon "soudagar"
ek pal ki duri ko sadiyon ki saza likh raha hoon


'wajah' shayad doosre kafiye ke saath mail nahin khata hai. check kar lein.kalaam acha hai Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 01:09:21 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
pahla misra...
bahut umda Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 05:31:13 PM »
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Bahut hi achha likha hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 02:42:57 PM »
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bahut achhe .. Usual Smile

Applause Applause
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shukriya saini sir .... corection nahi ho raha hai uske liye kya karein aap  batayein mujhe
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shukriya pankaj ji
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