----- /// Wo teri maathe ki bindi /// -----

by klaskar on May 18, 2010, 12:49:29 AM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 3674 times)
riyaz106
Guest
«Reply #15 on: May 19, 2010, 12:24:12 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahot khoob Kapil ji. Kya kahne.
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #16 on: May 19, 2010, 06:48:30 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...!!!

Wah Wah Kapil Nyc xpersion!!!!!!!!!!

Very very vll done .....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #17 on: May 19, 2010, 06:49:01 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah wah Kapil ji,bahut baddiya.apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobi se likha.excellent creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #18 on: May 19, 2010, 06:49:35 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Wah! Kya baat hai Kapil
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #19 on: May 19, 2010, 06:50:22 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...!!!

khoob bhut khoob.............



aslam
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #20 on: May 19, 2010, 06:50:50 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Bahot khoob Kapil ji. Kya kahne.
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #21 on: May 19, 2010, 07:35:22 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Bahut Khub Janab Klaskar Ji
Mehboob Ki Tahsin Se Bhari
Yeh Nazm Bahut Achchi Hai...


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #22 on: August 21, 2010, 03:56:20 AM »
Reply with quote
kya khubb tareef ki hai aapne apne mehbuub ki......waah ji wahh..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

sply mujhe ye  line bht achchi lagi

wo teri maathe ki bindi chaand pe jaise chaand bana ho...
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #23 on: August 21, 2010, 01:38:25 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.... aur jo line aapko pasand aayi hai usi ne mujhe ye poem likhne ke liye inspire kiya tha... wo jab bhi milti thi mujhse maathe pe safed bindi lagaake aati thi q ki mujhe bahut pasand tha... bas usi bindi ke baare me soch ke ye kavita likha tha... bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapko meri ye kavita pasand aayi.... shukriya ....!!!

kya khubb tareef ki hai aapne apne mehbuub ki......waah ji wahh..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

sply mujhe ye  line bht achchi lagi

wo teri maathe ki bindi chaand pe jaise chaand bana ho...

Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #24 on: August 21, 2010, 02:25:13 PM »
Reply with quote
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 09, 2024, 02:40:25 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.11 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer