-----/// Wo apna pataa bataana bhool gaye /// ----- Hriday

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jaate jaate wo humein apna pata bataana bhool gaye,
aur hum hain jo unki yaad me muskuraana bhool gaye,

mile the us khwaab se kabhi aashiqon ki mehfil mein,
ab apna ye haal hai ki mehfilon me jaana bhool gaye,

chaand si chamak thi usme suraj ke jaisa hi tez tha,
ab apna ye haal hai ki hum diyaa jalaana bhool gaye,

peenaa humein sharaab tha maikhane tak jaayen kaise,
maikhaane tak jaane ka bahaanaa banaanaa bhool gaye,

sharaabi unke honth the, nasheeli unki aankhein thi,
jab se unko dekha hai hum hosh me rehnaa bhool gaye,

pehle jab hum likhte the tab ban jaate the geet magar,
jabse unko dekha hai hum ghazal banaanaa bhool gaye,

nikle the unko dhundne par hum kaise unko dhundenge,
dhundte dhundte unko hum apna hi thikaanaa bhool gaye...


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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2012, 07:19:00 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 05, 2012, 06:54:27 PM
jaate jaate wo humein apna pata bataana bhool gaye,
aur hum hain jo unki yaad me muskuraana bhool gaye, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mile the us khwaab se kabhi aashiqon ki mehfil mein,
ab apna ye haal hai ki mehfilon me jaana bhool gaye, Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley

chaand si chamak thi usme suraj ke jaisa hi tez tha,
ab apna ye haal hai ki hum diyaa jalaana bhool gaye,
Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley

peenaa humein sharaab tha maikhane tak jaayen kaise,
maikhaane tak jaane ka bahaanaa banaanaa bhool gaye,
behatreen Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

sharaabi unke honth the, nasheeli unki aankhein thi,
jab se unko dekha hai hum hosh me rehnaa bhool gaye, WAAH WAAH

pehle jab hum likhte the tab ban jaate the geet magar,
jabse unko dekha hai hum ghazal banaanaa bhool gaye,

nikle the unko dhundne par hum kaise unko dhundenge,
dhundte dhundte unko hum apna hi thikaanaa bhool gaye...[/color]
   

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har sher umda aur bahut asar...hazaaron daad aapko..
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2012, 12:28:42 AM »
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bahut umda hriday jee  bas yu hi likhte rahiye Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2012, 03:04:22 AM »
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Bhut sundar.
Bhut maza aaya parne me.
Janab aap bhuut achcha likhte h.
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2012, 05:30:11 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2012, 05:34:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob hriday ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2012, 06:16:23 AM »
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bahut khobb....realllly gooood....hridayji....Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2012, 12:57:51 PM »
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waahwaah hriday ji dheron daad
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2012, 05:10:57 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 05, 2012, 06:54:27 PM
jaate jaate wo humein apna pata bataana bhool gaye,
aur hum hain jo unki yaad me muskuraana bhool gaye,

mile the us khwaab se kabhi aashiqon ki mehfil mein,
ab apna ye haal hai ki mehfilon me jaana bhool gaye,

chaand si chamak thi usme suraj ke jaisa hi tez tha,
ab apna ye haal hai ki hum diyaa jalaana bhool gaye,

peenaa humein sharaab tha maikhane tak jaayen kaise,
maikhaane tak jaane ka bahaanaa banaanaa bhool gaye,

sharaabi unke honth the, nasheeli unki aankhein thi,
jab se unko dekha hai hum hosh me rehnaa bhool gaye,

pehle jab hum likhte the tab ban jaate the geet magar,
jabse unko dekha hai hum ghazal banaanaa bhool gaye,

nikle the unko dhundne par hum kaise unko dhundenge,
dhundte dhundte unko hum apna hi thikaanaa bhool gaye...


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Waaaaaaaaaaah! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Hriday ji, kya kahne!
Kho gaye aapki gazal mein aise
log taliyan bajana bhool gaye.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2012, 07:11:51 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 05, 2012, 06:54:27 PM
jaate jaate wo humein apna pata bataana bhool gaye,
aur hum hain jo unki yaad me muskuraana bhool gaye,

mile the us khwaab se kabhi aashiqon ki mehfil mein,
ab apna ye haal hai ki mehfilon me jaana bhool gaye,

chaand si chamak thi usme suraj ke jaisa hi tez tha,
ab apna ye haal hai ki hum diyaa jalaana bhool gaye,

peenaa humein sharaab tha maikhane tak jaayen kaise,
maikhaane tak jaane ka bahaanaa banaanaa bhool gaye,

sharaabi unke honth the, nasheeli unki aankhein thi,
jab se unko dekha hai hum hosh me rehnaa bhool gaye,

pehle jab hum likhte the tab ban jaate the geet magar,
jabse unko dekha hai hum ghazal banaanaa bhool gaye,

nikle the unko dhundne par hum kaise unko dhundenge,
dhundte dhundte unko hum apna hi thikaanaa bhool gaye...


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waah ...bohat khoob
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2012, 04:40:25 PM »
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 Applause Applause Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2012, 09:53:58 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2012, 04:48:55 PM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat hai Kapil Bhai.. aapki Yeh kahaani kuch apni si lagti hai dost... dil ko chhoo gai aapki Yeh Gazal.. Bahut Bahut Umda aur Lajawab peshkash Hai.. dil se Mubaaraqbaad is shaandaar Qalaam Ke Liye.. Applause Applause Applause

Dil se dheron Daad...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2012, 04:54:00 PM »
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bahut khoob hridayji...
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lajawaaab sir ... bahut hi khoob likha hai ..

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