-----/// Wo apna pataa bataana bhool gaye /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 05, 2012, 06:54:27 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 25, 2012, 01:50:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Jasbir ji....!!!

lajawaaab sir ... bahut hi khoob likha hai ..

jasbir singh
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«Reply #31 on: April 25, 2012, 03:02:03 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sheba ji....!!!

very good hriday........!
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«Reply #32 on: April 25, 2012, 03:09:17 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Baat hai..Bahut bahut Khoooooob Hriday ji..

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«Reply #33 on: April 27, 2012, 03:51:34 PM »
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Thank you soooooooooooooo much Nikhaar ji.... bahut bahut shukriyaa jo aapne mere is koshish ko apna keemti waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya... aur saath hi itne pyaar bhare comments diye.... thank you soooooooo much....!!!

aur aapne jo lines share kiye hain wo bhi bahut pyaare hain. Humne aapki daad dil se qubool ki.... bahut bahut shukriyaa....!!!

waah ji waah....kya baat hai....aaj  toh jaise har taraf ishq ka jaadu sa chhaya hua hai......aur aankhiri alfaazon ne toh  dil ko hi chhoo liya...
unka pata dhoondne to nikle lekin apna hi thikana bhool baithe....sach hi kha hai kisi ne..ye mohabbat bhi jaane kya hai...insaan khud ko hi bhool jaata hai...
aapki ye nazm parrkar d lines yaad aa gayi.....
Teri har jhalak mein dikhta Rab,aks khuda ka tujhme dekha  karu
Tu bas gaya meri rooh tak,ab tujhse kaise juda rahu,ab tujhse kaise juda rahu..
dheron daad kabul karein Hriday ji...poore hriday se hi likhi hai aapne ye nazm.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley......
 
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«Reply #34 on: April 27, 2012, 04:04:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Khwaish ji....!!!

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Kya Baat hai..Bahut bahut Khoooooob Hriday ji..

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