wo ada bhi kya ajib thi... "manjum"

by manjum on January 14, 2011, 05:03:54 AM
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Wo ada bhi kya ajib thi jo sidhe dil main utar gai.
Yahi hadsa to wo chij thi jo meri zindgi hi badal gai.

Basa ek jahan khwabon ka basi ek duniyan khyalon ki,
Inhen dekhkar meri aankhen bhi ab jagne se mukar gai.

Jinhe khojte rahe umra bhar wo khushi mili mili nahin,
Jo thin khushian mere hath se wo fisal ke jane kidhar gai.

Na hai dar ki wo kho jayege na hai aarjoo use pane ki,
Ek nazar jo nazar main sama gai meri zaingi hi sanwar gai.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2011, 05:07:14 AM »
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its quit impressive manju ji........

charo para aache lage.....aur sabse aacha 1st wala he......

simple words with a good flow........keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2011, 05:09:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya matrixji...
dauen dete rahe sath rahen..

shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2011, 05:18:16 AM »
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wawwwww
sachh kahun na to mujhe aaj tumhare shayri me gazabb ki Maqbuliyat nazar aaai.
wah kya kamaaaaaaaaalz hai janab.
kya shabd hain kya feeling hai aur ---
jaane do kaafi hai itna.
haha
Very good poem Manju
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2011, 05:20:43 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji...

dauye dete arhen..
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2011, 11:18:11 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on January 14, 2011, 05:03:54 AM
Wo ada bhi kya ajib thi jo sidhe dil main utar gai.
Yahi hadsa to wo chij thi jo meri zindgi hi badal gai.

Basa ek jahan khwabon ka basi ek duniyan khyalon ki,
Inhen dekhkar meri aankhen bhi ab jagne se mukar gai.

Jinhe khojte rahe umra bhar wo khushi mili mili nahin,
Jo thin khushian mere hath se wo fisal ke jane kidhar gai.

Na hai dar ki wo kho jayege na hai aarjoo use pane ki,
Ek nazar jo nazar main sama gai meri zaingi hi sanwar gai.

manju "mann"

Kya baat hai manju mann ji bahut umda likha hai..
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2011, 12:18:16 PM »
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shukriya.... brokenbyluvji..

sath rahen
khush rahen
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2011, 04:02:55 PM »
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kya baat hai manjum ji bahut achha likha hai aapne...

Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2011, 06:22:19 PM »
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mastam mast likha hai manju ji..
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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2011, 09:56:13 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Manjum ji,kamaal ki peshkash hai,excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2011, 04:12:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya.... Intazarji....

daad dete rahiye.

khush rahie
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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2011, 04:13:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasakji....

sath rahen daad dete rahen..

shukriya..
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2011, 04:15:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya... madhuweshji...

sath rahen...

khush rahen..
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«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2011, 05:58:57 AM »
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umda -- Manju ji bahut khoob likha.
khus rahen

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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2011, 06:28:47 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kbji... shukriya...

 aapki line bhi khub hai....

bachana kahan chahte hain khud ko unki adaaon se..
ham to khud unke kadamo main dil rakh ke aaye hain..

daad dijie janab...
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