WAFA-0-HAYA

by jimmi on April 27, 2007, 09:55:46 AM
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WAFA-0-HAYA
Dilber ne kaha aik roz dilruba se
kabhi milo tum mujhey is adda se
nazar aaey esse rukh-e-zeba tera
chand nikalta hey jesse kali ghata se
kab tak tarsoon mein deed ko teri
kar lo toba ab tu tum bhi jafaa se
mana keh sharam hey hayaa ka taqaza
esse tu nah imtehan lo mujh se sharma ke
churra ke daman kahan tak jaogey tum
maang liya hey meine tumko apne Khuda se
waqt ne kar diya tum ko mujhse door
rahoon ga ik roz sab fasle mein mita ke
seiaha andheri raat mein sochta hoon kash
tum bhi aa jao ab sharm-0-haya bhula ke
chat pe makan ki apne muntazir hey tera jimmi
aao mil bethein aaj tu hum chupp chuppa ke
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*DeSi KuRi WaLaIti sTyLe*
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2007, 03:12:45 PM »
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awesome
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Aansoo
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2007, 05:05:17 PM »
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Very Nicely presented the feelings

Jimmi Ji ... taareef k kaabil kalaam

keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2007, 09:24:53 AM »
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Quote from: "*DeSi KuRi WaLaIti sTyLe*"
awesome[/quote thank you very much
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2007, 09:25:36 AM »
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Quote from: "Aansoo"
Very Nicely presented the feelings

Jimmi Ji ... taareef k kaabil kalaam

keep writing

thax a lot
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2007, 07:22:21 AM »
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WAFA-0-HAYA
Dilber ne kaha aik roz dilruba se
kabhi milo tum mujhey is adda se
nazar aaey esse rukh-e-zeba tera
chand nikalta hey jesse kali ghata se
kab tak tarsoon mein deed ko teri
kar lo toba ab tu tum bhi jafaa se
mana keh sharam hey hayaa ka taqaza
esse tu nah imtehan lo mujh se sharma ke
churra ke daman kahan tak jaogey tum
maang liya hey meine tumko apne Khuda se
waqt ne kar diya tum ko mujhse door
rahoon ga ik roz sab fasle mein mita ke
seiaha andheri raat mein sochta hoon kash
tum bhi aa jao ab sharm-0-haya bhula ke
chat pe makan ki apne muntazir hey tera jimmi
aao mil bethein aaj tu hum chupp chuppa ke



Hmm again a nice collection.   i would like to give.. 7.5/10 Keep writing....
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