..~~vo hawa ban kar jism mein behti jaati hai~~..

by HumTum on July 05, 2005, 08:50:46 AM
Pages: 1 2 3 [4]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 5249 times)
HumTum
Guest
«Reply #45 on: July 21, 2005, 10:35:09 AM »
Reply with quote
waah waah ....  :thumb:

hai pyaar tumse itna ke mien keh nhi sakta
tu na aaye nazar to koi acha nazara nhi lagta
ik tumhi ko to basaya hai dil min apne
ik tere siwa duniya mein koi hamara nhi lagta !!
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
chali hay shaher mein kesi hawa udasi ki by bakwashayar in Shayri-E-Dard
badal jaati hai hawa bhi apana rukh!!! by ranjana in Shayri-E-Dard
JAISE YAKH BASTA HAWA HO KE THEHER JAATI HE by khalidrawat in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
MUTHI MEIN BHAR KAR DHOOL, HAWA MEIN UCHAAL DI...... by khwahish in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 3 4  All »
Meena
Guest
«Reply #46 on: July 21, 2005, 10:40:16 AM »
Reply with quote
waj janab...now that was such a lovelyyyy sher!! menu bada acha laga  :D

hum sirf tere hai oh yaara, isme tum yakeen kar lo,
aa kar meri zindagi me meri duniya bhi tum haseen kar do!
Logged
HumTum
Guest
«Reply #47 on: July 21, 2005, 10:44:45 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya ji ..... aor kya khoob likha hai  !!!

mein to tumhare dil mein hoon bsa
tumhari har dadhkan ke saaz mein hoon
mein bsa hoon har ik khayaal mein tere
mein tumhari hi muhhobat ki awaaz hoon !!!
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #48 on: July 21, 2005, 10:54:46 AM »
Reply with quote
very gud!!!!!!!!

Khuda se kiye mere har sawa lka jawab hai tu,
dekha ta jo barso se woh haqiqat bane wala khwab hai tu,
badak gaye raha se jab andhere ne gera humne!
meri zindagi me rasta dikhane wala woh chirag hai tu!
Logged
HumTum
Guest
«Reply #49 on: July 21, 2005, 11:00:09 AM »
Reply with quote
sachiii :?:  !!!!

ehsaan khuda ka bhalla kis trah adda kru
tujhey bna ke mere liye mujhey zanaat di hai
kyun itni duur rehti hai jaan meri
aaj dil ne mere mujh se yeh shikayaat ki hai !!!
Logged
sandhaya
Guest
«Reply #50 on: July 21, 2005, 12:20:26 PM »
Reply with quote
kya baat hai Meena Ji ..and HUmtum Janab .........bahut khoob ..........

Kaise hai aap sab .........main aaj 2 din baad yahan aai hun ..........monday ko vaishno devi gai thi na issiliye........aap sab ko Jai Mata Di
Logged
HumTum
Guest
«Reply #51 on: July 21, 2005, 02:59:32 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai Meena Ji ..and HUmtum Janab .........bahut khoob ..........

Kaise hai aap sab .........main aaj 2 din baad yahan aai hun ..........monday ko vaishno devi gai thi na issiliye........aap sab ko Jai Mata Di


jai mata di .. sandhaya ji .. dharshan achey ho gaye na !! Accaully was missin uor shayri !! clo ab to aap aa gaye ho !!!  :D
Logged
Meena
Guest
«Reply #52 on: July 21, 2005, 03:28:08 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "sandhaya"
kya baat hai Meena Ji ..and HUmtum Janab .........bahut khoob ..........

Kaise hai aap sab .........main aaj 2 din baad yahan aai hun ..........monday ko vaishno devi gai thi na issiliye........aap sab ko Jai Mata Di


Jai Mata Di... :D  arre mujhe bhi saath le jati sandhaya ji sad5  bohot saalo se chahat hai jane ki par bulawa hi nahin aya... sad5

chalo aab aap aa gayi ha ito jam ke shayari hogi!  :D
Logged
sandhaya
Guest
«Reply #53 on: July 22, 2005, 12:19:59 PM »
Reply with quote
Ji humtum ji darshan ache ho gaye ...........aur meena ji mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap mere saath jana chahngi ........aur vaise bhi achanak program ban gaya jane ka ......humtum ji acha laga sunke ki aapne hume miss kiya .....maine bhi aap sab ko bahut miss kiya.............aur haan abh jaam ke shayari hogi ......meena ji ........

Tujhe mil jayen teri khusian main dua karungi
tere khusion ki khatir jo jarurat padi tuh main mar bhi jaungi
Logged
plagiarism
Guest
«Reply #54 on: July 23, 2005, 06:55:44 AM »
Reply with quote
Give credit where it is due
http://www.ebazm.com/discus/messages/4/3388.html?1082615468
When someone says that its a realy nice ghazal, dont just say thanks and take credit, let them know who it is actualy by.

Posted on Tuesday, April 20, 2004 - 08:39 pm:      
Shabnam ji!
Aap muskuraate hue kitni achchi lagti hain!to lijiye kuchh aur arz kar raha hoon:

Yun to har lamha uska hi deedar karta hoon,
use dekhne ki chahat fir bhi badti jaati hai.

Har saans ke saath uske aur kareeb ho jaata hoon,
vo hawa ban kar jism mein behti jaati hai.

Jidher bhi rukh karta hoon,udhar hi nikal padta hoon,
mere aashiyane se har raah uski dehliz tak jaati hai.

Zubaan hum bhi nahin kholte,kehte vo bhi kuchh nahin,
aankhon hi aankhon mein fir bhi bahot baatein ho jaati hain.

Ik pal ki judaai bhi ab bardasht nahin hoti,
ye tanhaai mujhe andar hi andar khaye jaati hai.
Logged
natural
Guest
«Reply #55 on: July 26, 2005, 12:31:49 PM »
Reply with quote
Hi...... for whom are you writing this.........I couldnt' understand.........

Please clarify...................... Usual Smile
Logged
HumTum
Guest
«Reply #56 on: July 26, 2005, 07:57:40 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "natural"
Hi...... for whom are you writing this.........I couldnt' understand.........

Please clarify...................... Usual Smile


hi ... r u saying to me or to whom ... couldn't quiet get ya !!  if you r saying to me then wht u wanna know :?:
Logged
HumTum
Guest
«Reply #57 on: July 26, 2005, 08:03:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "plagiarism"
Give credit where it is due
http://www.ebazm.com/discus/messages/4/3388.html?1082615468
When someone says that its a realy nice ghazal, dont just say thanks and take credit, let them know who it is actualy by.


Adaab Parteek ji .....  how u dunne ? as  i have clarified to you in another post of mine.... so i think i don't need to say you same thing here. :D !!! take care !!!
Logged
Pages: 1 2 3 [4]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 09, 2024, 01:47:26 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.1 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer