Uttar do!

by abdbundeli on December 30, 2008, 01:44:03 PM
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Tumhain pukaar-pukaar kar,
Haar na jaayen praan!
Uttar do, awilamb hee,
Pulak uthhaa hai ghraan*!!

*Sense of smell
            - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2008, 01:57:36 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 30, 2008, 01:44:03 PM
Tumhain pukaar-pukaar kar
Haar na jaayen praan!
Uttar do, awilamb hee,
Pulak uthhaa hai ghraan!!

            - Ramwatiya


simply good Ramjii
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2008, 02:09:26 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on December 30, 2008, 01:57:36 PM
simply good Ram (watiya) jii
Thanks Sonia01 ji!
 'Ramwatiya' is my Pen-Name for my writings in Hindi!
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2008, 03:04:12 PM »
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Pran arpan karu
Vidhata ke charno pe
Hriday arpan karu
Bolte nainan pe
Meri sadhna ka fal yeh hain
Muje mukhti mile tere aalingan me

                 -sg-
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2008, 03:16:39 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 30, 2008, 02:09:26 PM
Thanks Sonia01 ji!
 'Ramwatiya' is my Pen-Name for my writings in Hindi!
                                        - abd bundeli         


Nice to know you abd jii... vakai bahut accha likhte ho.
deserve clap for all your wonderful creations... till date
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 03:48:32 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 30, 2008, 03:04:12 PM
Pran arpan karu
Vidhata ke charno pe
Hriday arpan karu
Bolte nainan pe
Meri sadhna ka fal yeh hai
Muje mukhti mile tere aalingan me
                 -sg-

Really a lovely stanza that communicates a lot.
                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 03:52:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on December 30, 2008, 03:16:39 PM
Nice to know you abd jii... vakai bahut accha likhte ho.
deserve clap for all your wonderful creations... till date
Thanks Sonia01 ji! It's all your kindness that you feel so!
                               - abd bundeli
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