<>*Wo Baat Nahin*<>

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<>*Wo Baat Nahin*<>

Banai ek tasveer kuch lakeer khinch k
Kuch apni kalpana k rang bhar ke

Tujhe utaarna chaha maine kaagaz pe apne rang bharkar
Par meri tasveer me kahin bhi yaar wo baat nahin

Wo baat jo teri muskurahut me hai
Wo baat jo teri aankhon ki shararat me hai

Wo baat jo tere har andaaz me hain
Wo baat jo har ek  teri baat me hai

Wo rang tere labon ka wo shokhi nazar ki
Wo itrana  jab main manaun tujhe ruth kar

Wo gusse se tamtamata chehra tera
Ufffff wo pyaar se bheegi aankhein teri

Wo baahein jo thaam le mujhe girne se
Wo  kadam jo badhte mujhe pane ko hi

Kahin kuch bhi to na utaar pai main apne rangon me
Kaise main samaun ek pyaar k samandar ko ek tasveer me.. Huh?
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 03:31:17 PM »
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Kasak -di aap ki likhne ki speed itnee tej hai na,,,,,mere tariff k shab...itne fast nikal nahi paate....
kya kahu you are" kavita-e- aazam"....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


<>*Wo Baat Nahin*<>

Banai ek tasveer kuch lakeer khinch k
Kuch apni kalpana k rang bhar ke

Tujhe utaarna chaha maine kaagaz pe apne rang bharkar
Par meri tasveer me kahin bhi yaar wo baat nahin

Wo baat jo teri muskurahut me hai
Wo baat jo teri aankhon ki shararat me hai

Wo baat jo tere har andaaz me hain
Wo baat jo har ek  teri baat me hai

Wo rang tere labon ka wo shokhi nazar ki
Wo itrana  jab main manaun tujhe ruth kar

Wo gusse se tamtamata chehra tera
Ufffff wo pyaar se bheegi aankhein teri

Wo baahein jo thaam le mujhe girne se
Wo  kadam jo badhte mujhe pane ko hi

Kahin kuch bhi to na utaar pai main apne rangon me
Kaise main samaun ek pyaar k samandar ko ek tasveer me.. Huh?


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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 03:37:33 PM »
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Wah Kasak Jee ........... Kia tarif ke phool bandhe hai...
SahiN hai tasveer meiN woh baat kahaaN rahti hai, Jo baat ruberu hone meiN hai..... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...... Daad

Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....

Baad tere jaane zahen me teri guftagu rah gayi
Tu to na raha per teri tasveer ruberu rah gayi
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 05:01:31 PM »
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Beintehaan Khubsoorat Ehasaas Yahan Pesh Kiye Hain Anamika Ji.. Pyaar bhare Jazzbaaton Ko Alfaazon me Behad khubsoorati se Utara hai.. Har ek Jumla apne Aap Me Mohabbat Bayan kar raha Hai.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 05:08:56 PM »
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In malaon ko itna khoobsoorti se piroti ho aur itna jaldi se
ki bas ham aatamvibhor ho jaate hai pa.dhkar

Wonderful creation, Just too good
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 07:42:02 PM »
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Kasak -di aap ki likhne ki speed itnee tej hai na,,,,,mere tariff k shab...itne fast nikal nahi paate....
kya kahu you are" kavita-e- aazam"....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley





koyal tumhari taaliyon ki gadgadahut kanon me gunjj rahi hai.......
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 07:43:20 PM »
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Wah Kasak Jee ........... Kia tarif ke phool bandhe hai...
SahiN hai tasveer meiN woh baat kahaaN rahti hai, Jo baat ruberu hone meiN hai..... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...... Daad

Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....

Baad tere jaane zahen me teri guftagu rah gayi
Tu to na raha per teri tasveer ruberu rah gayi
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bht pyara sher kaha hai aapne parwaz ji.....dil khush khush ho gaya
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 07:45:01 PM »
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Beintehaan Khubsoorat Ehasaas Yahan Pesh Kiye Hain Anamika Ji.. Pyaar bhare Jazzbaaton Ko Alfaazon me Behad khubsoorati se Utara hai.. Har ek Jumla apne Aap Me Mohabbat Bayan kar raha Hai.. Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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mann jiii bht bht bht shukriya k aapne meri is koshish ko pasand kiya......wakai aapke replies ka wait mujhe hamesha rehta hai...

