Usne....!! (Adab)

by drpandey on October 13, 2014, 08:26:08 PM
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मेरे दर की कोई जंजीर हिला दी उसने।
जैसे पानी में फ़क़त आग लगा दी उसने।

एक अर्से से थी बीरान दिले-महफ़िल जो,
आज की शाम हसीं बज़्म सजा दी उसने।

हद्दे दीवार थी कुछ और कहाँ था दरम्याँ,
नीम मुस्कान से उसको भी गिरा दी उसने।

एक हम ही नहीं, हैं लाखों दीवाने उसके,
मुझको ये बात इशारों में बता दी उसने।

वो जो मीनार हवाओँ के पर क़तरती थी,
नाज़ो-अंदाज़ से बुनियाद हिला दी उसने।

अबतो मिट्टी से भी आने लगी है खुशबू सी,
कौन सी शय है जो हाथों से मिला दी उसने।

बस यही सोच के हैरान 'अदब' का दिल है,
जाने क्या घोल के आँखों से पिला दी उसने?

- अदब
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2014, 12:34:41 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2014, 01:13:43 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2014, 07:29:53 AM »
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Quote from: drpandey on October 13, 2014, 08:26:08 PM
मेरे दर की कोई जंजीर हिला दी उसने।
जैसे पानी में फ़क़त आग लगा दी उसने।

एक अर्से से थी बीरान दिले-महफ़िल जो,
आज की शाम हसीं बज़्म सजा दी उसने।

हद्दे दीवार थी कुछ और कहाँ था दरम्याँ,
नीम मुस्कान से उसको भी गिरा दी उसने।

एक हम ही नहीं, हैं लाखों दीवाने उसके,
मुझको ये बात इशारों में बता दी उसने।

वो जो मीनार हवाओँ के पर क़तरती थी,
नाज़ो-अंदाज़ से बुनियाद हिला दी उसने।

अबतो मिट्टी से भी आने लगी है खुशबू सी,
कौन सी शय है जो हाथों से मिला दी उसने।

बस यही सोच के हैरान 'अदब' का दिल है,
जाने क्या घोल के आँखों से पिला दी उसने?

- अदब
Kya baat hai.Waah waah.......
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2014, 09:24:54 AM »
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Wah!!! Boaht Khub!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2014, 09:30:41 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Pandey Sir Jee Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2014, 03:36:19 PM »
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वो जो मीनार हवाओँ के पर क़तरती थी,
नाज़ो-अंदाज़ से बुनियाद हिला दी उसने।
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ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2014, 04:28:40 PM »
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 Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab,
                    bahut umda ghazal kahi hai.......meri daad qubool farmayein

                      .............................Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2014, 07:47:14 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 14, 2014, 03:36:19 PM
वो जो मीनार हवाओँ के पर क़तरती थी,
नाज़ो-अंदाज़ से बुनियाद हिला दी उसने।
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaaaaaad

Tahe-dil se shukriya SURESH SANGWAN ji......!!

-Adab
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2014, 10:01:15 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai Janaab, dheron daad.
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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2014, 05:15:15 AM »
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bahut khub bdi sunder gjl hae appk
dikhti hae parchhaee  gjl me aapki

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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2014, 11:35:29 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on October 14, 2014, 10:01:15 PM
bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai Janaab, dheron daad.
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Behad shukria Surindarn Ji...!!

-Adab
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2014, 11:38:30 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on October 15, 2014, 05:15:15 AM
icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khub bdi sunder gjl hae appk
dikhti hae parchhaee  gjl me aapki

Ram Krishan rastogi

Tahe-dil se shukriya Bhai Ram Krishan Rastogi Ji...!!

Aapka sher behad umda laga dheron daad...!!

-Adab
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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2014, 11:41:08 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on October 14, 2014, 04:28:40 PM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab,
                    bahut umda ghazal kahi hai.......meri daad qubool farmayein

                      .............................Syed Mohd Mahzar

Janaab Syed Mohd Mahzar sahib,

Adaab...!!

Aapka tahe-dil se shukriya....!!

-Adab
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Quote from: Shihab on October 14, 2014, 09:30:41 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Pandey Sir Jee Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab


Shihab bhai Adaab...!!

Bahot dinon ke baad aapki nazre-inayat hui, behad shukriya...!!

-Adab
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