Wo shakhs to Tabinda Sitaron ki tarha tha

by Lovely-Prince on December 07, 2014, 01:42:55 PM
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Wo shakhs to Tabinda Sitaron ki tarha tha
Mash'hor jo Dushman mein b Yaaron ki tarha tha

Us Shakhs k Aany sy Khil Uthti thi hr cheez
Wo Shakhs to jaisy k Baharon ki tarha tha

Sunta tha Wo hr Baat brry Gor sy Meri
Rehta magr Chup Chaap Diwaron ki tarha tha

Us Shakhs k AasaAb to Pathar ki tarha thy
Ab Tota to bikhra wo Akhbaron ki tarha tha

Uljha huwa rhta hai Wo ik Mudat se
Wo Shakhs jo Pur-Nor Nzaron ki tarha tha......!
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2014, 01:49:42 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2014, 02:15:52 PM »
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very nicely written
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2014, 02:59:05 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoobsurat qalaam hai, DaaaaaaaaadD.
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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2014, 04:04:06 PM »
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waah waah bahut umdaa waah
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2014, 04:11:49 PM »
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shukriyaaa dosto
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2014, 06:12:12 PM »
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Wo shakhs to Tabinda Sitaron ki tarha tha
Mash'hor jo Dushman mein b Yaaron ki tarha tha

Us Shakhs k Aany sy Khil Uthti thi hr cheez
Wo Shakhs to jaisy k Baharon ki tarha tha

Sunta tha Wo hr Baat brry Gor sy Meri
Rehta magr Chup Chaap Diwaron ki tarha tha

Us Shakhs k AasaAb to Pathar ki tarha thy
Ab Tota to bikhra wo Akhbaron ki tarha tha

Uljha huwa rhta hai Wo ik Mudat se
Wo Shakhs jo Pur-Nor Nzaron ki tarha tha......!

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Bahut umdaa ghzal kahi hai, meri daad qubool farmayein........aakhri sher ka pahla misra " Uljha huwa rhta hai Wo ik Mudat se" me lafz Muddat misre ki rawani ko kam ker raha hai.....shayed yun kuch theek ho jaaye....: Uljha huwa dekha hai kai roz se usko"
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2014, 07:19:54 AM »
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Nice creation. Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2014, 07:18:57 AM »
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