~~"WO RAAT LA DO MUJHE"~~

by k.shael on January 14, 2009, 11:12:59 AM
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«Reply #30 on: January 15, 2009, 10:47:31 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on January 15, 2009, 10:08:34 AM
bahut bahut khoob shally dear Applause Applause Applause
aapki nazm aur aapka presentation dono kamaal hain

Mile jo dard mohabaat mein teri
sukoon wali woh raat lauta do mujhe

ek umeed si rehti hai tumse
woh hansi meri lauta do mujhe


Shukriya Diya Dear,

& good lines from ur side 2,

Shally.
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«Reply #31 on: January 15, 2009, 10:48:11 AM »
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shukriya Shally dear
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k.shael
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«Reply #32 on: January 15, 2009, 11:03:45 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on January 15, 2009, 10:48:11 AM
shukriya Shally dear

Ur welcome diya dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #33 on: January 15, 2009, 11:13:02 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on January 15, 2009, 10:30:12 AM
Shukriya Abd ji,
Ur comment is very valueable for my thread,
Shally.
Shally!
You're welcome! So nice of you!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #34 on: January 15, 2009, 11:23:35 AM »
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Shally!
You're welcome! So nice of you!
            - abd bundeli

IT'S MY PLEASURE ABD JI,

SHALLY.
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«Reply #35 on: January 16, 2009, 07:59:09 PM »
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No words Shallyji
Ye kehna kam lag raha hai but kahe bina rah bhi nahi sakte
Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Woh Raat Bhi Aayegi

Duaa karenge, aapki har khwahish sachhayi me badal jayegi...
Dard ki raat beetegi khamoshi se,ummido ki nayi sehar muskurayegi...

Aankho aankho me pala hai jo dar tune,uski har sans tut jayegi...
Gujar gayi ghadi tanhayi ki,hausla rakh k uske baad ummido ki woh rat bhi aayegi...

~Pank~
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«Reply #36 on: January 17, 2009, 07:28:17 AM »
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gr8 work shally

aaja meri baahon main
tujhe pyaar kii saugaat de doon
jo teri hasrat thi oos raat kii
tujhe mein apni saari raat de doon
bhar loon tera chehra apni hatheliyon mein
teri palkon ko kucch aaraam de doon
raat bhar kehti rahe tu
main apni baaton ko bhi teri zubaan de doon
tu sar rakh kar so ja meri god mein
aa tujhko aisi raat de doon
tu khil jaaye phir subah ko gulab kii tarah
teri khushi k liye mehboob kahe toh apni jaan de doon
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«Reply #37 on: January 17, 2009, 07:30:34 AM »
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Bohat khoob shally dear...

Bohat khoob doston...
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«Reply #38 on: January 17, 2009, 08:28:13 AM »
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Waah Waah,.
Waah Shally Partner, Tussi To Yaara, Chaa Gayi Ho,.
Bohat Hi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,.
Pardhkar,.
Main To Romantic Ho Gaya,.

Nice One,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #39 on: January 17, 2009, 08:30:41 AM »
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Waah Salil Bhai,.
Tumne Bhi Bohat Achcha Likha Hai,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #40 on: January 17, 2009, 08:34:05 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 17, 2009, 08:30:41 AM
Waah Salil Bhai,.
Tumne Bhi Bohat Achcha Likha Hai,.
Nice One,.
thanks janasheen bhai aur honey di
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«Reply #41 on: January 17, 2009, 08:41:47 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 16, 2009, 07:59:09 PM
No words Shallyji
Ye kehna kam lag raha hai but kahe bina rah bhi nahi sakte
Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Woh Raat Bhi Aayegi

Duaa karenge, aapki har khwahish sachhayi me badal jayegi...
Dard ki raat beetegi khamoshi se,ummido ki nayi sehar muskurayegi...

Aankho aankho me pala hai jo dar tune,uski har sans tut jayegi...
Gujar gayi ghadi tanhayi ki,hausla rakh k uske baad ummido ki woh rat bhi aayegi...

~Pank~

Shukriya Pank Ji,

Aur bahut hi bhadiya reply kiya aapne bhi,

Agar kuch bana to zaroor reply karoongi,

Shally.
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«Reply #42 on: January 17, 2009, 08:42:57 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on January 17, 2009, 07:28:17 AM
gr8 work shally

aaja meri baahon main
tujhe pyaar kii saugaat de doon
jo teri hasrat thi oos raat kii
tujhe mein apni saari raat de doon
bhar loon tera chehra apni hatheliyon mein
teri palkon ko kucch aaraam de doon
raat bhar kehti rahe tu
main apni baaton ko bhi teri zubaan de doon
tu sar rakh kar so ja meri god mein
aa tujhko aisi raat de doon
tu khil jaaye phir subah ko gulab kii tarah
teri khushi k liye mehboob kahe toh apni jaan de doon



Shukriya Salil ji,

Aapne jo likha use padkar to aur bhi aacha mehsoos hua,

Shally.
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«Reply #43 on: January 17, 2009, 08:45:54 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 17, 2009, 07:30:34 AM
Bohat khoob shally dear...

Bohat khoob doston...

Shukriya Honey didi,

Shally.
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«Reply #44 on: January 17, 2009, 08:46:46 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 17, 2009, 08:28:13 AM
Waah Waah,.
Waah Shally Partner, Tussi To Yaara, Chaa Gayi Ho,.
Bohat Hi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,.
Pardhkar,.
Main To Romantic Ho Gaya,.

Nice One,.
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

Shukriya Azeem,

Shukriya ek aur baat ke liye,

Shally.
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