Utraa hai aalok!

by abdbundeli on February 12, 2009, 11:07:36 AM
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Duniyaa key wyvbdhaan* sab,
Tum ko sakey na rok**!
Priya! Swaagat mein, chaturdik#,
Utraa hai aalok##!!

*   Obstructions
** Detain
#   In all the four directions
## Pleasing Light
       - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'

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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2009, 11:09:59 AM »
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Bohot pyaari lines hain Abd Ji...Very Sweet !
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2009, 11:27:47 AM »
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Very NIce ABD ji.
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2009, 11:53:55 AM »
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Bohot pyaari lines hain Abd Ji...Very Sweet !
Shukriyah Celmira ji!
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2009, 11:54:35 AM »
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Very NIce ABD ji.
Thanks Sophi ji!
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2009, 01:58:11 PM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Nice Lines,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 02:16:22 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob likha hai apne abd ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2009, 05:38:18 PM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Nice Lines,.
Shukriyah Jaanasheen Bhaayi!
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2009, 05:39:25 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob likha hai apne abd ji Clapping Smiley
Shukriyah salma786 ji!
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