Wo dilkash har lamhey har shakhs key pahloo mein rahtaa hai!

by abdbundeli on February 13, 2011, 08:18:13 AM
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Chhupaa wo bhi hamaarey sok key dariye mein bahtaa hai!
Nahin ham hi, 'abd', wo bhi hamaarey saath sahtaa hai!
Jisey ham khojtey hain baarahaa duniyaa mein jaa-jaa kar,
Wo dilkash har lamhey har shakhs key pahloo mein rahtaa hai!

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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2011, 08:40:55 AM »
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kamaal hai--
kamaal ke ehsaas
kamaal ke alfaaz.
kamaal ka andaaz

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sir ji---aap kamaal ho
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2011, 07:11:24 AM »
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wah abdji.... bahut umda
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2011, 07:48:58 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 13, 2011, 08:40:55 AM
kamaal hai--
kamaal ke ehsaas
kamaal ke alfaaz.
kamaal ka andaaz

Usual SmileUsual Smile

sir ji---aap kamaal ho

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Nirala ji!

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Quote from: manjum on February 14, 2011, 07:11:24 AM
wah abdji.... bahut umda
Bahut-bahut shukriyah manjum ji!

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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2011, 08:23:50 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 13, 2011, 08:18:13 AM
Chhupaa wo bhi hamaarey sok key dariye mein bahtaa hai!
Nahin ham hi, 'abd', wo bhi hamaarey saath sahtaa hai!
Jisey ham khojtey hain baarahaa duniyaa mein jaa-jaa kar,
Wo dilkash har lamhey har shakhs key pahloo mein rahtaa hai!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji.Lajawaab

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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2011, 09:59:34 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 14, 2011, 08:23:50 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji.Lajawaab

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah khwaish ji!

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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2011, 10:36:35 AM »
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ABD ji badi gehri soch se bhari hui 4 lines aapki.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
lijiye wahi bhaav dusre shabdon mai....

Mere dukh mai wo bhee har-pal shareek hota hai
Izhaar na kare par wo bhi mere sang-2 rota hai
Kyu dhundta hai khuda ko mandir-o-masjjidd mai
Wo tou har lamhaa tere he pahloo mai rehta hai


Quote from: abdbundeli on February 13, 2011, 08:18:13 AM
Chhupaa wo bhi hamaarey sok key dariye mein bahtaa hai!
Nahin ham hi, 'abd', wo bhi hamaarey saath sahtaa hai!
Jisey ham khojtey hain baarahaa duniyaa mein jaa-jaa kar,
Wo dilkash har lamhey har shakhs key pahloo mein rahtaa hai!

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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2011, 01:52:05 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 14, 2011, 10:36:35 AM
ABD ji badi gehri soch se bhari hui 4 lines aapki.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
lijiye wahi bhaav dusre shabdon mai....

Mere dukh mai wo bhee har-pal shareek hota hai
Izhaar na kare par wo bhi mere sang-2 rota hai
Kyu dhundta hai khuda ko mandir-o-masjjidd mai
Wo tou har lamhaa tere he pahloo mai rehta hai


Bahut-bahut shukriyah KOYAL ji! Aapney bhi, apney alfaaz mein, lagbhag wahee kahaa hai!

Yahee baat main ney, apnee aik puraanee gazal key aik sher mein bhi kahee thee: mulaahizah ho!

'Main ney har zarrey mein mahsoos kiyaa hai US ko;
 Log kahtey hain, 'Khudaa rahtaa hai Madeeney mein!'

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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2011, 08:07:35 PM »
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Bahut Khub Likha Hai ABD JI
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2011, 05:08:48 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 15, 2011, 08:07:35 PM
Bahut Khub Likha Hai ABD JI


Bahut-bahut shukriyah Rishi ji!

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