-----/// Wo apna pataa bataana bhool gaye /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 05, 2012, 06:54:27 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 09, 2012, 06:21:28 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa I_W ji.... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya...!!!

Quote from: injured.warrior on April 05, 2012, 07:19:00 PM
har sher umda aur bahut asar...hazaaron daad aapko..
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«Reply #16 on: April 09, 2012, 06:37:34 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on April 05, 2012, 06:54:27 PM
jaate jaate wo humein apna pata bataana bhool gaye,
aur hum hain jo unki yaad me muskuraana bhool gaye,
khyaalo.N mein aise gum rahe yaad dilanaa bhool gaye
mile the us khwaab se kabhi aashiqon ki mehfil mein,
ab apna ye haal hai ki mehfilon me jaana bhool gaye,
good.......! Applause Applause Applause
chaand si chamak thi usme suraj ke jaisa hi tez tha,
ab apna ye haal hai ki hum diyaa jalaana bhool gaye,
nice........! Applause Applause
peenaa humein sharaab tha maikhane tak jaayen kaise,
maikhaane tak jaane ka hum aaj banaanaa bhool gaye,
 good.........!
sharaabi unke honth the, nasheeli unki aankhein thi,
jab se unko dekha hai hum hosh me [aanaa[/color] bhool gaye,
very good..........
pehle jab hum likhte the tab ban jaate the geet magar,
jabse unko dekha hai hum ghazal banaanaa bhool gaye,
 Applause Applause Applause :clap:hum ghazal likhnaa bhool gaye.
nikle the unko dhundne par hum kaise unko dhundenge,
dhundte dhundte unko hum apna hi thikaanaa bhool gaye...[/color][/b]

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
*****HRIDAY*****

very good hriday........!
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«Reply #17 on: April 11, 2012, 04:45:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa MKV ji....!!!

Quote from: mkv on April 06, 2012, 12:28:42 AM
bahut umda hriday jee  bas yu hi likhte rahiye Applause
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«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2012, 05:38:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parvana ji....!!!

Quote from: Parvana shan on April 06, 2012, 03:04:22 AM
Bhut sundar.
Bhut maza aaya parne me.
Janab aap bhuut achcha likhte h.
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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2012, 01:14:10 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Qais ji...!!!

Quote from: Qais on April 06, 2012, 05:30:11 AM
Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2012, 01:15:08 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Pankaj ji....!!!

Quote from: pankajwfs on April 06, 2012, 05:34:26 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob hriday ji
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«Reply #21 on: April 19, 2012, 03:39:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Dolly ji....!!!

Quote from: dolly on April 06, 2012, 06:16:23 AM
bahut khobb....realllly gooood....hridayji....Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: April 19, 2012, 07:48:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on April 06, 2012, 12:57:51 PM
waahwaah hriday ji dheron daad
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«Reply #23 on: April 20, 2012, 06:39:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Usha ji.... itni saari taaliyon ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa... humein aapke comments ka intezaar rahega ....!!!

Quote from: usha rajesh on April 07, 2012, 05:10:57 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaah! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Hriday ji, kya kahne!
Kho gaye aapki gazal mein aise
log taliyan bajana bhool gaye.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #24 on: April 20, 2012, 07:20:47 PM »
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thanks a lot Laaiba ji....!!!

Quote from: laaiba on April 07, 2012, 07:11:51 AM
waah ...bohat khoob
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«Reply #25 on: April 20, 2012, 07:23:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Iftakhar ji....!!!

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 07, 2012, 04:40:25 PM
Applause Applause Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #26 on: April 23, 2012, 05:45:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Pramod ji....!!!

Quote from: Pramod singh on April 08, 2012, 09:53:58 AM
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«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2012, 05:46:40 PM »
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Mann ji ... itni saari taarifein ... ufffff.... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon... bahut bahut shukriyaa Mann ji....!!!

Quote from: Mann on April 08, 2012, 04:48:55 PM
Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat hai Kapil Bhai.. aapki Yeh kahaani kuch apni si lagti hai dost... dil ko chhoo gai aapki Yeh Gazal.. Bahut Bahut Umda aur Lajawab peshkash Hai.. dil se Mubaaraqbaad is shaandaar Qalaam Ke Liye.. Applause Applause Applause

Dil se dheron Daad...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #28 on: April 23, 2012, 06:11:27 PM »
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waah ji waah....kya baat hai....aaj  toh jaise har taraf ishq ka jaadu sa chhaya hua hai......aur aankhiri alfaazon ne toh  dil ko hi chhoo liya...
unka pata dhoondne to nikle lekin apna hi thikana bhool baithe....sach hi kha hai kisi ne..ye mohabbat bhi jaane kya hai...insaan khud ko hi bhool jaata hai...
aapki ye nazm parrkar d lines yaad aa gayi.....
Teri har jhalak mein dikhta Rab,aks khuda ka tujhme dekha  karu
Tu bas gaya meri rooh tak,ab tujhse kaise juda rahu,ab tujhse kaise juda rahu..
dheron daad kabul karein Hriday ji...poore hriday se hi likhi hai aapne ye nazm.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley......
 
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«Reply #29 on: April 24, 2012, 11:57:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Theyash ji....!!!

Quote from: theyash on April 08, 2012, 04:54:00 PM
bahut khoob hridayji...
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