thnx for appreciating my work....
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 07:45:47 PM »
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In malaon ko itna khoobsoorti se piriti ho aur itna jaldi se
ki bas ham aatamvibhor ho jaate hai pa.dhkar

Wonderful creation, Just too good

shukriya shukriya shukriya sir ji.....
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«Reply #9 on: August 15, 2010, 07:52:59 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Kasak ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2010, 07:55:32 PM »
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sirf taaliyan ......Huh???
iska reply aapke style me hi dijiyega...

aapke aise replies achche nahn lagte hume...
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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2010, 09:26:24 PM »
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fir ye lijiye...

leke laali us suraj se main tere hothon ko laal karta hoon,
leke paani sagar se main tere aankhon ko giley karta hoon,
leke shyaam rang baadal se teri aankhon pe kaajal lagaata hoon,
barish ki boondon se main tere aankhon ko sajaata hoon,
aankhein band karke main tere pyaar ki moorat banaata hoon,
apne khwaabon me main teri pyaari si surat sajaata hoon,

chaand ki chaandni se tere maathe ki bindi sajaata hoon,
indradhanush ke har rang se main tujhko yun nehlaata hoon,
os ki boondon se tere hothon ko main bhigota hoon,
kamal ke phoolon se main tere gaalon ko rangta hoon,
kuch aise hi pyaari si main teri moorat banaata hoon,
apne khwaabon me main teri pyaari surat sajaata hoon,

bijli ki har chamak se tere hothon ki muskaan sajaata hoon,
har raat khwaabon me apne main tujhko gale lagaata hoon,
apne hi khwaabon me main tere rang me yun rang jaata hoon,
teri chaahat ke bandhan se main tujhse hi bandh jaata hoon,
har raat khwaab me main teri pyaar ki moorat banaata hoon,
khul jaati jab neend hai meri, main mann hi mann pachhtaata hoon...
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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2010, 03:43:39 AM »
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jab itni pyari murat ho to kavita kaise na itni pyari ho klaskar ji..... icon_flower
hum to aapki pyari si murat aur iss pyari si uski manmohak tareef pe...mugdh hoagye ji....na jane kitni bar padh li ye kavita humne... icon_thumleft
its just wowww...... love4
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2010, 04:02:06 AM »
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fir ye lijiye...

leke laali us suraj se main tere hothon ko laal karta hoon,
leke paani sagar se main tere aankhon ko giley karta hoon,
leke shyaam rang baadal se teri aankhon pe kaajal lagaata hoon,
barish ki boondon se main tere aankhon ko sajaata hoon,
aankhein band karke main tere pyaar ki moorat banaata hoon,
apne khwaabon me main teri pyaari si surat sajaata hoon,

chaand ki chaandni se tere maathe ki bindi sajaata hoon,
indradhanush ke har rang se main tujhko yun nehlaata hoon,
os ki boondon se tere hothon ko main bhigota hoon,
kamal ke phoolon se main tere gaalon ko rangta hoon,
kuch aise hi pyaari si main teri moorat banaata hoon,
apne khwaabon me main teri pyaari surat sajaata hoon,

bijli ki har chamak se tere hothon ki muskaan sajaata hoon,
har raat khwaabon me apne main tujhko gale lagaata hoon,
apne hi khwaabon me main tere rang me yun rang jaata hoon,
teri chaahat ke bandhan se main tujhse hi bandh jaata hoon,
har raat khwaab me main teri pyaar ki moorat banaata hoon,
khul jaati jab neend hai meri, main mann hi mann pachhtaata hoon...


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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2010, 01:10:53 PM »
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kasak ji........

apne jo tasveer banayi he wo mene to dekhi nahi ......

but apne kaha ki usme wo baat nahi.........but apne jo likha he usme wo sab baat he jo us tasveer me apne chaha so i sure ki us tasveer me wo sab baat hogi hi.....kyuki aap banaye aur usme wo baat na ho ye hona possible nahi lagta.........

bht hi pyari poetry ...bht hi sidhe saral shabdo me likhi hui........

eternal feelings is more impresive then external anger....he na kasak ji kya aap bhi manti he ye Huh?

apki is post me eternal feeilngs itni aachi he ki apka anger "wo baat nahi" uske agey nahi tik raha......u r ultimate
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