Uski tadap

by Jaabeer on July 17, 2013, 02:52:49 PM
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Meri chahat k fulo ko julsa rahi he,
Sirf mujko nahi khud ko tadpa rahe he.

Kami meri mehhsoos hoti to hogi tuje bhi,
Bata de k khud ko tu kaise behla rahi he.

Raat dhalte hi khwabo me pohchati thi mujko,
Wohi mujse neende meri aaj cheene ja rahi he.

Uski bhi koi to majboori hogi samaj le "Suroor",
Pyaar me aakhe dhokha nahi kha rahi he.
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2013, 02:56:24 PM »
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kya baat hai jaabeer ji... bht mastttttt...
pehli baar padha aapko aur padhkar achha laga... keep writing and improving ur work...
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achchi peshkash. dheron daad..
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2013, 03:58:50 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2013, 06:32:01 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2013, 06:33:23 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2013, 07:49:17 PM »
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very nice
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