<>*Wo hai mere paas har pal *<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 15, 2010, 12:32:03 PM
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<>*Wo  hai mere paas har pal *<>

Wo  hai mere paas har pal
Fir bhi  mere paas nahin hai

Wo  hai mere saath hardum
Fir bhi mere saath nahin hai

Mere sang chale saaya bankar
Lekin ujaale ki usee darkaar nahin hai

Hai hawa jo rehti har pal mere sang
Fir bhi dikhta uska wajuud nahin hai

Wo sir par hai jaise aasmaan khula
Usse kuch bhi ab mera chhupa nahin hai

Wo basta hai ruuh me meri
Isiliye  nazar kisiko aata nahin hai...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 12:46:40 PM »
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hmmm... soch raha hoon ab ek Hindi dictionary lena hi padega ya koi Hindi coaching class join kar lu.. aajkal aapki taarif ke liye words nahi milte mujhe... bahut khoobsurti se aapne is kavita ko likha hai.. dil se nahi likha , aapne to dil hi nikaal ke rakh diya hai.... ufffff....
Applause Applause Applause

dur hoke bhi jo paas lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,
paraaya hoke bhi jo apna sa lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,

sukhe me bhi jab barsaat lage, barsaat me jab dhoop lage,
har mausam jab apna sa lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,

andheron me jo saaya sa lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,
kore kaagaz pe jo tasveer dikhe, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,

khwaab bhi jo poora sa lage, sach bhi jo sapna sa lage,
raat aur din jab sab ek lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,

dard bhi jab dawa sa lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai,
zeher bhi jab meetha sa lage, usi ka naam mohabbat hai...
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 12:52:25 PM »
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maashaaa alaahhhh..........
no words for this klaskar ji........

beautiful poem....

isi ka naam mahobbat hai.......

jab dil ki baatein aajyen kalam pe
isi ka naam mahobbat hai
jab dil na rahe apna bas me
isi ka naam mahobbat hai[/colo
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 12:56:34 PM »
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Thanx a lot Kasak ji....!!!

mohabbat aaj hum tumhaare naam kar jayenge,
mohabbat se mohabbat hum aaj kar jaayenge...
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 12:59:44 PM »
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bht khubb ji

mahobbat zindagi me sirf ek baar ki jati hai
ye wo shai nahin jo roz roz ho jaye........
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 01:05:31 PM »
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mohabbat humne bhi ek baar ki hai , ye roz ki baat nahi,
par usi mohabbat ko hum roz chaahte hain, isme to koi buri baat nahi...
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 02:26:44 PM »
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Yeh khayaal bohat effective raha........

Mere sang chale saaya bankar
Lekin ujaale ki usee darkaar nahin hai

Daad kabool kare....
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 05:50:23 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on August 15, 2010, 02:26:44 PM
Yeh khayaal bohat effective raha........

Mere sang chale saaya bankar
Lekin ujaale ki usee darkaar nahin hai

Daad kabool kare....

shukriya ghayal ji...aapne pasand farmaya
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 06:23:27 PM »
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Bahut khoobsoorat peshkash hai Anamika Ji
N equally good response Kapil
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«Reply #9 on: August 15, 2010, 06:30:37 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 15, 2010, 06:23:27 PM
Bahut khoobsoorat peshkash hai Anamika Ji
N equally good response Kapil

thnx sir ji...
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2010, 07:12:01 PM »
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thanx a lot Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 15, 2010, 06:23:27 PM
Bahut khoobsoorat peshkash hai Anamika Ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2010, 07:15:40 PM »
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klaskar ji ab se hamari sawal jawab wali post pe sare thnx aap hi kahiyega.....
aap bht achchese thnx kehte ho....
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«Reply #12 on: August 15, 2010, 07:19:22 PM »
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ji bilkul nahi... dono milke kahenge... warna padhne waale padhna chhod denge ye soch ke ki koi reply nahi karta... waise mujhe ye kaam dene ke liye "Thanx a lot"... par main ye kaam accept nahi karunga...

waise shayad aap ek cheez miss karti hain yahaan yo me... mujhe aisa lagta hai... aapke kaunse post pe reply aaya hai.. ye aapko dekhna aata hai kya...agar aapke absence me koi reply karta hai to.... bura mat maaniye par jaane q mujhe aisa lagta hai...
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nahin aata.....itna achche se abhi yo me samjha hi nahin kuch...

abhi smileys to aapko puchi thi...aap hi bata dijiye kaise para karna hai...
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«Reply #14 on: August 15, 2010, 07:33:10 PM »
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Top left hand side pe "Shayari Home" pe click karna hai... fir left side me aapko apna profile pic dikhega.... uske niche hoga ...."show replies".... ye wo replies hain jo aapne abhi tak padhe nahi hain ya respond nahi kiya... ya we posts hain jispe aapne comment kiya aur aapke comment ke baad kisi aur ne comment kiya ho....

waise ye sab jaankaaaari ki baatein aap personal message ke through bhi kar sakte hain.... kisi ke bhi profile name pe click kijiye.... sabse niche aa jaayega... "Send this member a personal message"... bas open, write and send...!!!

Aur kuch janna ho to aap bata dena mujhe....main koshish karunga help karne ki...jahaan tak mujhe pata hoga...!!!
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