wo shaam aayi thi

by vimmi singh on September 26, 2012, 08:17:56 AM
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Aap  aaye the  toh bahaar aayi thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi
Wo zarra zarra mahka tha
Dil ki pahli bauchhaar aayi thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi

Dil ki baaton ka silsila sa lagta tha
aap  nahi the fir bhi hone ka gumaan tha
har aahat par ye nazar unhe dhundhti  thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi

Wo rukh badalti hawa kaano me ghul jaati thi
Nazre wo takra kar, jaise kuchh kah jaati thi
Muhabbat ka diya kuchh yun jala tha
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi

Wo lamha ab door hai, kuchh kahne se mazbur hai
Dil tadapta hai , par rota nahi
Sukhe ashqon ki bhaasha koi samajhta nahi
Kabhi  toh baarish ki bhingi chaandni jagi thi
Ujle diye ki lau jagmagaayi thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi….
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2012, 08:22:05 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2012, 08:27:12 AM »
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shukriya soudagar ji.........  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2012, 08:28:37 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Bahut khoob umda khyalato se bhari hue lovely lovely lovely creation Vimmi ji,

Ek sher meri taraf se apki najar me :-

Aap Aaoge Toh Phoolon Ki Barsaat Karenge..

Mausam Ke Farishton Se Meri Baat Hui Hai...!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2012, 08:41:41 AM »
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dhanywaad , dhanywaad ..bahut bahut dhanywaad.. itni taarif ke liye... aur aapki sher wo toh laazwaab hai.........
shukriya Kaushal ji...... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2012, 08:43:32 AM »
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waah waah waah vimmi ji bohut khubsurat peshkash very nice ek rau apka hua
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2012, 08:49:51 AM »
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thank you very much saahill ji........ Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2012, 08:57:40 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on September 26, 2012, 08:41:41 AM
dhanywaad , dhanywaad ..bahut bahut dhanywaad.. itni taarif ke liye... aur aapki sher wo toh laazwaab hai.........
shukriya Kaushal ji...... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Apki shayari se hi hain inspire  hain and thanks u so much for appreciation Vimmi ji .
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2012, 09:08:41 AM »
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bahut sunder betee badhaai ho
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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2012, 09:41:32 AM »
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WAH VIMMI JI KAMAAL KI PESHKASH LAGI MUJHE,,,
 KEEP GOING Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2012, 09:43:18 AM »
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thank you saini sir ji........ Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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shukriya sahal ji......... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2012, 10:06:44 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on September 26, 2012, 08:17:56 AM
Aap  aaye the  toh bahaar aayi thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi
Wo zarra zarra mahka tha
Dil ki pahli bauchhaar aayi thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi

Dil ki baaton ka silsila sa lagta tha
aap  nahi the fir bhi hone ka gumaan tha
har aahat par ye nazar unhe dhundhti  thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi

Wo rukh badalti hawa kaano me ghul jaati thi
Nazre wo takra kar, jaise kuchh kah jaati thi
Muhabbat ka diya kuchh yun jala tha
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi

Wo lamha ab door hai, kuchh kahne se mazbur hai
Dil tadapta hai , par rota nahi
Sukhe ashqon ki bhaasha koi samajhta nahi
Kabhi  toh baarish ki bhingi chaandni jagi thi
Ujle diye ki lau jagmagaayi thi
Jaane kidhar se wo shaam aayi thi….


well said
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2012, 10:16:35 AM »
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Thank you...... marhoom ji.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2012, 02:29:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob...
bahut badhiya...keep it up
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