wo hum say koyi rabta nahi rakhta

by chitralsony on April 01, 2009, 07:47:13 PM
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agercha wo hum say rabta nahi rakhta
hamay bhulhanay ka be hosala nahi rakhta
gayay dino may wo pass ta mairay kitna
jo aj mairi koyi khaber hi nahi rakhta
may kysay keron osko apnay drd say agah
jo sodo ziyaan ka hisaab hi nahi rakhta
wo mairi qaid ka ehwal kiya jan payay ga
azad mansh hay koyi qafas nahi rakhta
bhla ka hosala hay os shakhs may ,hina
ganwa kay piyar ko apnay shikwa nahi rakhta
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009, 10:45:26 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Taiba Ji
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2009, 02:17:27 AM »
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Lovely Taiba ji  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2009, 04:02:38 PM »
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hame bhulane ka hausla bhi nahi rakhta...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Subhan_allah pehla sher itna wazandar ke pure kalam pe havi raha, is sher ko bohat hifazat se rakhna aise sher roz roz nahi bante.


Uske chehre me dekhta hu main apna chehra
Ghar me apne main aaina nahi rakhta

Dard zakhm tanahiee aasoo aur bebasi
Baad tere main Inke alawa kisi se rishta nahi rakhta

Yu to mil jayege tujhko bohat duniya me TAIBA
Mera dawa hain magar koi GHAYEL sa dil nahi rakhta
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2009, 08:16:47 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Taiba Ji
thank u so much sweet sister
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chitralsony
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2009, 08:18:35 PM »
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Lovely Taiba ji  Applause
thank u roja dear
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2009, 08:24:49 PM »
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hame bhulane ka hausla bhi nahi rakhta...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Subhan_allah pehla sher itna wazandar ke pure kalam pe havi raha, is sher ko bohat hifazat se rakhna aise sher roz roz nahi bante.


Uski chehre me dekhta hu main apna chehra
Ghar me apne main aaina nahi rakhta

Dard zakhm tanahiee aasoo aur bebasi
Baad tere main Inke alawa kisi se rishta nahi rakhta

Yu to mil jayege tujhko bohat duniya me TAIBA
Mera dawa hain magar koi GHAYEL sa dil nahi rakhta
shokriya ghayel ji aur waqi may janab hum mantay hain apka dil waqi may nayab hay janab coz jis dil may feelings ko itna khobsorat ruop dainay ka dhang ho wo nayab hi hota hay .and really bhot umda  ashaar hain hain bhot khob ghayel ji waqi kamal kr diya app nay qaqi may mehbob ka chehra hi ayeenay ka sa lagta hay hamay
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2009, 02:00:18 AM »
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hame bhulane ka hausla bhi nahi rakhta...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Subhan_allah pehla sher itna wazandar ke pure kalam pe havi raha, is sher ko bohat hifazat se rakhna aise sher roz roz nahi bante.


Uski chehre me dekhta hu main apna chehra
Ghar me apne main aaina nahi rakhta

Dard zakhm tanahiee aasoo aur bebasi
Baad tere main Inke alawa kisi se rishta nahi rakhta

Yu to mil jayege tujhko bohat duniya me TAIBA
Mera dawa hain magar koi GHAYEL sa dil nahi rakhta

Wah wah... bahut accha likha hai aapne Sajid ji...

(@Taiba... Jaise Sajid ji ne kaha Yeh shayri aapka bahut hi badiya bana hai. Hifazat se rakhiyega... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2009, 05:00:15 AM »
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bahoot khoob Taiba ji..

Kya khoob likha hai sajid ji aapne bhi .
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2009, 07:36:31 AM »
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bahoot khoob Taiba ji..

Kya khoob likha hai sajid ji aapne bhi .
thank u so much sophi ji ,GOD bless u
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2009, 07:47:19 AM »
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Nice one chitralsony...

agercha wo hum say rabta nahi rakhta
hamay bhulhanay ka be hosala nahi rakhta
gayay dino may wo pass ta mairay kitna
jo aj mairi koyi khaber hi nahi rakhta
may kysay keron osko apnay drd say agah
jo sodo ziyaan ka hisaab hi nahi rakhta
wo mairi qaid ka ehwal kiya jan payay ga
azad mansh hay koyi qafas nahi rakhta
bhla ka hosala hay os shakhs may ,hina
ganwa kay piyar ko apnay shikwa nahi rakhta


LOVED LAST LINE THE MOST...

GANWA KE PYAAR KO APNE SHIKWA NAHI RAKHTA... :CLAP:
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 10:33:46 AM »
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Nice one chitralsony...

LOVED LAST LINE THE MOST...

GANWA KE PYAAR KO APNE SHIKWA NAHI RAKHTA... :CLAP:
thank u angel ji ,sachay jazon ko zuban dainay ki koshish ki app sub nay mesoos kiya ,mashkoor hun
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 09:40:46 AM »
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agercha wo hum say rabta nahi rakhta
hamay bhulhanay ka be hosala nahi rakhta
gayay dino may wo pass ta mairay kitna
jo aj mairi koyi khaber hi nahi rakhta
may kysay keron osko apnay drd say agah
jo sodo ziyaan ka hisaab hi nahi rakhta
wo mairi qaid ka ehwal kiya jan payay ga
azad mansh hay koyi qafas nahi rakhta
bhla ka hosala hay os shakhs may ,hina
ganwa kay piyar ko apnay shikwa nahi rakhta

Nice one Chitra Ji
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chitralsony
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2009, 02:56:33 PM »
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thank u so much rajesh harish je
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Yaash
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2011, 06:10:33 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Chitralsony Ji
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