Vo ehsas ab bhi hai...R...

by brokenbyluv on April 22, 2010, 09:11:26 PM
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Din bhar main uski betaabi ko mehsus karti rahi,
aur use bhi apni kuch haqiqato se rubaru karti rahi,

uski baato mein ek hulchul thi,
uski ankho mein guzri raat k khuab ki
mujhe chhu lene ki hasrat thi,

dopeher ki us dhoop mein kabhi merre ghar wale bulate,
tou kabhi uske ghar wale use ander aane ko kehte,
per  hum abhi aa rahe hai keh kuch der aur baate karne lagte,
ek duje k sath mile waqt mein mhbt k ehsas mein bikharne lagte,

chalo ab chalte hai keh kar jate jate hum ruk jate,
ghadi dekh kuch der aur baate kar le soch phir kho jate,

jo bandhan hamein rok raha tha vo hamari dhadkano ka saaz tha,
jo kabhi merre lafzo ki tou kabhi uski nigaho ki awaaz tha,

shaam ko achanak vo mujhe raah mein mil gaya,
use dekhte hi merra chehra khushi se khil gaya,

mujhe dekhte hi dagmaga gye uske kadam,
jab apna hath badhaya maine tou usne thaam liya,
phir ek minute rukna kehkar usne mujhe chaht ka paigam diya,

hatho mein tha uske merra hath
na maine chhudaya na usne chhodne ki chah jatayi,
hum bhare bazar mein khade hai naa chahte hue bhi
maine use iss baat ki yad dilayi,

sirrf kuch lamhe the hamare paas ek duje ko dekhne k,
bahut kuch kehna tha per lab hamare sile the,
jate hue MERRA AJNABI ek chaht ka nazrana de gaya,
uski talab ki vo mithaas ab bhi hai..
merre hath per uske labo ka vo ehsas ab bhi hai......
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2010, 09:18:44 PM »
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Wah awsome amezing...geet har lafz me dard bhi hai aur mohabbat bhi sach me alfaaz nahi mil rahe hai tareef ke liye...god bless u dear wonderfull creation... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 09:35:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriya pari ji mujhe bahut khushi hui ki apko merri koshish pasand aayi......
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 09:58:33 PM »
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Its my pleasure dear..
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 10:00:51 PM »
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Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2010, 10:16:03 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Geet ji.... iska ek ek shabd mohabbat me dooba hua hai.. bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2010, 12:24:37 AM »
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Vry Vry Gud!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2010, 03:29:56 AM »
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Bahut uchkoti ki rachna hai aap ki Geet Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 23, 2010, 05:58:36 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai        Brokenbyluv ji......


peheli bar usey dekh jo mera dil machla tha
wo mere dil ka machalna ab bhi hai
peheli bar uske chune sey jo mere tan-man me hulchal hui thi
us hulchal ka machalna ab bhi hai
jaate jaate jo degaya hai mujhko "Vo ehsaas ab bhi hai"......
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2010, 06:14:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji,kapil ji,neel ji,cara ji n shihab ji..

cara ji achi koshish hai per thoda behtar bhi ho sakta tha...
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2010, 06:52:26 PM »
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U r always welcome Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 24, 2010, 06:14:57 PM
bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji,kapil ji,neel ji,cara ji n shihab ji..

cara ji achi koshish hai per thoda behtar bhi ho sakta tha...
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2010, 11:24:51 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 22, 2010, 09:11:26 PM
Din bhar main uski betaabi ko mehsus karti rahi,
aur use bhi apni kuch haqiqato se rubaru karti rahi,

uski baato mein ek hulchul thi,
uski ankho mein guzri raat k khuab ki
mujhe chhu lene ki hasrat thi,

dopeher ki us dhoop mein kabhi merre ghar wale bulate,
tou kabhi uske ghar wale use ander aane ko kehte,
per  hum abhi aa rahe hai keh kuch der aur baate karne lagte,
ek duje k sath mile waqt mein mhbt k ehsas mein bikharne lagte,

chalo ab chalte hai keh kar jate jate hum ruk jate,
ghadi dekh kuch der aur baate kar le soch phir kho jate,

jo bandhan hamein rok raha tha vo hamari dhadkano ka saaz tha,
jo kabhi merre lafzo ki tou kabhi uski nigaho ki awaaz tha,

shaam ko achanak vo mujhe raah mein mil gaya,
use dekhte hi merra chehra khushi se khil gaya,

mujhe dekhte hi dagmaga gye uske kadam,
jab apna hath badhaya maine tou usne thaam liya,
phir ek minute rukna kehkar usne mujhe chaht ka paigam diya,

hatho mein tha uske merra hath
na maine chhudaya na usne chhodne ki chah jatayi,
hum bhare bazar mein khade hai naa chahte hue bhi
maine use iss baat ki yad dilayi,

sirrf kuch lamhe the hamare paas ek duje ko dekhne k,
bahut kuch kehna tha per lab hamare sile the,
jate hue MERRA AJNABI ek chaht ka nazrana de gaya,
uski talab ki vo mithaas ab bhi hai..
merre hath per uske labo ka vo ehsas ab bhi hai......








bhoot khoob.....!
badaa hi pyara ehasaas hai

wo aana uska aur, dekhna mujhe yu pahali bar
yaad aa gya fir, tir_e_nazar ka wo pahala war..!
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2010, 05:28:11 AM »
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Geet jee:

namaste!

baRe dinoN baad aapki koShiSh ko paRh rahaa huuN.. Khoob liKhaa hay.. ehsaasoN ki zubaannii umdaah rahiiN!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2010, 11:15:59 AM »
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shukriya chitra ji n dhaval ji..nice lines chitra ji...
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2010, 11:31:33 AM »
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Bahot khoob BBL ji bahot achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Yadon ka ek khazaana hai ye. Nice creation.
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