~~"WO RAAT LA DO MUJHE"~~

by k.shael on January 14, 2009, 11:12:59 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 15, 2009, 06:58:24 AM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on January 15, 2009, 06:49:04 AM
bahut khoob shally ji.......presentation aur lines dono bahut acche hai...... Clapping Smiley  Applause   Thumbs UP

Shukriya Fairy Ji,
Pehli baar aap aaye hamare thread pe shukriya,

Shally.
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«Reply #16 on: January 15, 2009, 07:00:13 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 15, 2009, 06:51:51 AM
Bahut Khoob Shally Ji.



Shukriya Prateek ji,

Aacha laga aapko apne thread me dekhkar,

Shally.
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«Reply #17 on: January 15, 2009, 07:34:58 AM »
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kya baat hai ---shallyji.....bahut hi pyaari likhi hai....

raat bar rakhu, tujh ko simat kar apne paas,wo raat la do mujhe,
pyaar ka karu barpur ehasaas,wo raat la do mujhe.
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«Reply #18 on: January 15, 2009, 07:42:54 AM »
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wow amazing design

and mind blowing poetryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dil ko chu gayi

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«Reply #19 on: January 15, 2009, 09:45:12 AM »
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Shally!  Applause Applause Applause
You've an affectionate mind midst a bold beloved's heart within your self, that is so well reflected in this small but lovely poem!
                                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #20 on: January 15, 2009, 09:55:29 AM »
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Bohat khoob Shally  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jis raat ki chahet tumne ki hain
Us raat me main bhi shamil hu
Jo milna hoga us raat me tumko
Us puri raat ka main haasil hu

                 -SG-
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«Reply #21 on: January 15, 2009, 10:08:34 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob shally dear Applause Applause Applause
aapki nazm aur aapka presentation dono kamaal hain

Mile jo dard mohabaat mein teri
sukoon wali woh raat lauta do mujhe

ek umeed si rehti hai tumse
woh hansi meri lauta do mujhe
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«Reply #22 on: January 15, 2009, 10:10:11 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 15, 2009, 09:55:29 AM
Bohat khoob Shally  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jis raat ki chahet tumne ki hain
Us raat me main bhi shamil hu
Jo milna hoga us raat me tumko
Us puri raat ka main haasil hu

                 -SG-

bahut khoob Sajid Sahab Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: January 15, 2009, 10:11:27 AM »
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Quote from: Anky on January 15, 2009, 07:42:54 AM
wow amazing design

and mind blowing poetryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dil ko chu gayi

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Shukriya Anky...

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: January 15, 2009, 10:26:18 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 15, 2009, 09:55:29 AM
Bohat khoob Shally  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jis raat ki chahet tumne ki hain
Us raat me main bhi shamil hu
Jo milna hoga us raat me tumko
Us puri raat ka main haasil hu

                 -SG-

VERY NICE GHAYEL

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #25 on: January 15, 2009, 10:26:55 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on January 15, 2009, 10:08:34 AM
bahut bahut khoob shally dear Applause Applause Applause
aapki nazm aur aapka presentation dono kamaal hain

Mile jo dard mohabaat mein teri
sukoon wali woh raat lauta do mujhe

ek umeed si rehti hai tumse
woh hansi meri lauta do mujhe

WAH WAH DIYA. BAHUT HI KHOOB KAHA

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #26 on: January 15, 2009, 10:29:20 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 15, 2009, 08:31:26 AM
Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Bohat Hi Umda Likha Hai Shael Ji Aapne
Mafi Chahta Hoon Dekhne Mein Derr Ho Gayi......
Aur Mein Abhi Jarur Rep Karta Par Abhi Mood Nahi Hai
Abhi Abhi Mein Waheed Bhai Ke Baare Mein Bad News Suni So
Sara Mood Kharab Ho Gaya Khair Baad Main Kuch Bana To Jarur Likhunga.

Shukriya Shihab,

I know mujhe bhi jab se pata chala hai man udaas ho gaya hai,

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: January 15, 2009, 10:30:12 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 15, 2009, 09:45:12 AM
Shally!  Applause Applause Applause
You've an affectionate mind midst a bold beloved's heart within your self, that is so well reflected in this small but lovely poem!
                                     - abd bundeli

Shukriya Abd ji,

Ur comment is very valueable for my thread,

Shally.
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«Reply #28 on: January 15, 2009, 10:36:32 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 15, 2009, 10:26:55 AM
WAH WAH DIYA. BAHUT HI KHOOB KAHA

JASBIR SINGH

bahut bahut shukriya Jasbir ji notworthy
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«Reply #29 on: January 15, 2009, 10:46:02 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 15, 2009, 09:55:29 AM
Bohat khoob Shally  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jis raat ki chahet tumne ki hain
Us raat me main bhi shamil hu
Jo milna hoga us raat me tumko
Us puri raat ka main haasil hu

                 -SG-


Shukriya Sajid Ji,

& nice lines from ur side 2,

Shally.
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