Who Kehti Thi...........(Comments Required)

by lovebites on December 21, 2004, 04:32:12 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 22, 2004, 06:30:59 PM »
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Ik or din ki Shaam howi hai.....
Ik or shaam ki raat shoro hai....

Din mera tere intezar mein gusra
Shaam teri rah takti rehe hai

Raat ki chandi ab tu pehlney gi
Per tere didar ki koi khaber nahi......?

Intizar ki shama beh bujhney lagi hai
Dehk ley wada-shikan raat honey lagi hai

Filhal tu waqat asey kata Sagar ka
Phir beh ik umeed ki kiran baki hai



end was nice rather than starting!
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«Reply #16 on: December 22, 2004, 06:32:41 PM »
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Quote from: "ishika gautam"
ISHQ.....
KAHO TO TO LAFZ HAI
KAHO TO BANDAGI
SOCHO TO GAHERA SAGAR
DUBOO TO ZINDAGI
KARO TO AASAN
NIBHAO TO MUSKIL
BIKHARE TO SARA ZAMANA ...
...AUR... SIMATE TO DIRD DE DIL


nice wrk ishika ji... i think its not ur native or is it?
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«Reply #17 on: December 22, 2004, 06:55:54 PM »
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gud work!

 :D
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«Reply #18 on: December 22, 2004, 07:49:29 PM »
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Ik or din ki Shaam howi hai.....
Ik or shaam ki raat shoro hai....

Din mera tere intezar mein gusra
Shaam teri rah takti rehe hai

Raat ki chandi ab tu pehlney gi
Per tere didar ki koi khaber nahi......?

Intizar ki shama beh bujhney lagi hai
Dehk ley wada-shikan raat honey lagi hai

Filhal tu waqat asey kata Sagar ka
Phir beh ik umeed ki kiran baki hai



end was nice rather than starting!


HuMm~! thanks yaar behtey behtey yaad agiya type ker diya...........!

Shukriya......................!
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«Reply #19 on: December 22, 2004, 07:50:20 PM »
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gud work!

 :D


Thanks Meena....................!
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«Reply #20 on: December 23, 2004, 10:19:47 PM »
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Another effort by me plz do let me know abt ur comments

Raat k pechley paher ik ahat si hoti hai
Jasey khazan ki rut mein bahar uterti hai

Dil k kis c kone mein,dabi howi ik chingari
Aag lagati hai,tarpati hai,jalti hai....Anjum

Maloon hai tujhe k woh be-wafa hai......
Phir kion us ik he chehre ko talashta hai

Najane is kader asas kab se hoon............!
Muskura k dehkey jo koi,Ankh ber ati hai

Zindagi ki ka c dehlize pe garha hoon
Ik dard se sukoon ki tawakoo hai

Tanhaion mein teri he hansi gonjey herso
Jo be-wafa he nahi dil shakin beh hai

Chahatoon k desh se jab beh gusra hoon
Ik naye he maut,kis c ko martey dehka hai

Tera shar chore beh ik mudat ho gi lakin
Situm ger tujhe se pyar mujhe ajj beh hai

Zalim teri sitam gari ko kya naam deyte...
Ik umeed pe shama roshan aaj beh hai
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ishika gautam
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«Reply #21 on: December 24, 2004, 01:53:47 PM »
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very nice sagar....good work
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lovebites
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«Reply #22 on: December 24, 2004, 03:49:48 PM »
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very nice sagar....good work



Thanks & Shukriya...................!
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Meena
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«Reply #23 on: December 24, 2004, 05:50:51 PM »
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bohot khub!

 :D
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #24 on: December 24, 2004, 06:33:02 PM »
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Another effort by me plz do let me know abt ur comments

Raat k pechley paher ik ahat si hoti hai
Jasey khazan ki rut mein bahar uterti hai

Dil k kis c kone mein,dabi howi ik chingari
Aag lagati hai,tarpati hai,jalti hai....Anjum

Maloon hai tujhe k woh be-wafa hai......
Phir kion us ik he chehre ko talashta hai

Najane is kader asas kab se hoon............!
Muskura k dehkey jo koi,Ankh ber ati hai

Zindagi ki ka c dehlize pe garha hoon
Ik dard se sukoon ki tawakoo hai

Tanhaion mein teri he hansi gonjey herso
Jo be-wafa he nahi dil shakin beh hai

Chahatoon k desh se jab beh gusra hoon
Ik naye he maut,kis c ko martey dehka hai

Tera shar chore beh ik mudat ho gi lakin
Situm ger tujhe se pyar mujhe ajj beh hai

Zalim teri sitam gari ko kya naam deyte...
Ik umeed pe shama roshan aaj beh hai



very nice love


gud effort
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«Reply #25 on: December 25, 2004, 02:21:40 PM »
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Very Nice Lovebites!!!
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«Reply #26 on: December 26, 2004, 11:51:14 AM »
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Another effort by me plz do let me know abt ur comments

Raat k pechley paher ik ahat si hoti hai
Jasey khazan ki rut mein bahar uterti hai

Dil k kis c kone mein,dabi howi ik chingari
Aag lagati hai,tarpati hai,jalti hai....Anjum

Maloon hai tujhe k woh be-wafa hai......
Phir kion us ik he chehre ko talashta hai

Najane is kader asas kab se hoon............!
Muskura k dehkey jo koi,Ankh ber ati hai

Zindagi ki ka c dehlize pe garha hoon
Ik dard se sukoon ki tawakoo hai

Tanhaion mein teri he hansi gonjey herso
Jo be-wafa he nahi dil shakin beh hai

Chahatoon k desh se jab beh gusra hoon
Ik naye he maut,kis c ko martey dehka hai

Tera shar chore beh ik mudat ho gi lakin
Situm ger tujhe se pyar mujhe ajj beh hai

Zalim teri sitam gari ko kya naam deyte...
Ik umeed pe shama roshan aaj beh hai



very nice love


gud effort


Thanks..............!
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«Reply #27 on: December 26, 2004, 11:51:55 AM »
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Very Nice Lovebites!!!



Shukriya..................!
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«Reply #28 on: December 26, 2004, 11:53:27 AM »
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bohot khub!

 :D


Thanku.................. :lol:
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«Reply #29 on: December 26, 2004, 12:03:18 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhh........gr8888888888888888888888888888 8888888888.....luvbite...sagar....Usual Smile
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