Usko Apne Andar Main Dekhta Hoon,.

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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2010, 10:39:35 PM »
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bahut khoob azeem ji..bahut hi mhbt bhari nazm hai apki...

Ek Umr Guzri Pyaar Ke Boond Ko Tarasta Raha,.
Ab Ke Baras "Lekin Chahaton Ka Samandar Dekhta Hoon,.

ye lines khamoshi se dil ko chhu gyi...amazing..to gud..Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: February 05, 2010, 06:57:46 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat pesh Kiye Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2010, 12:37:17 PM »
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Azeem saaHeb:

Aadaab-o-namaskaar!

aapki peShkaSh Khoob rahiiN.. pyaar bhare ehsaas haMeShaa dil ko Chhu jaate hai.n aur aapki ees peShkaSh meiN muHabbat ki taDap naZar aayiiN.. Khudaa se duaa yahee hai aapki ziNdagee pyaar se sajti rahe.n! aise hi liKhate raheN aage bhee! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Aameen Shukriya Dhaval JI,.
Bohat Khushi Hui Ke Aapko Ye Kalaam Hamara Pasand Aaya,.

Wah wah Azeem bhai badi achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Is baar ek naya andaaz dekhne ko mila aapke kalaam mein. Shandaar, nafees alfaaz ka istemaal kiya hai.

Shukriya Riyaz Bhai, Hamari Khush Kismati Hai ke Aap Jaise Umdah Shayari Ko jaane Waale Hamare Kalaamo Par Comment Karte Hain,.

Thank U Bhai,.

Azeem Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat se Bharpoor Alfaaz Bikhre hain aapne Yahan.. Har ek lafz Me Ishq Hi Ishq Nazar aaya.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash.. Applause Applause



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Shukriya Mann Bhai,.
Khushi Hoti Hai Aapke Comments Dekhke,.
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«Reply #18 on: February 07, 2010, 12:39:28 PM »
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Wonderful Creation Azeem... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Azeem... God Bless U !
Shukriya Sophi,.

Azeem Meri Jaan Kya Tareef Karun Yaar Teri
Sachme Dil Mein Utar Gaya Tera Yeh Kalaam
Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Bhai Mere...
Aashiq Ho To Tere Jaisa...

ALLAH Pak Tujhe Har Ranj o Gham Se Mehfooz Rakhe
Ameen Bahut Bahut Khush Raho...

Shihab

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Shukriya Mere Bhai, Ke Tumhe Ye Kalaam pasand Aaya,.
Allah Khair Kare,.
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«Reply #19 on: February 07, 2010, 12:40:59 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai Azeem ji...bahut hi khoobsurat alfaaz...aur bahut hi behtreen,lajwaab....kya kahu...shabd hi nahi mil rahe....superb.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause

Shukriya Nikhaar Ji,.

May Allah Bless U Me And all,.

Wah bahut khoob Azeem bhai.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
Thanks Madhuwesh Sis,.
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«Reply #20 on: February 07, 2010, 12:47:26 PM »
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Hmm...Azeem bhai khamosh kardia hume apne apni iss peshkash se..Bahaut sunder likha hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Main yeh baat dil se kehta hoon ike you are one of my fac writers...I always do and will keep readin you...Hamesha khush raho aur likte raho...

Ye Hamari Khush Naseebi Hai Ke Aap Hume Itna Chahte Ho Bhai,.
Allah Sab Asaan Kare, Tumhari Har Raah Ko Asaan Kare,.

Aameen,.

Best Of Luck For Second Innings,.
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«Reply #21 on: February 07, 2010, 12:49:56 PM »
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good one azeem...i can imagine how deep u feel for this

Awesome

Shukriya Song Writer Ji,.

Nice and romantic creation Azeem.  Thumbs UP

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«Reply #22 on: February 07, 2010, 12:53:06 PM »
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Bahut Khub Azeem Bhai ApplauseApplause

Shukriya Rishi Bhai,.
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