usne mujhe chukar nahi dekha ,,,,sunil

by sunildehgawani on September 27, 2011, 11:30:34 AM
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 saawan ki fuharon ne saawan nahi dekha
 kasti ke musafir ne samander nahi dekha
 mere chahne wali kahti hai mujhe patthar
 mai mom hoon usne mujhe chukar nahi dekha  
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2011, 12:22:33 PM »
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 saawan ki fuharon ne saawan nahi dekha
 kasti ke musafir ne samander nahi dekha
 mere chahne wali kahti hai mujhe patthar
 mai mom hoon usne mujhe chukar nahi dekha 


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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2011, 12:24:45 PM »
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 saawan ki fuharon ne saawan nahi dekha
 kasti ke musafir ne samander nahi dekha
 mere chahne wali kahti hai mujhe patthar
 mai mom hoon usne mujhe chukar nahi dekha 

 waaaaaaaaaaaaaah. sunaa hua sher hai. is liye NM LIKHEIN



            sehre ke musafir ne kabhi rait nahin dekh..!
            kisaano.n ne lahlahate khait nahin dekha...!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2011, 12:25:13 PM »
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BAhut Khoob Sunil Ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2011, 01:05:12 PM »
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,,,,,kahan suna thha ji aapne ....adil ji ....aur who is author of these lines ,,,,,,

 waaaaaaaaaaaaaah. sunaa hua sher hai. is liye NM LIKHEIN



            sehre ke musafir ne kabhi rait nahin dekh..!
            kisaano.n ne lahlahate khait nahin dekha...!!

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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2011, 01:09:50 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 28, 2011, 09:36:21 AM »
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Sunil Ji ..bahut umdaa peshkash hai, feelings lajawab hai!
Keep writing! ...Annu
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