^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Jiya

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♪♪ Hote Tum Kangan Ke Moti,
Har Pal Main Tumhe Khankaati...
Nupur Hote Tum Meri Paayal Ke,
Yun Jhum-Jhum Tumhe Chhankaati...
Ye Roop Nikharta Har-Din Tumse,
Aur Tumhe Main Khud Par Sajaati...
Ek Tinke Bhar ki Doori Na Hoti,
Mera Har Gehena Bas Tumhe Banaati...!!! ♪♪

***************************************** Jiya...


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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2010, 09:09:18 AM »

Wah wah very beautiful creation Jiya ji.bahut khoob icon_thumleft


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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2010, 03:15:21 PM »

Bahut khoob Jiya Ji


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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2010, 08:35:31 PM »

bahut bahut pyaar bhara hai aapki kavita hai... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne... bahut khoob...

tum ghata hoti, main tumhaare saaye me gum ho jaata,
tum barish hoti, main tumhaare boondon se naha leta,
na tum dur hoti mujhse , na main tumse dur kabhi hota,
tum saanse hoti, main tumhe apni zindagi bana leta...


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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2010, 02:43:27 AM »

WAH WAH KYA BAAAT HAI BAHUT BADIYA JIYA JI.....

KYA KARUN MEH HEERE MOTI
KYA KARUN MEH CHANDI SONA
MUJHKO BAS APNA "JIYA" KAHENA
TUJHKO SAMJHUNGI "MERA GEHNA"...


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2010, 06:06:06 AM »

bohat bohat khoob Jiya ji....... bohat khoobsoorat.
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very nice reply klaskar ji and cara ji... Applause


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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2010, 10:50:17 AM »

thanx a lot Saurabh ji...!!!

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 10, 2010, 06:06:06 AM

bohat bohat khoob Jiya ji....... bohat khoobsoorat.
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very nice reply klaskar ji and cara ji... Applause


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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2010, 02:57:18 PM »

Quote from: Jiya on May 09, 2010, 08:13:35 AM

Jiyaaaaaa Sis.. Bahut hi Pyaare Ehasaas Yahan Bikhere hain aapne.. Ek ek Lafz PYaar bhara likha hai.. Behad khubsoorati se apne Jazzbaaton ko pesh kiya hai...

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2010, 03:32:49 PM »

buhat he khoobsurat poem.. chhoti see but asar chhornay wali..i appreciate...


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Jiya

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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2010, 09:25:20 AM »

Thanks a lot.... Madhuwesh ji.. Rajesh ji.. Cara ji, Kapil ji, Surabh ji, VB JI and Mann my bro.....
koshi karungi ki aage bhi isi tarah aapko meri poems pasand aaye... Usual Smile


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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2010, 09:49:32 AM »

Quote from: klaskar on May 09, 2010, 08:35:31 PM

very nice lines.... bohot khoob.... Usual Smile

Ghata to bas Bahaana hai tujhe Zamaane se Chhupaane ke liye,
Din Raat Barasu Baarish ki Boonde ban tujhme Samaane ke liye,
Nahin chahti ke Ozhal ho tu Ek Pal ke liye bhi in Aankho se meri,
Aur tu kho jaata hai Khayaalo me hi mere mujhe Azmaane ke liye....

********************************************************* Jiya...


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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 09:26:03 PM »

Thank u so much Jiya ji.... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

maine khudko tumhaare julfon ke kaale ghane baadalon me chhipa rakha hai,
apni parchhai ko maine tumhaare hi nasheele nayanon me chhipa rakha hai,
kabhi kabhi ye soch ke main pareshaan hota hoon ki main kahaan hoon abhi,
samajh nahi paata main ki maine khudko tumhaare dil me chhipa rakha hai...

Quote from: Jiya on May 15, 2010, 09:49:32 AM

very nice lines.... bohot khoob.... Usual Smile


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madhuwesh

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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2010, 09:50:04 PM »

Bahut khoob Kapil ji.lovely lines. icon_thumleft


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Re: ^v^v^ Mera Gehena ^v^v^

«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2010, 09:53:23 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2010, 09:50:04 PM

Bahut khoob Kapil ji.lovely lines. icon_thumleft


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