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------------Woh Kehti Thi.........!----------------
Woh kehti thi k anhkoon se kaher kab jaye ga akhir
Mein bola jis lamhe seene mein akhri sans jaye gi
Woh kehti thi sulagti hain jabeeno mein kion taqderein
Mein bola astanoo mein diye jaltey he rehtey hain
Woh kehti thi chehroon mein koi apna nahi milta
Mein kehta k kaye chehre apno mein miltey hain
Woh kehti na k kinaro per diye ab kion nahi jaltey??
Mein bola kinaro ne hawa se dosti ker li
Woh kehti thi hawa k haath mein kya hai ?bahla rakha
Mein bola jagmagatey sub diyoon ka faisla rakha
Woh kehti thi k dariya ki udasi se kaho gi kya?
Mein bola bus meri anhkein unhein per ker suna deyna
Woh kehti thi k zindan mein saba shab berh nahi ati
Mein bola or yahan tu sans beh aker nahi ati
Woh kehti k mere seeney mein sansein kaam hain.....teri yaad zaida hai
Mein bola ager yeh sach hai tu tu berbad zaida hai
Woh kehti thi meri sanso se tera dil dahrakta hai
Mein bola haan mera dil zad pe tofano ki rehta hai
Woh kehti thi k anhkon mein teri yeh roshni ka c?
Bohat besakta bola...k teri roh tak mein khud ko paya hai
Woh kehti thi meri anhkein tubhi mehroom madhum se
Mein thore waqfe se bola...mere under basi ho tum
Woh kehti thi bahla kya paoo gey mujh se juda ho ke?
Mein bola Gum tha tere saath mujhe ab khud se milna hai....!!
Woh kehti thi chalo ungli pe apne dard ko gin lain
Mein bola dard ki shidad se sharianey na kat jaein
Woh kehti thi sunaoo hal is shab ka jub hum bichrey
Mein bola thi woh a c shab..mein is shab tote k roya....!!
Woh kehti yaad hai us din tere kandhey pe roya mein
Mein bola aaj tak shane tere anso se khayal hain
Woh kehti thi tere naksh-e-pa mere rastoon pe ab beh hain
Mein bola mere rastoo per beh yeh dukh hayel hain
Woh kehti thi k zardo mein beh koi husan dehkta hai?
Mein bola ik zard mein kaye mahtab dehkey they
Kaha us ne k kab yeh zindagi khushbo lagi tujh ko?
Mein bola be khiali mein tujhe jab cho liya mein ne.........
Woh kehti thi k tum ne dobta soraj kabhi dehka ?
Mein bola haan teri anhkoon ko akser dobtey dehka hai
Woh kehti thi koi chehra jo tujh ko yaad ho ab tak?
Mein bola ik kanwal rukh pe bohat saher c anhkein thein
Woh kehti thi mujhe din k kinare booj lagtey hain
Mein bola haan! mujhe beh shaam se ab khauf ata hai.....
Woh kehti khawboon k dehlize pe kion ab beh jate ho
Mein bola is liye k neend ka dar...wa nahi milta
Woh kehti thi k khawboon ka badan kion kanj jasa hai?
Mein bola us liye jana hasrat ka laho Jahlkey
Woh kehti thi kabhi a sa huwa k neend toti ho?
Mein bola haan is lamhey mujhe jab yaad kerti ho....
Kaha us ne k meri jan teri yadein masalsil hain
Mein bola k is c bayes yeh rat jagey masalsil hain
Woh kehti thi k anhkoon se tumhain awaz deyti hoon
Mwin bola haan mujhe ansooo bikherney ki koi awaz ati hai
Woh boli raat k seene pe mein sir rakh k roti hoon
Mein bola haan....suna hai chand pechli shab ko roya hai
Woh kehti tere mathey per duain likhti rehti hoon
Mein bola...haan mujhe sansein teri mehsos hoti hai
Woh kehti thi k darhkan ka hai dil se fasla
Mein kuch pal souch ker bola Khuda or ik duaa jitna
Woh kehti thi lagaoo or duaa ka rabta kya hai....??
Mein bola bus wobeh jo rohoon ga jismoon se nata hai
Woh kehti thi..suno Sagar mujhe tum se mohabat hai
Mein bola jaan le ley gi lagaoo mein jo shidat hai
Woh kehti thi chalo katib se keh ker mang loon tum ko...!!
Mein us ki baat per chonka...mager kuch beh nahi boka.............!!
Plz do comment on this one coz i will acept them on my friends behaf whom's creation i m sharing with u...........!
With Love
Yours Truely
Sagar................!
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2004, 04:41:40 AM » |
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its nice love.......... very long rhymetic poem........ i liked it
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2004, 01:03:50 PM » |
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Good one lovebites!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2004, 02:56:16 PM » |
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bahut ache love
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2004, 04:14:19 PM » |
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this is very very nice
seriosly very souls tochable
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2004, 04:48:51 AM » |
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its nice love.......... very long rhymetic poem........ i liked it Thanks 4 ur comments i would forward them to the writer |
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2004, 04:50:53 AM » |
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Good one lovebites!!!! Bohat bohat Shukriya....................! |
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2004, 04:51:36 AM » |
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bahut ache love Thanks a lot................... |
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2004, 04:52:34 AM » |
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this is very very nice
seriosly very souls tochable Thanks 4 ur kind words.................... |
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2004, 01:11:25 PM » |
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excellent love..............nice wordings........
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2004, 01:16:20 PM » |
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awesome yaar lovebites
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«Reply #11 on: December 22, 2004, 01:46:32 PM » |
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excellent love..............nice wordings........ Thanks a lot...........! |
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«Reply #12 on: December 22, 2004, 01:47:24 PM » |
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awesome yaar lovebites Bohat shukriya...............! |
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2004, 01:50:16 PM » |
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Ik or din ki Shaam howi hai.....
Ik or shaam ki raat shoro hai....
Din mera tere intezar mein gusra
Shaam teri rah takti rehe hai
Raat ki chandi ab tu pehlney gi
Per tere didar ki koi khaber nahi......?
Intizar ki shama beh bujhney lagi hai
Dehk ley wada-shikan raat honey lagi hai
Filhal tu waqat asey kata Sagar ka
Phir beh ik umeed ki kiran baki hai
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2004, 05:58:12 PM » |
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ISHQ.....
KAHO TO TO LAFZ HAI
KAHO TO BANDAGI
SOCHO TO GAHERA SAGAR
DUBOO TO ZINDAGI
KARO TO AASAN
NIBHAO TO MUSKIL
BIKHARE TO SARA ZAMANA ...
...AUR... SIMATE TO DIRD DE DIL
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on eTI community..
