wo pal....wo laal gulal(college poem)

by nidhi_yadein on March 13, 2005, 09:41:26 AM
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"Wo pal aaj bhi yaad aate hain,
  jab tum achanak saamne aa jate thhe,
  labon se kuch na keh ke bhi,
  dil mera dhadka jaate thhe,
  wo shaam aaj bhi yaad aati hai,
  jab apne apne raste jaate waqt,
  tum mera azaaez gaana gungunate huye,
  mujhse bohat kuch keh jaate thhe,
  aur main palkein jhukaye.....,
  bas aage badhti jaati thhi,
  wo ratein aaj bhi yaad aati hain,
  jab main tumhe yaad karti thhi,
  aur tumhari blank call aa jati thhi,
  tum bhi mujhe hi yaad kar rahe ho,
  is baat ka ehsaas kara jaati thhi,
  hamare bohat se dost ek hi thhe,
  shayad yahi ek kadi thhi,
  jo hame jod ke rakhti thhi,
  kabhi hamari dosti nahi rahi,
  jab tumhari ankho me dekha,
  kuch aur hi main paati thhi,
  wo pal aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe,
  jab maine tumhe koi aur samajh kar,
  tumhare chehre pe cake laga diya thha,
  aur jab tumhara chehra saamne aaya,
  mera wo ghabra ke sorry kehna,
  aur tumhara wo nazron se kuch kehna,
  bhulana chaha maine sab kuch,
  par holi wali baat kaise bhoolti,
  wo holi yaad hai mujhe,
  jab is baar,tum mujhe,
  koi aur samajh baithe thhe,
  laal gulal lagaya thha tumne,
  jo meri maang me gira thha,
  aur phir se nazron ka milna,
  akhir wo sab kya thha?Huh?
  is baar na tumne kuch bola,
  na main kuch bol payi thhi,
  waqt jaise ruk gaya ho.....,
  kuch aisi madhoshi chhai thhi,
  tumhari ankho se saaf laga mujhe,
  ki tumne izhaar kiya hai....,
  meri ankho me tumne bhi paya,
  tumhare izhaar ka ikraar kiya hai,
  phir jab main us din ghar aayi,
  nayi duniya tere roop me payi,
  sab kuch naya naya sa thha,
  sare mausam badle badle se thhe,
  sab kuch na kuch keh rahe thhe,
  mujhe kuch sunai hi nahi de raha thha,
  akhir kya thha wo sama?Huh?
  us din nazron ka milna,
  jaise waqt ne li angdaai thhi,
  poori raat jisne pareshan kiya,
  is baar wo meri tanhai thhi,
  maine bhi soch liya thha,
  tum bolo ya na bolo.......,
  kal main kar doongi izhaar,
  apni zuban se kahoongi tumse,
  bayan karungi kitna hai pyar,
  bas subah ka thha intezar,
  apne pyar pe ho gaya thha aetbaar,
  aur wo subah bhi aa hi gayi...,
  suraj ki kiranein khil hi gayin,
  ek alag si kasak thhi aaj dil me,
  intezar ho tumhara jaise sadiyon se,
  phir jab main pohanchi college me,
  tum na mile kahin bhi mujhe,
  wo pal yaad hai mujhe..........,
  jab tumhare na milne pe,
  bechaini chhai thhi dil pe,
  intezar karti rahi main tumhara,
  tum na aaye lekin phir bhi,
  phir udaas nikli main college se,
  isse accha kya kuch aur ho sakta thha?,
  tumhe paya maine raaste mein,
  bas,phir ruk gayin meri dhadkanein,
  par is baar bohat kuch kehna thha mujhe,
  khud ko kaabu me rakha maine,
  tumne mujhe rukne ko kaha,
  na kaha hota,to bhi ruk jati us din main,
  phir se ek baar nazrein milin,
  aur ek saath zuban se baat nikli,
  I LOVE YOU ..........................................mujhe chod ke na jaana kabhi,
  wo pal aaj bhi yaad hai,
  jab zindagi basi meri teri bahon me kahin."
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2005, 10:20:14 AM »
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BUHAT KHOOB



JITNI BHI TAREEF KROON KAM HAI AAJ



NIDHI U R SUPERB
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2005, 10:34:58 AM »
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thankyou so much naveed. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2005, 10:36:39 AM »
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YOU ARE WELCOME
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2005, 11:22:06 AM »
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omg ! nidhi this is wonderful...got so engrossed reading it...khatam hui jab hosh aaya hehe
neat work ! keeptup ~ Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2005, 11:26:03 AM »
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SANYA BEHNA WELCOME
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2005, 01:08:32 PM »
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Thank u so much sanya. Usual Smile

Jab maine likhi thhi tab main bhi kho gayi thhi,isi story me,jab mom ne awaaz di tab hosh aaya. :lol:
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2005, 03:40:53 PM »
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arre wahhhhhhhh nidhi!!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2005, 03:46:23 PM »
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wah nidhi ji,
ek dum haquikat sa lag raha hai............................
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2005, 04:43:10 PM »
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Thank u meena :D

Thank u pandit,ek thought hai bas. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2005, 06:38:26 PM »
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wonderfull Nidhi...tum bahut hi acha likhti ho...

kitna simple aur deep izhaar hai apni feelings ka...

toooooooo good...
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2005, 06:57:49 PM »
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very nice poem
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2005, 07:41:23 PM »
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WHERE IS NEHA?
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«Reply #13 on: March 14, 2005, 05:37:41 AM »
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wonderfull Nidhi...tum bahut hi acha likhti ho...

kitna simple aur deep izhaar hai apni feelings ka...

toooooooo good...


Thank u so much nikki. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 14, 2005, 05:41:42 AM »
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very nice poem


Thanx Dev ji.
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