Waqt ki aankh se dekho to yeh bahut puraanii lagti hai

by Brijinder on June 30, 2010, 08:30:46 PM
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Waqt ki aankh se  dekho to yeh bahut puraanii lagti hai
Teray meray ishq ki baat ab faqt kahani lagti hai

Ban ke lahu takhleeq mirii kii ragh ragh men woh behti hai
Larki jo naadaan kabhii ,kabhii bahut siyaanii lagti hai

Ek ahad par maiN ne guzaarii tanha apnii umr tamaam
Aaj koyii soche to shaayad bahut hairaanii lagti hai

Kehnay ko gar kuchh na ho to bas pachheedah kar daalo
Baat samajh aaye na yahaan woh hii ruuhaanii lagti hai

Aur haseeN hoNgay dunyaa men us se bhii baR kar lekin
Achi itni phir kyuN mujhko woh mar-jaani lagti hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2010, 11:03:42 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai Brijinder Ji
Aisa Lagta Hai Anjane Mein Aapne Humare Dil Ki Baat Likhdi

Bahut Hi Umda Janaab...Hazaron Dad.
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2010, 09:45:13 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Brijinder ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2010, 05:20:19 PM »
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bohut accha ,,.....
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2010, 04:36:33 AM »
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Waqt ki aankh se  dekho to yeh bahut puraanii lagti hai
Teray meray ishq ki baat ab faqt kahani lagti hai

Ban ke lahu takhleeq mirii kii ragh ragh men woh behti hai
Larki jo naadaan kabhii ,kabhii bahut siyaanii lagti hai

Ek ahad par maiN ne guzaarii tanha apnii umr tamaam
Aaj koyii soche to shaayad bahut hairaanii lagti hai

Kehnay ko gar kuchh na ho to bas pachheedah kar daalo
Baat samajh aaye na yahaan woh hii ruuhaanii lagti hai

Aur haseeN hoNgay dunyaa men us se bhii baR kar lekin
Achi itni phir kyuN mujhko woh mar-jaani lagti hai
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2010, 01:21:02 PM »
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Subhan_allah mere bhai kya nayaab tohfa diya hai mehfil ko maza aa gaya aur sher to sach mano muskurahat le aa aaya chehre par.......


Kehnay ko gar kuchh na ho to bas pachheedah kar daalo
Baat samajh aaye na yahaan woh hii ruuhaanii lagti hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2010, 01:46:14 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Brijinderji aapki ye kavita humko Ruhaani lagti hai
Khoobsurat yeh Har ladke-ladki ki kahaani lagti hai



Waqt ki aankh se  dekho to yeh bahut puraanii lagti hai
Teray meray ishq ki baat ab faqt kahani lagti hai

Ban ke lahu takhleeq mirii kii ragh ragh men woh behti hai
Larki jo naadaan kabhii ,kabhii bahut siyaanii lagti hai

Ek ahad par maiN ne guzaarii tanha apnii umr tamaam
Aaj koyii soche to shaayad bahut hairaanii lagti hai

Kehnay ko gar kuchh na ho to bas pachheedah kar daalo
Baat samajh aaye na yahaan woh hii ruuhaanii lagti hai

Aur haseeN hoNgay dunyaa men us se bhii baR kar lekin
Achi itni phir kyuN mujhko woh mar-jaani lagti hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2010, 08:19:00 PM »
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I am moved by such beautiful expressions of appreciation.I hope this poem lingers in your mindes for quite some time and you share it with all your like minded friends.
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2010, 09:36:30 AM »
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 Thankyou ! you are always welcome....

I am moved by such beautiful expressions of appreciation.I hope this poem lingers in your mindes for quite some time and you share it with all your like minded friends.
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2010, 09:36:38 PM »
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वक्त की आँख से देखो तो ये बहुत पुरानी लगती है
तेरे मेरे इश्क की बात अब फ़क्त कहानी लगती है

बन के लहू तखलीक मेरी की रग रग में वो बहती है
लड़की जो नादान कभी कभी बहुत सयानी लगती है

एक अहद पर मैंने गुजारी तनहा अपनी उम्र तमाम
आज कोई सोचे तो शायद बहुत हैरानी लगती है

कहने को गर कुछ ना हो बस पेचीदा कर डालो
बात समझ आये या न आये वो ही  रूहानी लगती है

और हसीन होंगे दुनिया में उस से भी बढ कर लेकिन
अच्छी इतनी फिर क्यों मुझ को वो मर जानी लगती है

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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2010, 12:31:38 AM »
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i found ths poetry amazing. n the way u expressed it u made it beautiful. gud job.
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2010, 08:08:21 PM »
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I am thankful to both of you.
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