WO RAAT

by Jiya on February 29, 2008, 04:00:54 PM
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Wo Dilkash Jagmagaata Shamiyaana,
Bana Dil ka humaare jo Ashiyaana,
Har pal itna Haseen tha us raat,
Vapis lautne ka mila na koi bahaana.

Bas Kayaamat to tab huyi,
Jab Kajal Aankho ka humaari beheka,
Tabhi mili Nazaro se Nazar is tarah,
Aur palat ke unhone hume dekha,

Dekhte hi unki Nigaho mein,
Yun tik gayi thi unpe ye Nigaha,
Milta dekh hum dono ki Nazro ko,
Jaise puri Kayanaat humaara padh rahi thi Nikah.

Juban Khamosh hi rahi humaari,
Baate jo kar rahin thi ab Nigaahe humaari,
Koi parvah nahin thi ab hume is Duniya ki,
Ek usre ke Deedaar mein  guzar rahi thi wo raat humaari.

Bas yun dekhne ka Silsila chalta raha,
Aur Waqt tazi se aage nikalta raha,
Bas ab kuchh hi pal baaki the Didaar ke liye,
Ye soch ke hi dil bas darta raha.

Bina kuchh kahe, bina kuchh sune,
Wo yu hi chal diye,
Hum bhi unhe jaate huye dekh rahe the,
Apne hothon ko siye.

Bas dua hai ye rab se ki,
Kahin phir se Deedaar ho unka,
Abke mil ke bichhde na hum,
Yun milke pura ho armaan is dil ka.

..................................... Jiya...
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2008, 07:23:01 PM »
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wah Jiya kaya baat hai .. bahoot khoob!!!
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prmchawla
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2008, 10:46:12 AM »
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very nice
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2008, 02:42:48 AM »
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Bas Kayaamat to tab huyi,
Jab Kajal Aankho ka humaari beheka,
Tabhi mili Nazaro se Nazar is tarah,
Aur palat ke unhone hume dekha,

Dekhte hi unki Nigaho mein,
Yun tik gayi thi unpe ye Nigaha,
Milta dekh hum dono ki Nazro ko,
Jaise puri Kayanaat humaara padh rahi thi Nikah

Very good work Jiya...I liked the above lines... Keep flowing.
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Jiya
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2008, 08:14:21 AM »
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Thank u pooja didi,prmchawla ji aur roja ji ,,, apko pata hai main achha kyun likh paati hun kyun ki aap sabhi mujhe encourage karte hain,apreiate karte hain Usual Smile ...... aur sorry pls kafi dino baad  main yo par aayi ....thanx alot once again Usual Smile .
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honeyrose
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2008, 09:33:58 AM »
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Very nice jiya bohat acha likha hai.. Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2008, 04:13:32 PM »
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Wo Dilkash Jagmagaata Shamiyaana,
Bana Dil ka humaare jo Ashiyaana,
Har pal itna Haseen tha us raat,
Vapis lautne ka mila na koi bahaana.

Bas Kayaamat to tab huyi,
Jab Kajal Aankho ka humaari beheka,
Tabhi mili Nazaro se Nazar is tarah,
Aur palat ke unhone hume dekha,

Dekhte hi unki Nigaho mein,
Yun tik gayi thi unpe ye Nigaha,
Milta dekh hum dono ki Nazro ko,
Jaise puri Kayanaat humaara padh rahi thi Nikah.

Juban Khamosh hi rahi humaari,
Baate jo kar rahin thi ab Nigaahe humaari,
Koi parvah nahin thi ab hume is Duniya ki,
Ek usre ke Deedaar mein  guzar rahi thi wo raat humaari.

Bas yun dekhne ka Silsila chalta raha,
Aur Waqt tazi se aage nikalta raha,
Bas ab kuchh hi pal baaki the Didaar ke liye,
Ye soch ke hi dil bas darta raha.

Bina kuchh kahe, bina kuchh sune,
Wo yu hi chal diye,
Hum bhi unhe jaate huye dekh rahe the,
Apne hothon ko siye.

Bas dua hai ye rab se ki,
Kahin phir se Deedaar ho unka,
Abke mil ke bichhde na hum,
Yun milke pura ho armaan is dil ka.

..................................... Jiya...


Wonderful Jiya ! bohot achcha likha hai !
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2008, 05:44:52 AM »
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 Applause Applause

Wonderfull..!!
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Jiya
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2008, 08:15:31 AM »
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oh thank u honeyrose, talat ji and Gaurav ji. Usual Smile
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