"Wo meri hai"

by amarhellboy on October 04, 2008, 11:39:53 AM
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       Wo meri hai uska "Naam" koi or naale,
        Is bhigati aankho ka "Jaam" koi or naale,
         Kuch issliye bhi maine uska hath na chouda,
          Wo gir jaaye to use "Thaam" koi or naale.
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 12:26:16 PM »
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Bahut khoobsoorat likha apne Amar ji.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 01:23:07 PM »
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       Wo meri hai uska "Naam" koi or naale,
        Is bhigati aankho ka "Jaam" koi or naale,
         Kuch issliye bhi maine uska hath na chouda,
          Wo gir jaaye to use "Thaam" koi or naale.

Bahut accha likha hai.. possessivness dikhayi di..
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 01:30:19 PM »
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bohat khoob sonia ne ekdam correct tareef ki hain.
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2008, 12:24:43 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai.. possessivness dikhayi di..

THANK'S



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